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Music helps to create an environment without barrier for people to understand more about each other

3 - I notice the use of academic vocabulary in the first 3 paragraphs. However, improvements still need to be made...

Writing Feedbackhannie286 - Nov 2, 2023chau_pham - Nov 2, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - topic about crime prediction

3 - thank you so much for checking my essay! i deeply appreciate your effort. I just want to clarify that...

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[IELTS TASK 1 - MAP] - changes in Felix Stone

2 - For starters, you can lower your word count to better suit the 20 minute writing time frame. Learn to...

Writing Feedbackchau_pham - Nov 1, 2023Holt - Nov 1, 2023
In many countries obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing. What are the reasons for this?

2 - Avoid such exaggerated references in the restatement. Remember that the original topic is based upon logic. Therefore, only...

Writing Feedbackquynhhoa123 - Oct 31, 2023Holt - Nov 1, 2023
GKS Graduate Nursing Science Feb

2 - While I admire your openness in this essay, there is also such a thing as oversharing, which you have...

Scholarshipm1lly3 - Oct 31, 2023Holt - Nov 1, 2023
Social Ethical Theories with an Emphasis on Deontology as a preferred solution

NEW - Help me compare and contrast deontology and utilitarianism theories. The aim will be to challenge the differences in...

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ielts writing task 2: Fossil fuels (e.g. coal and natural gas) are the main source of energy

3 - @Holt thank you sm for your feedback, that's so true, i just want it to be convincing as much...

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Esssay about should be encouraged to use computers from an early age(agree or disagree)

2 - The increased word count did not help this essay achieve a passing score. That is because the proper discussion...

Writing Feedbackjohnnguyenav - Oct 30, 2023Holt - Oct 31, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free libraries vs Internet

4 - Well written essay, yet too long since the maximum count words is 350 words only. Try to use more...

Writing Feedbackgreattako - Oct 26, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 31, 2023
Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use

3 - The introduction paragraph has more potential to be paraphrased compare to the current version to support your opinion towards...

Writing Feedbackbbaoling - Oct 26, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 31, 2023
WHO ARE YOU? WHAT ARE YOU MOST PROUD OF? AND HOW WOULD YOUR FRIENDS, FAMILY, AND PEERS DESCRIBE YOU.

2 - You misunderstood the prompt. You are supposed to highlight several aspects of your personality, from the point of view...

Undergraduatemauu - Oct 30, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
The chart provides information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration; IELTS TASK 1

2 - You must always identify the type of image being presented for clarity purposes. Simply saying a chart was presented...

Writing FeedbackSakuradesu - Oct 29, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
IELTS Writing task 1 - pie charts present the expenditure of senior students in 3 high schools

2 - Kindly identify the type and number of images next time you write a task 1 essay. It will help...

Writing Feedbackvaananh - Oct 28, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft

2 - Good response. What is the basis? Where is the thesis statement meant to support your opinion? You should...

Writing Feedbackcrazycat1139 - Oct 27, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
Chevening Essay on Relationship building and shared learning

2 - You hit the notes needed for the networking aspect of the discussion. but you are lacking in the diversity...

Scholarshipardiarmanto - Oct 27, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
Battling With A New Environment - Common App application essay

2 - When you say you are battling a new environment, you should first, explain what your original environment was. How...

ScholarshipSanB - Oct 26, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
How you meet the key selection criteria for the Scholars Program At University of Edinburgh

2 - You cannot select which portions of the criteria to address in the essay. Those are not optional questions or...

ScholarshipAamxr - Oct 26, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
IT IS BETTER TO SPEND TIME WITH A GROUP OF PEOPLE THAN TO SPEND TIME ALONE

2 - Please rewrite this essay. It is not the kind of essay that you can complete within 40 minutes. It...

Writing Feedbackfateema - Oct 26, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
IELTS Writing task 1:The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale

5 - @hannah suitor thanks you so much...

Writing Feedbackvinh_xuan_nguyen - Oct 25, 2023vinh_xuan_nguyen - Oct 28, 2023
Should English be the official language in Vietnam? Write an 400 word essay with clear explanantion

4 - Your writing demonstrates a good level of vocabulary accuracy and coherence. However, there are a few areas where you...

Writing Feedbackwanttobebetter - Oct 21, 2023hannah suitor - Oct 27, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - READING BOOKS AMONG KIDS IS IN DECLINE

NEW - The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons...

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WRITTING TASK 2 : OPINION ON FREE COLLEGE

3 - Besides of the length of words that insufficient for the test's standard, there are so much lacks from your...

Writing FeedbackTung VIETNAM - Oct 26, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 27, 2023
IELTS writing task 2 owing a home rather than renting one is very important

4 - It doesn't clear whether the instruction of the essay to provide the discussion between the both views or comparison...

Writing Feedbackjane223 - Oct 20, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 27, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SELF STUDY for secondary school students

NEW - "It is said that self-study is very important for secondary school students". Do you agree or disagree with the...

Writing Feedbackwanttobebetter - Oct 26, 2023 -
TASK 2 People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve?

3 - in the first paragraph, do not use 'I' if the question doesn't include the word 'you'. Besides, your introduction...

Writing Feedbackphamkhuyen - Oct 25, 2023wanttobebetter - Oct 26, 2023
The urbanisation rate in South Korea and Indonesia

2 - Point deductions will be applied for the insufficient image description. Majority of the images presented in a task...

Writing Feedbackkhanhvy206 - Oct 25, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat from 1979 to 2004

2 - While the presentation does indicate a chart, you did not identify the kind of chart presented, which poses...

Writing Feedbacklanhoangngoc - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
IELTS task 1: The bar chart compares five countries in terms of movies' production from 2007 to 2009

2 - The essay is unnecessarily long. You wrote more than 250 words, making this a task 2 essay presentation instead...

Writing FeedbackLillingg - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
Chevening Essay on Leadership and Influence - Forest Restoration Leadership

2 - Remove the reference to your parents, leading a nomad life, and the community participation that you had during your...

Scholarshipardiarmanto - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
The graph and table shows the amount of water used for various purposes

2 - Your first paragraph is going to earn you a failing preliminary GRA score. Avoid writing long sentences in that...

Writing Feedbacknghiaphong - Oct 23, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
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