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Infertility treatments essay

2 - To answer your question, I think you should put title WITH the author's name so that it is perfectly...

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Ending Underage Drinking by Making It Legal. Should underage drinking laws be changed.

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"rules of the game" in society - essay, opinions

7 - A good way to start this sort of essay is by defining your key terms. So, what do you...

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The Process of Unification - Satirical essay on Religion

6 - my opinion no everyone has a way off thought and ideas!...

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"The Great Changes" - Essay Feedback

3 - This opening part: For most people, high school is just the next step of education. Most students havetheir...

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Discrimination and predjudice - psychological and sociological views

5 - Im sorry, if u still need help, i would be more than happy to help you out. i havent...

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Essay on Kafka's Metamorphosis

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need help with this essay - "the subjects with which you had difficulty"

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The person I admire happens to be my rival - Essay on Role model

7 - if you don't feel like it then you don't need to just refer to her as your cousin. but...

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an experiment essay - A memorable evening

9 - ok I'll try that...

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Magic Lu Chen - essay help

5 - Good influential essay, I'm not fond with your system of writing, but I can sense your emotion with Lu...

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'People use some drugs, always' - essay about drugs.

8 - People always use some kinds of drugs. Despite the effects of drugs, millions of people constantly consume (abuse?) various...

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Essay comments - "invention that has influenced modern society"

2 - Great job!! My suggestions would be other than calling, what else can a cell phone do that significantly improves...

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A Separate Peace Essay during World War II in 1943

6 - Commas can be your friend. To help you out, here are some rules on commas: grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Many teachers...

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'Liberalisation of aviation' - Airline deregulation essay

2 - The airline industry currently occupies a very important place in the Irish market, due to both the major changes...

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writing technique advices for the essay " regular and election days"

8 - It is better than it was, certainly. You now sound more thoughtful, and have gone into more depth on...

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Odyssey essay; 'Sure God created man before woman...'

6 - Well, for a high school or undergraduate essay... really for any essay... quotes can be added in at the...

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Peony in love is my favorite book. Take a read of this essay

5 - Jerry, that is some great advice. Actually, the thesis sentence often goes at the end of the first paragraph....

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response paragraph for the essay "why we crave horror movies"

4 - Hi Thanks a lot for your corrections. This is my essay i really want to know whether i have...

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Essay comments - "A place you go to relax"

4 - Thank you two for the feedback! I will change the end of the first paragraph to (my thesis statement):...

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Internet has given people access to information; we can't live easily without

3 - Beyond the advice you've already been given, you should revise "With the development of Technology, people have chance to...

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Aunt Junko, essay feedback

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for IELST...." sports or physical course is importmant "essay

5 - Is that true? Wow, schools should not drop phys. ed... it is so important! I is even important for...

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An essay about privacy and communication

4 - Another example is that when people use Internet cafés to check their email, some may forget to sign out...

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Reflective Response on "To Build a Fire" by Jack London

2 - Nice job! Just use commas to introduce quotes: I think that the author does an excellent job building...

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TOEFL: If you could invent sth new, what product would you develop?

3 - however i will resist the temptation because mine MY device in the long term will dissolve this issue WILL...

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Paper feedback on Nationalized Healthcare

2 - Not bad. A few questions you might want to consider: "the lack of health care is a growing...

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Writing to improve my essay - New Year resolution

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PERSONAL ESSAY, does it fit? (Pose an original question and answer it.)

NEW - Pose an original question and answer it. (500 words or less): Imagine that you've just finished writing your...

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History and China - Why Lehigh, need corrections

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"Prevention is better than cure" IELTS essay - much band score I can get?

2 - This concept represents the opportunity to avoid many diseases if we take proactive steps before a problem forms. Previously,...

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Essay: "What is art for me?"

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Business Law Essay feedback (Stevens, Wiley & Co)

4 - Yes, these are supposed to be grounded in your course readings. Good luck! It's hard, but it can be...

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Academic Interest (I like math, physics and economics)

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Account of Activities

NEW - Activity 1 In the early 2008, I participated in Beijing Olympic Games Volunteering Service. I filled in the online...

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Essay comparing two Short Stories-Topic: Naive Narrator

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"the land of the east and west" - my personal essays

6 - YES! You are right to cut it down. When you write something, just like when you do anything else,...

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"George Richman" - need revision help on writing a narrative

3 - During one summer day, Rich City was blooming with beauty. The trees are fully grown, everything is green, the...

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Essay on the Greate Gatsby novel

4 - ...and he also provides a contradictory view: "The whole town is desolate. You can take out the word...

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Duality of good and evil essay

5 - You might find it helpful to read other works that present philosophies of good and evil The Virtue of...

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notre dame essay! - look through and give any suggestions

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distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom lear

2 - Well, in your work there were a lot of mistakes. It's the way you think that is excellent!...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Dec 16, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 17, 2008

"Experience of Cultural Difference" essay (pls. help revise, thanks)

2 - For family reasons, I have visited New Zealand on many occasions, and have savored a distinctive cultural atmosphere. ...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Dec 17, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 17, 2008

"The Healthy Americans Act" - essay

3 - Thank you, it really helped!...

Writing FeedbackAndrew - Dec 16, 2008 / Andrew - Dec 17, 2008

Need revision with Humanity Paper on "is humanity good/evil"

2 - You might want to consider taking issue with the question here. Good and evil are moral concepts that presuppose...

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Naturalism v Modernism - comparison essay

2 - You might want to consider picking three or four of the main characteristics of each movement and comparing each...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Dec 16, 2008 / EF_Sean - Dec 17, 2008

it is better to marry someone who is similar to you - essay

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Writing FeedbackAsselya - Dec 16, 2008 / Asselya - Dec 17, 2008

Multilateral Aid is like water; it can float a boat but it can also sink a boat.

5 - No, I didn't think you were being rude! Words are a difficult means of communication.. :) Kevin...

Writing Feedbackrice - Dec 16, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2008

"A Heart's Ruin" - Romeo and Juliet Essay

3 - Here are some ideas: Most characters play major roles in the tragedy, but Romeo presents the greatest evidence...

Writing Feedbackdorukanji - Dec 15, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2008

what are some of the experiences that have shapped your outlook and the way

NEW - Nowadays our daily life and time are moving faster than it did several centuries ago. That is why every...

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"Scientific Creativolution: Are Evolution and Creation Sciences?"

10 - Would anyone else like to aid in my endeavor? I'd be much obliged to get multiple perspectives....

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Essay: Preserve the old buildings; keeping distinguishing features of a city

2 - In my point of view, the importance of maintaining the historic buildings of a city could outweigh the value...

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"My hobby" essay (reading)

4 - Yes, how do you convey a feeling? I recommend making some time to read stephen king's On Writing. ...

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Charlotte Brontë: Jane Eyre Essay

3 - thank you! i'll work on it...

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person's childhood are the the most important years of a person's lives.

NEW - Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to...

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"My Dad in Me" essay need help with editing and any other things you notice

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Choose one of the following transportation vehicles - essay, change lives

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toefl: Why are groups or organizations important to people?

3 - During our life, it is inevitable that we may be related with any groups or organizations; therefore, groups and...

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Essay on mandatory School Uniforms. Need revision help.

2 - The most noticeable problem with this essay is that you cut back and forth between both sides of the...

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"I love my friends" essay, help edit

3 - Yes, your writing is technically sound, so that is great. You have good spelling and grammar. Now, can...

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