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In 250-300 words, tell us more about you and why you are considering VCU (Transfer Essay)

2 - The reviewer will be looking for reasons why you will bea good fit for the VCU student community and...

UndergraduateMadisonM99 - Oct 2, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
GKS scholarship essay for political science and international relations

2 - Do not refer to North Korea in the opening statement since your interest only developed for south Korea. Do...

Scholarshipvuhasiosalome - Oct 2, 2021Holt - Oct 5, 2021
I totally agree with the statement that arts should be compulsory at school

4 - This is for written test in IELTS ? if yes, in opening sentence you mention two main reasons but...

Writing FeedbackYuuko - Oct 2, 2021Yanti - Oct 9, 2021
IELTS topic: Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities

2 - Please refrain from practice essays until you have become more familiar with the general paragraph format and specific opinion...

Writing Feedbackalbytoxic - Oct 2, 2021Holt - Oct 4, 2021
THE CAUSE AND SOLUTIONS TO STUDENT INAPPROPRIATE BEHAVIOUR

4 - Your word choice sounds unnatural to me. By the way, I think the conclusion should wrap up the main...

Writing Feedbackjadesperanza - Oct 2, 2021chantran - Oct 6, 2021
Do you agree or not, that hobbies give more sense of satisfaction when they are more difficult?

4 - For this essay, are there any limits to maximal words? If not, then in addition to providing an explanation...

Writing Feedbacktrantuyenufl - Oct 2, 2021geniavf - Oct 7, 2021
ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP MOTIVATION LETTER - EUROPUBHEALTH+ - MASTERS IN PUBLIC HEALTH

2 - There is a difference between modern medicine and modern dentistry. Do not misrepresent yourself and the field you...

Scholarshiplayton_audrey - Oct 1, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
IELTS TASK 1: Pie charts: electricity production in 2 countries

2 - Look at the images provided. More than one right? Therefore a plural word form for the image should...

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Recycling Problems - IELTS writing task 2

2 - The restatement + response in not properly presented. While the paraphrasing is acceptable, there was a failure to deliver...

Writing FeedbackHuongmie - Oct 1, 2021Holt - Oct 2, 2021
Olympics participants writing bar chart

3 - i think you shoud have a more detailed overview, which may help the readers to easily understand what you...

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Motivational Letter to JEMARO Program

3 - Thank you so much for these edits! It means a lot! I will append it accordingly....

Lettersmelegy97 - Oct 1, 2021melegy97 - Oct 7, 2021
The number of men in senior development position in three companies (1980 to 2010)

3 - "man" is a singular noun while "men" is a plural one so you use that word, you can try...

Writing Feedbackmaothuyan - Oct 1, 2021papcaii - Oct 2, 2021
Automated driving system may soon replace humans in operating vehicles

2 - Incorrect word reference. Personnel refers to staff members of a particular function. That is different from and often...

Writing Feedbackavocadolalala - Oct 1, 2021Holt - Oct 2, 2021
ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY - EUROPUBHEALTH - PUBLIC HEALTH

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. Are there any areas in which I need to change or improve in...

Scholarshipawkwardgoat97 - Sep 30, 2021awkwardgoat97 - Oct 1, 2021
Motivational letter for CERN Technical Studentship

4 - It should be clearly purpose why you choose that internship specific in between so many kind of internship program,...

LettersPretzel_MScott - Sep 30, 2021Yanti - Oct 6, 2021
MIT Essay: I am a BLEND. Cultural Identity short essay. Evaluate my essay.

4 - To add on to the comments above, I believe you need to tell us how your culture makes you...

Undergraduateasm525 - Sep 30, 2021Janyanwu03 - Oct 7, 2021
My background and identity - I'm from Morocco - country with people attached to their traditions

4 - I believe that your essay is too short and not detailed enough to describe yourself. You literally spent almost...

Undergraduatemessilyass - Sep 29, 2021mirajanesherry - Oct 3, 2021
The graph below shows the percentage of people in the different age group who went to the cinema

2 - The writer has done the simplest reporting presentation. The report avoids a complete and accurate comparison analysis. This shortcut...

Writing FeedbackLaelia - Sep 28, 2021Holt - Sep 29, 2021
History or Science and Technology - what ought to be the major priorities in schools' curriculums?

2 - The summary overview is incomplete. It must restate both public opinions before you present your personal point of view....

Writing Feedbackquocan - Sep 28, 2021Holt - Sep 29, 2021
Business is the blood of the nation's economy. GKS personal statement - business administration

2 - This sentence is mether a motivation nora family background reference. Aat let's down the reviewer who is expecting...

Undergraduateprincevince - Sep 27, 2021Holt - Oct 10, 2021
Personal Statement GKS - English language and literature major

2 - The main question that is not responded to in this statement is, why would a non-native English speaker want...

Scholarshipdeza - Sep 27, 2021Holt - Sep 29, 2021
IELTS PART 2 - READING PRINTED NEWSPAPERS/ BOOKS OR READING ONLINE?

2 - Prompt deviation. you are not responding to the given question which is, . Sadly, this improper...

Writing FeedbackRanee - Sep 27, 2021Holt - Oct 9, 2021
Some people believe that the world should have only one government rather than a national government

2 - Use a single % defense for this discussion. since you were asked for your opeman, the foundation off the...

Writing FeedbackPhamMinhTrang - Sep 27, 2021Holt - Sep 29, 2021
In recent years, the rate of youngster watching television amplify in a hurry

7 - @ngocbb great academic words and an attractive style when it comes to your essay....

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Line Graph Task-Compare the rate of inflation and GDP in VietNam between 1999 and 2011

3 - @Holt thanks for ur advice! But what you mean when i shout at the examiner? I still dont get...

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Air pollution's problems, its effect on Earth's creatures, and possible solutions

2 - Please note that writing a mere 234 words could result in an automatic failing score.That is because there is...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Thu Thuy - Sep 26, 2021Holt - Sep 28, 2021
Schools should emphasize national literature and history for various reasons

2 - The essay does not meet the 4 paragraph discussion format for a task 2 essay. When the word count...

Writing FeedbackPham Hoai Trang - Sep 26, 2021Holt - Sep 28, 2021
With the flourish of technology, working online has increasingly emerged as a new development

2 - The original prompt does not ask you to present an opinion. The discussion instruction requires a non-opinionated advantage...

Writing FeedbackHiimmy - Sep 26, 2021Holt - Sep 28, 2021
Four main reasons why teenagers from one African country use their phones

2 - How many pie charts? A reference to the number of images and how these images are divided should...

Writing Feedbackcinaque - Sep 26, 2021Holt - Sep 27, 2021
The process of transforming geothermal energy from cold water into electricity

2 - Use a different descriptive phrase next time. Avoid using the same presentation words from the original. When...

Writing FeedbackPikaNam - Sep 26, 2021Holt - Sep 27, 2021
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