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Ielts writing task 2 - government and traffic combination topic

3 - I understand you want to use advanced words but there are some errors in the word choice and grammar,...

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons?

2 - Use a general referenceinstead. That is because you are not being asked if the information presented is true...

Writing Feedbackngthuhang - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
Coffee and tea lovers in Australia - IELTS Academic Writing Part 2 - Cambridge 15 Test 1

2 - 318 words are expected in a task 2 essay. The task 1 essay requires between 150-200 words only. Even...

Writing FeedbackLilyWD1814 - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
The comparison of total water utilized for different purposes in Sydney between 1997 and 2007

2 - Summarize the purposes as part of the important data short presentation. Mention the measurement type as well for...

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Writing task 2: My Father - Write about someone who inspires you

2 - The introduction should not focus on the importance of family since that is a general statement. The target person...

Writing Feedbackphuocsangle24 - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
Ielts writing Part 2 - Strict punishment on road offences

2 - The prompt restatement should be divided into 2 separate sentences since these are 2 conflicting ideas and reasoning presentations....

Writing Feedbacktrangvnq - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
The point of view for the situation when the young generation is a big part of society

2 - You will not get a passing score in any section of this test. Your prompt restatement is confusing and...

Writing Feedbackhieuho - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
Ielts task 2: Many things can influence the academic achievements and emotional growth of a student

2 - In the first paragraph, deliver the subject of the sentence before the resulting action. Whose academic and emotional development...

Writing FeedbackHoaitrinhh - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2: Bring in foreign workers

2 - Wrong word usage. By meaning this refers to: a fact, occurrence, or circumstance observed or observable. Use a...

Writing Feedbackdongocbaotram - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
Positive work environment and how it influences your work result

2 - Since this is your thesis statement, you cannot use an in-text citation for it. Rather, it would be...

Research Papersasha1310 - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
The proportion of inhabitants by a variety of age groups in a city participated music events from 20

2 - Preciseness is key when describing the image source due to the mental picture, or imagined measurement chart. This...

Writing FeedbackSyawaluddin Alim - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
IELTS Task 2: Discuss both view: Economic is the most important goal

2 - I love this part of your presentation. You successfully indicated 2 important elements in this presentation: -...

Writing Feedbackngocnhivn - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
The information on the proportion of the entire population of the world over 100 years

2 - You need to learn how to better develop and present your sentence ideas per paragraph. Your sentences are understandable,...

Writing FeedbackRosePham - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
Info about direct PhD in Aerospace engineering

2 - It is difficult to judge if you can qualify directly for a PhD program based only on these credentials....

Student Talkkunal_sinha - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market.

2 - What sort of diagram ? Was it an illustration? A procedural drawing? Clarify. When indicating the image type...

Writing FeedbackBeolisa - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
Population Growth in New Zealand over the years

2 - Your first sentence fails to clearly offer a summary overview. a clear summary overview is delivered over 5 sentences...

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What have you learned from syntax course?

2 - Refer to yourself throughout the essay. You may refer to yourself as I, me, myself. or variations thereof. Do...

Writing Feedbackaanana mmaria - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 1, 2021
The charts below show information about three diffenrents deserts around the world.

2 - In the first paragraph. Aim to use the standard 3-5 sentence format to aid with the coherence of the...

Writing Feedbackheyaaami - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 1, 2021
Writing task 2: Buying things on the Internet - e-commerce trends evaluation

2 - Not towards. We already exist in the 21st century. This is incorrect word choice as it relates to...

Writing Feedbackcarrotlion123 - May 31, 2021Holt - Jun 1, 2021
IELTS - Everyone should become vegetarian because meat not guarantees a healthy diet.

3 - a know-how to get higher point is that you should follow a certain layout and your good grammar and...

Writing Feedbackdaisydang2104 - May 31, 2021lethiaixuan - Jun 8, 2021
The inequality between rich and poor nation is now wider than it has ever been before.

2 - While it is acceptable for you to take the easy road and simply restate the given questions, this...

Writing FeedbackAnhu - May 31, 2021Holt - Jun 1, 2021
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers

3 - should be "on the one hand"...

Writing Feedbackquynhhuong656 - May 31, 2021winxangle - Jun 4, 2021
Battling against cancer - Research interest for a PhD application

2 - You need to balance the discussion between 3 aspects: - Your research interest - The potential importance of...

Scholarshipayuhutami - May 31, 2021Holt - Jun 1, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Percentages of people living in the towns and cities in 4 different countries

5 - @zenosyne719 You should show the name of four countries " in four countries including USA, South Korea, India and...

Writing Feedbackzenosyne719 - May 31, 2021phuongtrinh11200 - Jun 5, 2021
Personal statement - reason to take the specialization: boost my career vs problem to solve

2 - Neither. For the personal statement, you should show the progression of your interest leading into data science. The...

Graduateevita126 - May 30, 2021Holt - May 31, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Amount of money spent by school and percentage of students getting passed

2 - After indicating the number of bar graphs, end the sentence. Follow it up with 2 separate sentences that...

Writing Feedbackfranklywritten - May 30, 2021Holt - May 31, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Opinion Essay on Free University Education

2 - You forgot to restate the portion of the original prompt indicating that this belief is regardless of income....

Writing Feedbackphatpham332 - May 30, 2021Holt - May 31, 2021
Task2: The benefits and disadvantages of working from home

7 - @uyenmy0025 thank you!!! I appreciate your comment .I will take notice of your advice and I will enhance my...

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TOPIC: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams

2 - For clarity and prompt adherence, you can state your opinion directly provided it will help show support for...

Writing FeedbackTranght - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
Australia Award Scholarship for Master of Architecture - proposed course and institution choice

2 - This is not a competitive presentation. You sound like you are writing a personal statement than a professional motivation....

Scholarshipjhatesnakeu - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
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