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Developing through experiences- Meaningful activities-UBC essay

3 - @Daisy202 your essay is really good as i think you brought up your achievement in this activity and what...

UndergraduateDaisy202 - Jan 12, 2022Hoonyaru - Jan 14, 2022
Development of energy-efficient devices - PTDF statement of purpose

2 - There is nothing in this essay that would be considered a response to the prompt requirements. Yes, I will...

Graduatejoshbj360 - Jan 12, 2022Holt - Jan 12, 2022
My creative side- Tell us who you are-UBC essay

2 - There is a lack of reference to a multi-faceted personality on the part of the applicant. The reviewer is...

UndergraduateSwagat - Jan 11, 2022Holt - Jan 12, 2022
Scholarship Motivation Letter - MA in Business Development / International Economy and Business

2 - The motivation letter sounds more like a personal statement rather than a highly skilled professional interview. The writer was...

LettersMoos - Jan 11, 2022Holt - Jan 12, 2022
SOP for SJPES program - UN's sustainable development goals

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review. The deadline of this program was rescheduled to 15th Feb....

Graduatehn0x - Jan 11, 2022hn0x - Jan 14, 2022
Msc Food Science and Technology Engineering University of Szeged

2 - The questions you are being asked to respond to all connect to a central theme. Have you really thought...

Scholarshipblackray - Jan 11, 2022Holt - Jan 19, 2022
Purchasing printed magazines, books may be dispensable since we can read all the information online

3 - @Holt thank you so much for your help ! <3...

Writing Feedbackemdy2912 - Jan 11, 2022emdy2912 - Jan 12, 2022
IELTS TASK 2 : Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your evaluation, especially those related to word limit But I don't understand why...

Writing Feedbacksunnymeetyou - Jan 11, 2022sunnymeetyou - Jan 12, 2022
"My academic objectives, long-range goals & why particular college". --- College Scholarship Essay

2 - The academic objectives are too vague. These need to be more specific to your progessional goal upon graduation. The...

Scholarshipvjst399 - Jan 11, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
SOP FOR PTDF SCHOLARSHIP - CYBERSECURITY; proposed study reasons, relevance and impact

2 - The discussion is too broad in concept. It must be narrowed down to the relevance of the proposed study...

Scholarshipwilliam42 - Jan 11, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
Stipendium hungarcum motivation lettre -masters's computer science

2 - The application is weak. It is focused on academic and training skills development as an undergraduate. It does not...

ScholarshipManomanoar - Jan 11, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
My candidacy for enrolment in the Stipendium Hungaricum program; computer science masters

2 - The first paragraph is totally unnecessary. The motivation letter should go direct to the point because the reviewer expects...

LettersItsyoyo - Jan 10, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
There is a common trend that people in some countries prefer purchasing over renting a house

2 - This is a prompt misinterpretation. There is no reference to a developing trend in the original topic basis....

Writing Feedbackgiabinh123 - Jan 10, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
UBC TELL ME ABOUT YOURSELF ESSAY- "Passion over Comfort"

3 - I think your overall tone is pretty negative. You mention about being laid back and words such as flunk...

Undergraduatedebs_141 - Jan 10, 2022summerarcadia - Jan 12, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter - Master's in International Business & Economics

2 - When you say "stint", do you mean as an intern? Or as a regular employee who participated in...

Letterskmg1000 - Jan 10, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
IELTS 1: The proportion of passing the driving test between males and females in one Asian country

6 - @nhmt Thank you so much for your suggestions!...

Writing Feedbacktrung289hp - Jan 10, 2022trung289hp - Jan 19, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER - pursuing the BSc Earth Sciences program under Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The first paragraph is only flowerly language that does not move your application along with useful information. It is...

Scholarshipglimmerafter - Jan 10, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
European Master in Public health with a specialization in Advanced Biostatistics and Epidemiology

2 - The first paragraph should be completely removed. It sounds very amateurish. Almost as if you are applying to college...

Graduatexzibit - Jan 10, 2022Holt - Jan 11, 2022
Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum - BSc Computer Science

2 - Since this is your only opportunity to impress the reviewers with the importance of your goal, be definitive...

Scholarshipriinas - Jan 10, 2022Holt - Jan 10, 2022
Wish to further develop my skills - Application essay for United World College

2 - Remove this paragraph as it is devoid of an actual response to the prompt. You need not provide...

Undergraduatevitachai - Jan 9, 2022Holt - Jan 10, 2022
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Master in Economics of Globalisation and European Integration

3 - Thank you so much for your help, i'll definitely take into consideration all of your observations....

ScholarshipMorikeHamid - Jan 9, 2022MorikeHamid - Jan 10, 2022
Topik level - Language Study Plan for GKS G

2 - This is an event that is still to happen. Change your time frame reference to future tense presentation....

Scholarshipcucumberoom - Jan 9, 2022Holt - Jan 9, 2022
Understanding and introspection - UBC personal profile

4 - @elonmuskrat In order to improve ur personal profile, i think you can mention your personalities and achievement or sth...

Undergraduateelonmuskrat - Jan 9, 2022Hoonyaru - Jan 14, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum motivation letter - MSc of Cognitive Neuroscience less than 400 words

3 - Big thanks for your questions and review. Those made me think a lot!...

Scholarshiptrancuongk17 - Jan 9, 2022trancuongk17 - Jan 11, 2022
Some people think governments should be spent on their proroties. Discuss both view, give opinion

2 - You have added personal information to the topic rephrasement. This has changed the topic focus for the essay...

Writing Feedbackabcdmt123 - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 9, 2022
Learning from people around me - UBC application

2 - While you are discussing an interesting story about how acne made you a better person, that is not the...

Undergraduatechengzheng - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 9, 2022
Motivation for science and engineering - SOP for GENIAL GrEen NetworkIng And cLoud computing program

3 - This essay is just a reflection of your experiences and lack the ability to motivate. kindly review and streamline...

Graduateadewale0630 - Jan 8, 2022Klexyking - Jan 8, 2022
Self-help books - MOTIVATION LETTER

2 - The letter is filled with impressive and almost unrealistic career goals. That does not matter so much though. It...

Lettersrimsha25 - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - The magic and beauty in Mathematics

2 - This line is what should set the tone for your motivational letter. This compresses both the academic and...

Scholarshiptuanb2610 - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2022
Self respect and life lesson - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU?

2 - This introduction is unnecessary. Since you are limited in character/word count, and the reviewer needs a prompt response,...

Undergraduateaaravchopra2004 - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2022
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