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'In love with the sky' - Main essay. Influential experience in ur life

21 - You have several options, but one approach would be to say that when you first came here, you found...

Undergraduatenewsha31 - Jan 3, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
Lincoln Paper - Introductory Paragraph

11 - Yes, he has those leadership qualities....

Writing FeedbackGlenn900 - Jan 3, 2009mussy - May 26, 2013
"Realizing recycling bins" - short essay

3 - i would agree with angela. I think you would benefit greatly by explaining what it meant to you and...

Undergraduatemoseyer - Jan 3, 2009lattent - Jan 3, 2009
The person I admire happens to be my rival - Essay on Role model

7 - if you don't feel like it then you don't need to just refer to her as your cousin. but...

Writing FeedbackULL - Jan 3, 2009zowzow - Jan 11, 2009
Bentley College- Why do you want to attend this school?

5 - Diversity, honesty and an ingenious education system are qualities that I look for in a college; Bentley has all...

Undergraduatenouri - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
USC Essay ignorance in the presence of knowlege

5 - Well, you don't need the " " marks if it is in the format of a screenplay type of...

Undergraduatedooolele - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
I just realized that it is my grandfather's influence that has molded me into what I am today

7 - Yes, the rule for powerful communication is: Say it, explain it, and then say it again. That way, the...

UndergraduateSlime - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Including a Chronology in a Term Paper, According to Chicago Style

4 - I'm guessing you could just go with the appendix sans chronology, but if you are really worried about it,...

EssaysGlenn900 - Jan 3, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 3, 2009
Rhodes College short answer---effective leadership

2 - I used to work in Students In Free Enterprise to promote activities that were socially useful. And Finally...

Undergraduatecharliesun - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
why you are considering Rhodes College?

4 - A few more grammatical fixes: "The harder the problems are, the more excited I am to figure them...

Undergraduatecharliesun - Jan 3, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 4, 2009
Michigan Essays (diversity, economics, setback)

9 - sure, now i get it. thanks (:...

Undergraduatechickpig - Jan 3, 2009chickpig - Jan 5, 2009
'I live in Bangladesh' - Macalester Supplement...I think its a bit off-topic.

6 - "I watched stood by my grandmother's grave silently." watching a grave sounds awkward.. "You can achieve anything, if...

UndergraduateZuhayr90 - Jan 3, 2009priscileung - Jan 15, 2009
Fear is a path to the darkside

5 - Hidden in the shadows of one's mind exists a path to self-destruction. Great Yoda reference!! I wish I had...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
CMC essay; "First in war, first in peace, and first in our countrymen's hearts"

16 - Thanks Constance! Its just I reeeallllly want to go to CMC...but there is no use worrying now. At least...

Undergraduatelattent - Jan 2, 2009lattent - Jan 5, 2009
FSU essay ("traditions and customs that have become a part of my life")

11 - True, if you start playing around with formatting, you can make an essay seem slightly longer or shorter than...

Undergraduatevk123 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
UVA - Favorite word, first draft, debate

4 - When you refer to a word, put it in quotes: My favorite word is "debate." So, can you...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Commonapp Essay (Brother who has cerebral palsy and influence).

6 - However , I have never played on a sports team in my entire life. Okay, so for the...

Undergraduatedarkat22 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Interesting idea? - Argonne National Laboratory and Fermila

6 - I would b more conservative, usually, but I do agree that a wacky question deserves a wacky response. you...

Undergraduateparadox - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Check your submissions dates common app posting incorrect dates!?

19 - november 30th but do it earlier because system might crash...

Undergraduatesk8rgal666 - Jan 2, 2009OhsoSoulful - Nov 29, 2010
UVa- grammar errors- "Being a moderate Muslim is no easy"

13 - Consistently maintaining all of these requirements is difficult at times; however, it has become a perpetual habituated routine of...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
ideas or items in a particle accelerator - direction with Common App Essay

7 - This is great! Now, after you introduce the concept of society, let the reader know that the next concept...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Submitting in 2 hours: Cornell Architecture Supplement

4 - Born in a family of architects, I have been absorbing the spirit of architecture since a very young age....

Undergraduatevivalacanada - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Is it common app worthy ("My job is in the Pacoima Branch Library")

5 - Some have been deafened by Pacoima with sirens shrieking, bullets flying, helicopters hovering, robberies and for lack of better...

UndergraduateFlower Child - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Univ of Illinois Essay! ("girl from India")

3 - I think it is even better if you write "inferior to" You can omit this sentence if you...

UndergraduateSravya312 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Very confused on my Thesis statement. AP Euro History class

7 - Trojan's revision is strong, but highlights the fact that you really only have two points, instead of three as...

Essaysnikbij - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
Why Duke arts and sciences short essay? (any feedback will be welcome)

5 - collegeseeker, thanks for helping!! you can use bold to highlight the changes toy make, if you help other people...

Undergraduateshah_parth92 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
CORNELL CALS ESSAY ("we must take care of the world we live in")

4 - Thanks falconchick for the good work you did! Check out the EF Contributor page!! Unicorn, that is great...

Undergraduatecbm2891 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Rice Supplement (something unique about my view upon communism?)

4 - Yes!! If you post it, I'll give my ideas about whether or not it seems right... Communism is...

Essaysxelloslast - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
UIUC essay 2 (Illuminati- the Physics Club)

6 - Illuminati- the Physics Club of our school is one of the facadesaspects of school life that I will remember...

Undergraduatesumantneo - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
BU- What expiriences have led you to choose your field of major

6 - This is a great essay. I enjoyed the opening paragraph and great organization. There are very minimal mistakes. Good...

UndergraduateAndrewquartey - Jan 2, 2009ichid99 - Jan 3, 2009
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