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MIT Creativity Essay - "Nighttime is like Progresso New England Clam Chowder."

4 - I would expect since this is MIT, that many people will want to flaunt their extensive research projects. They...

Undergraduateqwe123 - Dec 26, 2009tiliu - Dec 27, 2009
UVA Supplement-Doodling- 'the artistic girl who doesn't like to doodle'

5 - Thank you for your input. :)...

Undergraduatetiliu - Dec 26, 2009tiliu - Jan 3, 2010
Stanford Essay: Describe Yourself Walks!

2 - On my walks I not only get to see a gorgeous backdrop, and I also catch a glimpse of...

Undergraduateschmevie - Dec 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
if you like in-n-out burger.....READ THIS UPENN ESSAY.

3 - You get the award for best username, ha ha. If you search this site, you'll see about a...

Undergraduatebtwthisisbecca - Dec 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
Describe an academic project : DNR orders- Notre Dame essay!

2 - I think you should cut out this sentence. Since childhood, I have been more fascinated by dissecting frogs or...

Undergraduatehahahaha122 - Dec 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
"Guardian of My Life" - a person has a huge influence on me.

NEW - Please watch my grammar too. All helps will be very appreciated =) Moving from Vietnam to California -...

Undergraduatemonkey13330gg - Dec 26, 2009 -
Essay about a valuable life lesson that you have

3 - what are types of your writing? Narrative, descriptive, explanation or just a storyline. I think you write...

Writing Feedbacksujujun - Dec 26, 2009Keng - Dec 28, 2009
Home - there is always my heart - and it is everywhere. Common App Essay

7 - I think you should seperate this sentence. There was nothing alluring in the orange-gray field. Not even the...

UndergraduateSkittleRose - Dec 26, 2009Rowa - Dec 28, 2009
Aviary Pagoda, Yuen Long Park, Hong Kong. Common App revisions - "Broadening Horizons"

13 - Hey yatindrahp, I elaborated more on the last sentence, and changed it to: The experience I gained was invaluable...

Undergraduateluminousx - Dec 26, 2009luminousx - Dec 28, 2009
"Communities- " UPenn Supplement

2 - I would be careful with the quote because the real quote says that TRUE LEARNING should be the...

UndergraduateiRunShow - Dec 26, 2009kakashi1992 - Dec 30, 2009
Essay for Princeton, Williams, Swarthmore, Bowdoin, and Kenyon-(Personal Essay)

2 - "Daily sketches, paintings, and journal entries." You should make this into an independent clause, and tie the two...

Undergraduatepmurray62 - Dec 26, 2009Jeannie - Dec 28, 2009
Columbia Engineering short answers

5 - Nice both of them. Regarding to the first, why not be a little more specific about which community service...

Undergraduatem126531 - Dec 26, 2009poisonivy - Dec 27, 2009
"I can have a sense of security" - JHU Supplement Help

6 - Sorry, we have to suspend you for ignoring the thread title rules. You may be able to access the...

Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 26, 2009EF_Team - Dec 26, 2009
JHU Supplement Essay - Why Writing Seminars?

6 - Haha! Thank you very much for your help. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. Any suggestions on how...

Undergraduatekenzo_kun - Dec 26, 2009kenzo_kun - Dec 28, 2009
Common App Essay (Carnatic Kid in Canada)

3 - i think you've completely misread this essay the part you said was irrelevant is the crux of this...

Undergraduateunclesamv - Dec 26, 2009unclesamv - Dec 30, 2009
NOTRE DAME SUPPLEMENT+GEORGE WASH: being the political "bow"

4 - Some days, we just don't have inspiration. Maybe today is better! Look at it again. As a...

Undergraduatemeliza8809 - Dec 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
"real, tangible, and alive - Science!" Cornell Arts and Sciences interests essay

7 - Cute hook! I like you're essay, but you could always go add more nuance and really illustrate the beauty...

Undergraduaterjctcollege1 - Dec 26, 2009twizzlestraw - Dec 28, 2009
"My interest lies in science" - MIT World I come from

3 - This one describes my world more. The daily hours of imprisonment were over. Discarding my backpack at home,...

Undergraduatewhitepolarbear - Dec 26, 2009whitepolarbear - Dec 28, 2009
Bowdoin Supplemental essay--My life through music and sports...

11 - Thanks for the comments and feedback. I will try to make that sounds better. As soon as I rest...

Undergraduatekldini - Dec 26, 2009kldini - Dec 31, 2009
"Short Answers + Best Advice" - Brown Supplement

2 - I actually really like it. I think that it sounded really great.. but it did sound a little cliche...

UndergraduateiRunShow - Dec 26, 2009joosunggrace - Dec 27, 2009
'Responsibility shapes me' - Code honor-(Trintiy College essay)

3 - ...set of strict principles that define what honorable conduct for individuals. BEFORE you write this sentence, introduce...

Undergraduateyf8651 - Dec 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
Brown essay on advice

2 - Hi, I think you should elaborate more on how you "walked the path" in the second paragraph. you could...

Undergraduateleslery - Dec 26, 2009daft123 - Dec 26, 2009
Purdue College Education and goals

4 - Sorry for being out of topic. I was wondering if i write that i will come back to my...

Undergraduatedaft123 - Dec 26, 2009nafis9 - Jan 8, 2010
"I presented to the Judges about the case" - MIT CREAVITY QUESTION

4 - HOWEVER, ALSO IT SAYS THE PROJECT YOU LED OR ANYTHING, ANY IDEAS TO END...

Undergraduatenaruto - Dec 26, 2009naruto - Dec 27, 2009
elaborate on one of your activities (150 words) What are you writing about?

5 - What's this!? This adds some nice energy to the essay. I was about to ask you,...

UndergraduateJd87rh - Dec 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
'the red shield logo' - Macalester supplement essay-why mac?

2 - I think your essay might be better if you left out the first paragraph. Try reading it from paragraph...

Undergraduateyf8651 - Dec 26, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 28, 2009
Drawing and painting - MIT pleasure essay

9 - If you're confused I think the best thing to do would be to move on to your other application...

Undergraduatewhitepolarbear - Dec 26, 2009theAbraham - Dec 26, 2009
Common Application: My sister

4 - Interesting introduction. Try to keep the same flow in the next paragraphs. To do that, describe more vividly, use...

Undergraduatedanielhe - Dec 26, 2009poisonivy - Dec 27, 2009
Johns Hopkins Supplement - Why Public Health?

4 - I agree, it sounds as if u hav taken the decision to study public health in a few minutes,...

Undergraduatematerial_sloth - Dec 26, 2009FarhanWasim - Dec 29, 2009
How to approach Amherst Supplement on Science

10 - Sorry I am not really being clear. Your essay is technically perfect with sound content. The only thing is...

Undergraduatetwizzlestraw - Dec 26, 2009Wanderer_x - Dec 31, 2009
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