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Essay about if information should be public freely or should remain confidential

2 - The instruction for this essay is "discuss both views and present your opinion". The writer is required to present...

Writing Feedbackmaximo79 - Feb 19, 2022Holt - Feb 19, 2022
SOME COUTRIES ALLOW OLD PEOPLE TO WORK TO ANY AGE THAT THEY WANT (WRITING TASK 2)

2 - Scoring is provided as a part of our private review services. Contact us privately for details. Wrong...

Writing Feedbackcongthanh - Feb 19, 2022Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Motivation Letter for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Food engineering

3 - I think it is better to merge these paragraphs which have the same contents to make your assay with...

Lettersjklkoskal - Feb 18, 2022Loren - Feb 19, 2022
Work and study online - benefits and drawbacks

2 - The writer has not formatted his response properly. The topics cannot be discussed selectively as the 2 are...

Writing Feedbacklzlywyb - Feb 18, 2022Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Ielts task 2 Many people people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives

2 - This creates a topic reference inaccuracy. Review the original topic reference point. It uses"people" while the writer refers...

Writing Feedbackthienanh - Feb 18, 2022Holt - Feb 19, 2022
The proportion between Australian males and females who did exercise regularly - IELTS 1 - Bar chart

3 - @ Holt Thanks for your comment...

Writing Feedbackmaximo79 - Feb 18, 2022maximo79 - Feb 18, 2022
MIX CHART: The bar chart show the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses in 2009

2 - I can understand that the writer was aiming to create a complex sentence presentation by presenting 2 different...

Writing FeedbackBell Hoang - Feb 17, 2022Holt - Feb 17, 2022
Upon returning to Vietnam - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship

2 - you only need 2 paragraphs for your motivational letter. Merge the first and last paragraphs since the plans you...

Lettersnghiabui - Feb 17, 2022Holt - Feb 17, 2022
Consumption of three spreads_Writing task 1_Line graph report

2 - This is literally cut and paste from the original image. The result? Score deductions in the summary overview....

Writing FeedbackLoren - Feb 15, 2022Holt - Feb 16, 2022
In your opinion, how would an SI scholarship for master's studies in Sweden be valuable

4 - @Scholarship I believe this is not detailed enough. It looks like it was written by the applicant and then...

ScholarshipScholarship - Feb 15, 2022felixtobi - Feb 23, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Agree/Disagree - Cycling

2 - There are several problems with this prompt restatement + opinion presentation. The first, is that the original topic...

Writing Feedbackdinosaur_thn - Feb 15, 2022Holt - Feb 16, 2022
Serving for health - GKS graduate degree program, personal statement

3 - @ll12 Your paper is good, but it lacks some details about your traits of character, own achievements, and so...

Scholarshipll12 - Feb 15, 2022LLIMITT - Feb 16, 2022
Motivation letter for MSc in Business Analytics

2 - This paragraph is more geared towards a statement of purpose rather than a motivation letter since it describes...

Lettersfiorepaola - Feb 14, 2022Holt - Feb 15, 2022
OKP scholarship, study Master of Public Health (MPH): Health Systems Policy and Management track

2 - The infomation provided is a bit scattered in approach. The writer needs to focus the writing in a chronological...

ScholarshipAhmedd - Feb 14, 2022Holt - Feb 14, 2022
Money spent on books - [WRITING TASK 1] LINE GRAPH REPORT

4 - Here is my introduction: The line graph illustrates data statistics of book consumption in 5 countries: Germany, France,...

Writing Feedbackwhung17 - Feb 14, 2022maximo79 - Feb 19, 2022
Insurance company and accounting - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING GKS

3 - Helped me It also feels a little on the short side. Try to use more of the...

Scholarshipnitakajole - Feb 14, 2022aspb2022 - Feb 23, 2022
Because a patient's life can be more unpleasant than death, they should have a right to choose

3 - Personally, I opt for euthanasia and support your point of view, but you have to find a few more...

Research PapersCsbryant11 - Feb 13, 2022LLIMITT - Feb 14, 2022
Personal Statement for Rutgers University M.S. in Rehabilitation Counseling

2 - Based on the opening statement, you have provided the reasons why your interest in Rehab Counseling has grown into...

Graduaterachelying - Feb 13, 2022Holt - Feb 14, 2022
GKS - PERSONAL STATEMENT URBAN PLANNING/ENGINEERING

2 - The personal statement is weak as it does not present information in relation to the professional experience of the...

Scholarshipbeestory - Feb 13, 2022Holt - Feb 14, 2022
Motivation Letter for Sustainable Product Creation - Msc in Engineering

2 - It is always easiest to open with words of wisdom from someone else. It helps you tell the...

LettersEmjay - Feb 13, 2022Holt - Feb 14, 2022
The comparison of the figure of four electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework

2 - This information is not specified in the images provided. The writer will lose points for not accurately restating...

Writing Feedbackthanhthanhghghgh - Feb 13, 2022Holt - Feb 14, 2022
SOP on Field Robotics (outlining your reasons for enrolling in the program. The letter should clear)

2 - The reviewer is not interested in the opinion, observations, and views of non applicants. Do not highlight other...

ScholarshipRexe - Feb 12, 2022Holt - Feb 13, 2022
[WT2] The technology today makes the travel to isolated regions, such as the South Pole, possible

2 - Good response for a comparative essay. Sadly, your response is incorrect as it does not apply to the...

Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen425 - Feb 12, 2022Holt - Feb 13, 2022
Public health - Motivation letter review for scholarship

2 - Address them formally either as Dear Consortium or To the Consortium. It is more acceptable than using the...

LettersAhmedd - Feb 12, 2022Holt - Feb 12, 2022
Writing task 1 The bar charts illustrate the money spend on purchasing houses in England and London

4 - @thanhthanhghghgh I think it is acceptable as long as it supports to your idea....

Writing FeedbackHanahelen - Feb 11, 2022maximo79 - Feb 18, 2022
[IELTS WRITING T2] Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university...

3 - @Holt Thank for your feedbacks, But my opinions for this topic are both agree and disagree. So my body...

Writing Feedbackmatkinhcanthi - Feb 10, 2022matkinhcanthi - Feb 10, 2022
Personal Statement | Fulbright Scholarship | GIS & RS for Forest fire issues

2 - The essay is engaging and effectively uses the various practical experiences that applicant has had in life, in relation...

Scholarshipfarhan_avicena - Feb 10, 2022Holt - Feb 10, 2022
Melbourne University Personal Statement for finance: 500 words maximum

3 - @tientran I think it is good, it needs some modifications....

Scholarshiptientran - Feb 9, 2022Ahmedd - Feb 14, 2022
IISMA 2022 Study Plan: how are we able to find the equilibrium between economic growth, social well-

3 - @Holt thankyou for your assistance!...

Scholarshipalyssa2036 - Feb 9, 2022alyssa2036 - Feb 10, 2022
THE INFLUENCE OF PHONE CALLS

3 - Thank you, Holt! Your advice is as usual useful....

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