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Task2: The benefits and disadvantages of working from home

7 - @uyenmy0025 thank you!!! I appreciate your comment .I will take notice of your advice and I will enhance my...

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TOPIC: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams

2 - For clarity and prompt adherence, you can state your opinion directly provided it will help show support for...

Writing FeedbackTranght - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
Australia Award Scholarship for Master of Architecture - proposed course and institution choice

2 - This is not a competitive presentation. You sound like you are writing a personal statement than a professional motivation....

Scholarshipjhatesnakeu - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
Vocational training is needed - there is lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers

2 - This shows the part of the discussion instruction that you did not understand. You are discussing the 2...

Writing Feedbackhuyn2511 - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health

2 - The prompt for this essay falls under the 3 paragraph requirement based on the writing instruction "Discuss both points...

Writing Feedbackhoangmanhcuong - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
Elevate Mental Health Awareness Scholarship

3 - In my opinion, the entire story has yet to justify your decision of becoming a nurse. I think it...

Scholarshipsjplumphippos - May 28, 2021ayuhutami - May 31, 2021
IELTS - promoting hosting in a country

2 - There was never a reference to equestriane sports in the original prompt. Whatever compelled you to change the...

Writing FeedbackKakaka - May 28, 2021Holt - May 29, 2021
IMSISS 2020 Personal Statement - Scholarship declined

2 - Please do not think or believe that you were not considered for the scholarship based on a weak motivation...

ScholarshipJourneyman - May 28, 2021Holt - May 29, 2021
TASK2 Some countries have single-sex education models while in others mixed schools are prefered

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your advice but actually, the question is "discuss both views and give an...

Writing Feedbackjane49 - May 28, 2021jane49 - May 29, 2021
Essay about the process of manufacturing tea bags

2 - The essay cannot be renewed - properly without the reference image. However, I can offer a brief review of...

Writing Feedbackyathh2k4 - May 28, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
Writing task 2: People say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad.

3 - =>> A nation can benefit from letting its students pursue education in an international environment. =>>...

Writing Feedbackwinxangle - May 28, 2021phuongtrang56780 - May 28, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: THE NUMBER OF TRAVELLERS USING THREE LARGE BRITISH AIRPORTS

2 - Flag carriers are airlines. The reference points used are airports. Be careful with your references. You just created...

Writing Feedbackthaovy1405 - May 28, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
Erasmus Mundus Masters in Social Work for Children and Family

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your constructive criticism :)...

GraduateSRazaque - May 27, 2021SRazaque - May 28, 2021
According to Confucius, education is a key to success

2 - You did not meet the 250 word requirement. When you do this during an actual test, this could garner...

Writing Feedbackuyenntunn02 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
I've just seen a brilliant program about dolphins on television. Which program have you enjoyed?

2 - The first half of your essay is nothing but an unrelated information presentation. This is actually a statement response...

Writing Feedbacktmt2306 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
The amount of money people in the US spend on mobile and landline phone calls and other services

2 - What? This reference has no meaning. Perhaps you mis-translated from your native tongue to English? This is why...

Writing Feedbackmih - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
Writing task 1: household car ownership in Braitain from 1971 to 2007

4 - @ho chu diem my You should replace "illustrious" with "illustrates" or "shows" "The number of families owned one car...

Writing Feedbackho chu diem my - May 27, 2021phuongtrinh11200 - Jun 6, 2021
Fossil fuel and renewable resources - IELTS task 2 essay

3 - I suggest using 'sustainable energy" for renewable energy...

Writing Feedbacktatanh - May 27, 2021jane49 - May 30, 2021
Letter of Advice: Pamela Wilson is a freshman majoring in English. She needs a part-time job.

2 - There is no such thing As an experimental part- time job, only a part time job. double check...

Lettersanniemit182 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
Ielts writing task 2: The advances in agriculture and the increase in world hunger

2 - Be conscious of GRA requirements. You do not seem to be familiar with punctuation marks and howto use these....

Writing FeedbackGiang87 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
The positive and negative effect of globalisation

2 - If, I am not mistaken, you have mis-analyzed the prompt. Based upon what I know of the original...

Writing Feedbackbo288144 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
Australia Bureau of Meteorology - the ielts exam task

2 - What sort of diagram? Your identification is incomplete. It does not help the reader create a mental picture...

Writing FeedbackThienan2409 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
Why some people can't success even if they have practiced hard

2 - Did you mean to use this presentation as a Task 2 essay or just for basic English writing practice?...

Writing FeedbackTsan - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
WHY DID YOU PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION - AAS MASTER OF PUBLIC HEALTH

2 - Immediately connect this statement to dentistry. Most applicants for this come from medical health fields so it is...

ScholarshipVi_Dar - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: how elderly people in the United States spent their free time

2 - Wrong time reference. The measurement represents 40 years or, if you want tobe more specific, 4 decades. Your...

Writing FeedbackMinhAnh111124 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
"The itch to understand" Personal statement college application - a topic of your choice

3 - This is overall a really good essay. The description about you being able to respond to various problems in...

Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 26, 2021peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
IELTS writing task 1: The reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country

2 - Familiarize yourself with the task 1 images. These are all charts by default. The specific image name is...

Writing Feedbackquynhtam10 - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
Young people are healthier, wealthier but less happy. What are the causes and solutions for it?

2 - Use an example to support this statement then expand it in the causes paragraph. That would create a...

Writing Feedbackanlamlam - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
Writing task 1, line graph, 4 catalogues, change over time

2 - Incorrect image reference. This is a line graph, not a chart. familiarize yourself with the image names to...

Writing Feedbackhuen - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
The question here is whether calculators help children rather than harm them

2 - Without a copy of the original prompt to base your response on, I cannot tell how this essay...

Writing FeedbackNevaeh2006 - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
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