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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leading a single life rather than get married ?

2 - You have failed the essay in terms of restatement considerations at this point. The prompt, as you have...

Writing Feedbackltthien - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
The necessity of schooling children - who should be the most responsible for this task?

3 - @Holt Sorry but the question was "Discuss both views and give your own opinion". Because there is a limit...

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The time that family members spend gathering to have meals is reducing

2 - There is no need for you to affirm the statement. It is not part of the discussion instruction....

Writing Feedbackhlg24 - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
The proportion of government's money used for roads and transport in Italy, Portugal, UK and USA

2 - The examiner will be looking for the specific chart name/ identifier that will differentiate it from the other...

Writing Feedbackhonghanh8724 - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
Peers have more of an impact on students than teachers do?

2 - The essay is only 202 words long. This would normally be an automatic failing score but since the scoring...

Writing Feedbackhatq126 - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
In the future, the main reason for going to the mall will be for entertainment, not to shop.

2 - This is an automatic task failing scoll. The discussion should focus on only one side. Either agree or...

Writing FeedbackElfleda - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
An alarming deficiency of basic life skills among high school students. To what extent do you agree

2 - This is not orginally stated as an assumption. This is a statement of fact. Do not alter the...

Writing Feedbackhuonggiangkl - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
IELTS Task 1: PIE CHART - WATER USE PROPORTIONS

4 - I think you should not describe Overview too detailed....

Writing Feedbackelinita123 - Oct 29, 2021rosigenious - Nov 5, 2021
In some cities, the government try to reduce traffic by imposing congestion tax during rush hours

3 - Thank you for all of your comments and advice....

Writing Feedbacktrancaongocthao - Oct 29, 2021trancaongocthao - Nov 5, 2021
Task 2 ielts: Robots will play an important role in future

NEW - Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might...

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Petrol and Oil - Writing task 1 : Line Graph.

2 - This is not a proper English word. It does not exist in any English dictionary version. Believe me,...

Writing FeedbackCadeyhere - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 30, 2021
The proportion of three types of businesses access to social media for commerce benefit

2 - Refer to the business types directly as a part of the short form report. You have to do...

Writing Feedbackctttismi - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 30, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2 - Telling children that they can achieve anything if putting their mind to it

NEW - In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. WHAT ARE...

Writing FeedbackPhuongnguyen256 - Oct 29, 2021 -
The map illustrates the process of producing chocolate (there are ten steps)

2 - This is an incorrect image reference. A map is not used in this presentation. An illustrative diagram...

Writing Feedbackcrownbeea - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 30, 2021
Essay about sharing information in my sectors

2 - This makes the original topic vague in your restatement. Such a general reference will be marked as an...

Writing FeedbackTee_ER - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 30, 2021
I want to embrace my potential - my Chevening Essay (Leadership and Influence)

4 - @popochanel By using STARL method, I think you could elaborate more detail here on your achievement : -...

Scholarshippopochanel - Oct 29, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
Chevening - Study in the UK - three university choices; LSE, QMUL, and Goldsmiths

4 - @asrykaloko "I discovered knowledge and professional gaps ..." What knowledge gap did you trying to explain? It...

Scholarshipasrykaloko - Oct 29, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
The percentages of residents for various ways of drinking coffee and tea in five Australian cities

3 - Thank you for your help! I'm going to fix my writing now...

Writing FeedbacklaborareEstOrare - Oct 29, 2021laborareEstOrare - Oct 31, 2021
Ielts - The chart gives information about water use by sector in Brazil and Congo

3 - We also can see that...

Writing Feedbackphienn - Oct 29, 2021rosigenious - Nov 5, 2021
I need help for my essay for scholarship in accounting qualification - ACCA FIA (max 400 words)

3 - @Holt Thank you very much sir...

Scholarshiptuyethan2003 - Oct 29, 2021tuyethan2003 - Oct 30, 2021
A punishment is believed to be the best way to help children to distinguish right from wrong

3 - - You mentioned the figure "90% of them..." is good but I think it lacked validity. Readers might wonder...

Writing Feedbackanna10304 - Oct 28, 2021elinita123 - Oct 30, 2021
Review My SOP for PhD in Nuclear thermal hydraulics

2 - How and why? How does this relate to your interest in CFD ? Every exposure needs to relate...

GraduateNikesh - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 29, 2021
Personal Statement about suitability of being part of Glocal:Erasmus Mundus Global Political Economy

2 - Before discussing your career path, consider your academic background first. There is no connection between your Social Work...

UndergraduateMahle - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 29, 2021
IELTS Task2 Two Views discussion about talents and hard work (250 words)

3 - "It is a common belief ... However, I firmly ... Therefore, ..." THIS IS MY PARAPHRASE FOR THE...

Writing Feedbacksloth - Oct 28, 2021Phuongnguyen256 - Oct 29, 2021
Study in UK - I decided to take three different courses in business; essay for Chevening

2 - One of the major requirements of this essay is the undergraduate degree explanation. There must bean explanation of how...

ScholarshipKatsuk - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
Education: which subject deserves more attention History or Science & Technology in school?

2 - This is an incorrect reference. The overall opinion will be coming from you, as the writer. Reference yourself...

Writing FeedbackLyn123 - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
To act towards a common goal. Chevening - Leadership Journey Essay

2 - This is a very inferior and non-qualifying leadership essay. Itis weak in the sense that the background does not...

Scholarshipelflaco - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
The number of people who usually travel by underground station in London from 6.00 to 22.00 per day

4 - In my opinion, you could use "passenger traffic" instead of "the number of people who..." to diversify your expressions....

Writing Feedbackphuongthuy9876 - Oct 27, 2021Ashe - Oct 28, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially support

3 - I think " I will look at the reasoning of both camps before presenting why" is unnecessary and I...

Writing FeedbackHuongNguyen2111 - Oct 27, 2021Quang Bao - Oct 30, 2021
ielts writing task 2 Should the Government tax fast food heavily

2 - Taxes should be in singular form (tax) since there is only one type being considered. Before...

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