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The question here is whether calculators help children rather than harm them

2 - Without a copy of the original prompt to base your response on, I cannot tell how this essay...

Writing FeedbackNevaeh2006 - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
IELTS [WRITING TASK 1] How to make a photo by using machine which is known as automatic photo booth

2 - The task 1 essays requires the exam taker to summarize the information provided. The summary cannot exceed 175-190 words....

Writing FeedbackIsmailyusanto226 - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
WRITING TASK 2 - history as well as science subjects play the equal important role in our life

2 - It is not necessary to explain the discussion instructions. Your clear thesis statement as represented by the previous...

Writing Feedbackvivianhuynh - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
AAS Scholarship: Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - Master of Public Policy

2 - Which is? You don't need to discuss it in detail here as you will do that in the...

Scholarshipannisar - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
IELTS Writing task 1 and 2. Task 2: Studying chosen occupations in high school

3 - ''get bad marks in their record'' I think ''in'' should be ''on'' ''... because they are rusty on their...

Writing Feedbacknhathao1211 - May 25, 2021huen - May 26, 2021
South Korea is developed technologically - GKS-U Personal statement review

3 - @Holt Oh, sorry I didn't mentioned earlier but this essay is from last year's application. We were instructed to...

ScholarshipDeanRuno - May 25, 2021DeanRuno - May 28, 2021
Young people have become richer, but less happy. What are the causes? How to address this situation?

2 - This is an incorrect assumption. The original reference point is health and long life, along with money. Therefore,...

Writing Feedbackchomzee - May 25, 2021Holt - May 26, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: DRIVING TEST PASS RATES

3 - task 1 does not require ''A driving license is one of the most important identifications ...'', instead you should...

Writing Feedbackphuongtrang56780 - May 25, 2021huen - May 26, 2021
AAS - Why did you choose this - Economic Growth

2 - Your reasons for wanting to pursue higher studies are purely research based. It would help if you could offer...

Scholarshipimsyw - May 25, 2021Holt - May 25, 2021
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about advertisements in schools.

2 - You need to show a belief in your opinion. This reference point is uncertain. It means you are...

Writing Feedbacksunnypham - May 24, 2021Holt - May 25, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: WORKING AND STUDYING FROM HOME, USING CLOUD-BASED SERVICES

2 - Kindly provide at least 2 reasons why you believe this to be true. This is to help create...

Writing Feedbackphuongtrang56780 - May 24, 2021Holt - May 25, 2021
IELTS TASK 2 essay: fossil fuel-based cars VS electric cars, which are more environmentally friendly

4 - @phuongtrang56780 @Holt Thank you so much for your time and consideration. I will practice more base on your advice....

Writing Feedbacktranle - May 24, 2021tranle - May 25, 2021
Students graduate from high schools without any knowledge or skill about financial management

3 - Thank you for your respond. I will learn from your review and do more practice. I am feeling lucky...

Writing Feedbackbeatvin - May 24, 2021beatvin - May 25, 2021
"My notebooks" Personal statement for undergrad college application

3 - To me, this essay is really confusing. The different section of your notebooks that you're writing about do not...

Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 24, 2021peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
A friend who lives in another country has invited you - IELTS - Informal Letter

2 - Your opening paragraph is a bit on the serious, formal, and official side. Since this is a friendly letter,...

Writing FeedbackTimothyDinh - May 24, 2021Holt - May 25, 2021
The advent of technological items have negative impact on interaction among people in modern society

3 - I am sorry for a serious mistake in this essay. Word " partly' should have been interpolated before ''concur"...

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Women's participation on senior management - Graphic Writing

3 - @Holt Thank you very much. Appreciate your suggestion!...

Writing FeedbackJames_0401 - May 24, 2021James_0401 - May 25, 2021
Geodata sciences - cover letter - applying for PhD Student Position

3 - I think it is of paramount importance to align your research interest with what the PhD program can offer....

LetterstechnoDevelopper - May 23, 2021ayuhutami - May 31, 2021
Discuss 2 opposing views on whether the animals should be held in captivity or free in wilderness

2 - What do you mean by this statement? The reference is not clear. Did you mean zoos should be...

Writing Feedbackmarielyne0401 - May 23, 2021Holt - May 24, 2021
The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011

2 - Did you see the correlation listed in red within the image presentation? Why didn't you include it? Being listed...

Writing FeedbackNhiovl155 - May 23, 2021Holt - May 24, 2021
WRITING TASK 2: Dieting to lose weight has become increasingly prevalent in the developed world. Why

2 - You are not talking about an app. There is no " updated" world to speak of. However, there...

Writing Feedbackabcdefghiloveu - May 23, 2021Holt - May 24, 2021
Reasons for choosing Korea as study abroad destination

4 - You fail to respond to the prompt properly. You need to explain why South Korea attracts you as a...

Scholarshipmelseonnn - May 23, 2021techmind20 - May 26, 2021
Single-payer Healthcare System and Why it should be Implemented in the U.S

2 - The second sentence of the first paragraph is confusing to read. It feels like itis overloaded with information, which...

Research PapersAshUndead - May 23, 2021Holt - May 24, 2021
Plan After Study - Posco Asia Fellowship

3 - Try to breakdown your plans into three parts: short-term, mid-term, and long-term plan. Short term plan is the goal...

ScholarshipSalimakmur - May 23, 2021Ulaai - May 26, 2021
Some parents think that children's centers provide the best service for children of preschool age.

2 - For clarity purposes,it will be alright for you toprovide a supporting opinion for 1 of the 2 public...

Writing Feedbackpuuynn - May 23, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
[ Writting Task 2 ] Rent vs Own: Pros and Cons

4 - @Kyet =>> It is still a bitter controversy =>> they can show it off to...

Writing FeedbackKyet - May 23, 2021phuongtrang56780 - May 25, 2021
"Questioning the answer" personal statement for undergrad college application

3 - Merged: "Not settling for the obvious explanation" Personal statement for undergrad college application So basically, I posted this...

Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 22, 2021techmind20 - May 23, 2021
IELTS TASK 2 - are individuals powerful enough for making improvements for the environment?

2 - That is not a response to the question. " To what extent" indicates a single response choice '....

Writing Feedbackjavislee1409 - May 22, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
Should Ads Be Allowed In Schools? Controversial issue

2 - You should present the 2 opposing ideas as separate sentences since they deal with unrelated topics. You also need...

Writing Feedbacktpt2000 - May 22, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
[ Writting Task 2 ] Home ownership is sometimes considered more favorable than renting

2 - Incorrect. The thought is ongoing soit is a present action. The word should be "believe I instead. ...

Writing Feedbackzizih - May 22, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
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