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IELTS Writing task 1_Table_The number of visitors in the UK and their average spending

2 - The analysis portion of the essay is well developed. Although, a little bit more discussion would have helped you...

Writing FeedbackTTT3miml - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
GKS Graduate Program 2024 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Interior Architecture

2 - While your motivations for applying to the program are admirable, you seem to fall short of the other qualifications...

Scholarshipsselene - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
the importance of Oneness

2 - Better than one? One what? I think you meant to say "Standing as one is better than standing...

Writing Feedbackclyro - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
The international community should reduce or eliminate the debts of the world's poorest countries

2 - It is not enough to simply be against the idea presented when developing the Writer's opinion. Review the required...

Writing Feedbackdotranuyennhi - Feb 20, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people

2 - While the restatement of the topic is aligned with the original discussion, there is a problem with the writer's...

Writing Feedbackcardilua - Feb 20, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Maritime and Logistics Management; how will the proposed study contribute to your career

2 - You can remove the first paragraph in this case. It is not really an opening that directly responds to...

ScholarshipAroma - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Sop to pursue PhD in Climate Change/ Hydrology

2 - I really did not see any purpose behind this statement. A statement of purpose should not be confused with...

ScholarshipNahida Naya - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Media - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? AUSTRALIAN AWARDS ESSAY

2 - Expand on these discussion points at the very start. These will be the basis of your university...

ScholarshipLordLordy - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
There are more workers working from home and more students studying from home

2 - Pick one. You cannot use both in an actual test. This sort of undecided writing will cost you...

Writing FeedbackAyan Nguyen - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - WORK AND STUDY FROM HOME

2 - The paraphrasing for the original topic is acceptable. The writer understood the writing task as can be seen from...

Writing Feedbackngducng - Feb 17, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - You have not met the 250 word count for the presentation. This will be an automatic failing score essay...

Writing Feedbackastu123 - Feb 17, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Ielts writing task 2- animal experimentation

2 - While your essay meets the word requirement of 250 words, and you will avoid penalties based on word count,...

Writing Feedbackgalaxy94 - Feb 16, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 2: Online and traditional classroom

3 - In the conclusion you need to summarize the information that you have analyzed and give your personal opinion about...

Writing FeedbackRandomStudent - Feb 16, 2024cardilua - Feb 20, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus - Advanced spectroscopy in chemistry (ASC)

2 - Being an Erasmus Mundus motivational letter, I was expecting a far more interesting and informative presentation than this. Your...

Lettersblanicen - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Personal statement for master in information technology with artificial intelligence specialization

2 - Since this is a personal statement, it should not touch on your academic and professional exposure. The personal statement...

Graduateuserc - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Short statement of purpose for RSM MSc about entrepreneurship and Climate Change.

2 - My opinion is that you do not really respond to the question being asked. Your introduction is confusing and...

Graduateantoinebernzrd - Feb 14, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
The graph below gives information on the performance of a train company in October and November

2 - When you mention the type of image, it would be best for your score if you immediately include information...

Writing Feedbackhaminhuynh - Feb 14, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS TASK 1] Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished

2 - The most ideal word count for a task 1 essay would be 175 words. That would assure you of...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Feb 13, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Essay for MS application (Topic: Comparison between two types of Electric Vehicles and their future)

2 - Unfortunately, I am not impressed by the writing level you have presented in this essay. Rather than sounding like...

ScholarshipHassan007 - Feb 13, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Personal statement in Plant Pathology Ph.D. for KGSP scholarship 2024

2 - You are already applying for a PhD scholarship. One of the highest levels of academic study. So application information...

Scholarshipaya ibrahim - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Sonography program essay for application

2 - The story about your grandma and how she inspired you to become a sonographer is the worst story you...

UndergraduateMallorykight - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
For Review- Letter of motivation for Global Scholarship under Lund University, Sweden

2 - Paragraph 5 should be further developed. That paragraph offers you the opportunity to further enhance your qualifications as a...

Lettersnafiz33 - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
YSEALI essay application: The Future of Mental Health In Southeast Asia (2024 theme)

2 - You need to set up an actual scenario in the response to the prompt. The situation has to be...

Undergraduatehmaily - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of households

4 - For the overview: I recommend you to look at the tendency of all keys, you should also be able...

Writing Feedbacksandy21709 - Jan 31, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
Benefit of playing video games. Give reasons and examples

3 - When you write an essay, do not use contractions ( don't) , and after "such as", you do not...

Writing Feedbackannchf - Feb 5, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

3 - The question simple asks you to name and explain some pros and cons of the situation. So you should...

Writing FeedbackErik79 - Feb 6, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 15, 2024
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

5 - Not only indicating the start and the end year, you should also mention the measurement in the introduction, which...

Writing Feedbackmylinh3001 - Jan 20, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.

4 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate on your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing FeedbackLouis Tran - Jan 24, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
[TASK2] As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. AGREE OR DISAGREE?

3 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate in your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing Feedbackchloepham - Jan 30, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
[WRITING IELTS TASK 2] Topic Social

3 - You should paraphrase the topic to improve your LR score. Take the introduction for example: People's reveling in entertainment...

Writing Feedbackmeadow - Feb 7, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
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