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Some are born with talents. Some are not. But an appropriate approach can help.

2 - You have an almost perfect presentation here. The only problem, is that you used your personal opinion as a...

Writing Feedbackhungprovip0089 - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
GKS-G Korean Scholarship | Personal Statement | M.S. Public Policy (Environment/Green Development)

3 - Thank you for your response. I've checked and do qualify under a new Korean Heritage category, provided neither...

Graduatescoriae - Mar 25, 2021scoriae - Mar 26, 2021
GKS-G Global Korean Scolarship | Personal Statement | Ph.D. in Cybersecurity

2 - The last paragraph is too long. You need to break that into 3 more parts based on the discussion...

Graduateresearcher182 - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
Topic: Some people believe that children are required to obey the rules of their parents and teacher

2 - A prompt restatement is always helped by a clear opinion being presented at the end of the final thesis...

Writing Feedbackthanhvo - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
My Demon - The verdict of my diagnoses

NEW - THE VERDICT The pain in my shoulder had not changed by the time of my appointment with Dr. Reed....

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Universities should focus on specialist subject - this is a much better choice. IELTS Writing task 2

5 - Hi @CBQ. I'd love to discuss the sentence "it leads to undergraduates' poor motivation..." I don't think the...

Writing FeedbackCBQ - Mar 24, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Apr 7, 2021
What aspect of your leadership you consider to be effective, how you solve problems in organisation?

2 - The only useful paragraph in this presentation is the second paragraph. So retain that for your revised response. For...

Scholarshipenkay30 - Mar 24, 2021Holt - Mar 25, 2021
Why I decided to take up science? Bachelor of Engineering or Bachelor of Aviation

3 - @Jesus1 I get this input and I think you will find it helpful as well. The question...

ScholarshipJesus1 - Mar 24, 2021jackkenshi - Mar 25, 2021
Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? AAS; Crawford School of Public Policy

4 - use the more specific reason for university choice rather than the reputation reason. what course you interested and why...

Scholarshipyanbro - Mar 24, 2021DA786 - Mar 29, 2021
Motivation Statement for AAS - applying for a master degree in Public Health

8 - @albertedwn keep fighting! you will pass the scholarship at the right time. so, actually what I mean is...

Scholarshipalbertedwn - Mar 24, 2021MsC - Mar 30, 2021
Personal Statement for M.Eng. Mechanical Engineering at University of Alberta

2 - The ideal SOP presentation has a maximum word count of 750 words. I find this essay to be extremely...

GraduateDioBrando69 - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
Future people will not buy printed newspaper or books, they will read everything they want online

3 - Hi, I think you could diversify your presentation by using synonyms for 'printed newspaper" instead of the word itself....

Writing FeedbackHodiep - Mar 23, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family

2 - There is an unnecessary discussion point in your restatement. The part about the main reasons why people would spare...

Writing FeedbackTri An - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
Telecommunications and Network re: Review my anwers to AA question

NEW - Why do you choose the course and Institution? AA scholarship question? Refer to my feedback below and review and...

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Personal Essay: History - a concept, theory, or topic you have explored.

2 - You told the reviewer what topic is of interest to you. It was explained quite well. The reason you...

Writing FeedbackPocket Friend - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
SHOW HOW THE WORLD HAS CHANGED SINCE THE INVENTION OF THE MOBILE PHONE

2 - If I am right and the original prompt of this essay was based on how people's interaction has changed...

Writing FeedbackNguyenMy19055 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
Study plan for Canada Study Permit. Canada - people from around the globe are welcomed there

2 - There is a need for you to address your thesis as a part of your study plan. Since you...

Letterssintiash59 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
The line chart below shows the percentage of Internet users in 3 countries from 1999 to 2009

2 - - What kind of graph? Be specific. The reader cannot see the image. Show your familiarity with the...

Writing Feedbackngockhanh1811 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
Immigrants in America. Questbridge Long Essay

NEW - Original prompt: We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up,...

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers

3 - Thanks for your feedback. 1. I totally agree with exceeded word limit comment. I will work on limiting it...

Writing Feedbackdipsy07 - Mar 22, 2021dipsy07 - Mar 24, 2021
First time I wrote an essay - Questbridge: An experience that caused you to change your perspective

2 - It is not a "poor me" essay. Rather, it is a self-analysis that shows the reviewer how far you...

UndergraduatePocket Friend - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
Writing task 1 - the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 to 2006

2 - You still have room to make the report more informative. You have only written 169 words. The target word...

Writing Feedbackvanhoa - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
IELTS TASK 2 - THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH POLITICAL ACTIONS TO STOP GLOBAL WARMING

6 - Hi @juliachung As far as I know, the primary cause for global warming is not overconsumption of plastic...

Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 21, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Apr 7, 2021
STUNED ESSAY. MSc of International Land and Water Management at WUR

3 - Dear Holt. Thank you very much for your great feedback! I will revise my essay accordingly....

Scholarshipns_nafsi - Mar 21, 2021ns_nafsi - Mar 21, 2021
Discuss both views: joining university or leave school to get a job

4 - @lynguyen2912 Here's a structure you can use for this which works everytime with this question prompt: INTRO: Restate...

Writing Feedbacklynguyen2912 - Mar 21, 2021Ahmed adobewan - Mar 23, 2021
Writing task 1 - Safety condition of endangered plants and their different living places

2 - For starters, you are not writing enough words to merit a high TA score. While the minimum word count...

Writing Feedbackpeter4904 - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 21, 2021
Usage of margarine, butter, low fat and reduced spreads - IELTS TEST

2 - - Ending when? The information is incomplete. The summary must include the start and end date of the...

Writing Feedbackalexrussso - Mar 20, 2021Holt - Mar 21, 2021
An argument about whether the country should be the host for a worldwide sports event or not

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Can I ask you what is the right pattern for comparative discussion? I'm quite...

Writing Feedbacknguyenngocanhthu - Mar 20, 2021nguyenngocanhthu - Mar 21, 2021
Business Management course - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR UNIVERSITY PROGRAM AND SCHOLARSHIP

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your contribution. But as I am a high school student and I'm applying...

Undergraduatedothinganha - Mar 19, 2021dothinganha - Mar 20, 2021
The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million tonnes from four different sectors

5 - Hi. As a reader, I'm not happy with the "enormous change" sentence. First, I think you could make...

Writing Feedbackngockhanh181107 - Mar 19, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
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