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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The news media should show equal amount of good and bad news

2 - You have failed to justify your opinion in this essay so it will not get a passing score. The...

Writing Feedbackhinam74 - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
[ IELTS WRITING TASK 1] The percentage of people going to the cinema once a month according to ages

2 - You failed to do a complete identification of the image for the summary overview. You need to specify the...

Writing Feedbackhaibinh20 - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Juveniles should receive the same punishments as the adults. To what extend do you agree or not?

2 - Be careful with your word usage. The wrong word can decrease your LR, GRA, and C+C scores. Rejevenating...

Writing FeedbackMaeve111 - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Why? Effects on society

2 - This is an empty thesis statement. There is no basis for this discussion presentation. What reasons relate to...

Writing Feedbacktieuthanh - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
WRITING TASK 2: People are spending less time with their families. What are the reasons + effects?

2 - Part of the preliminary scoring process is based on your ability to present summary responses to the given...

Writing FeedbackAdamClaus - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Young people are required to work without pay in their free time to help the local community

2 - This is a comparison essay that is based on the advantages v. disadvantages of the given topic. The overall...

Writing FeedbackNhun - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Writing Task 1: Statistics of people who passed their driving exam in an Asian country in four years

3 - Here my opinion: - "it is clear that higher percentage of women who passed the test than men who...

Writing Feedbackrosiiieee12345 - Aug 4, 2023eya123456 - Aug 14, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum; writing motivation letter to apply for a one-tier master's degree in medicine

NEW - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter - Medicine My motivation letter: Dear Admission Committee, I am writing this...

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Task 1: The percentage for clothes, books, film, music and travel in online sales in New Zealand

4 - In my opinion, your essay is excellent! There is only one thing that could be improved to do better...

Writing Feedbacksemmast - Aug 5, 2023Tonynhan - Aug 14, 2023
In the chart the proportion of women employed in the USA, Korea, Afghanistan and France

4 - I love the way you describe the given data in the chart. But the final paragraph you connect the...

Writing FeedbackKbang - Aug 6, 2023selenakieu - Aug 14, 2023
Many museums, historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not by the locals - IELTS WRITING

2 - The writer's opinion could have used a clearer reference to the questions being asked instead of merely repeating the...

Writing Feedbackchauphan224 - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
Who do you think should fund medicine and treatments researches: individuals or the government?

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Advertising in social media such as Facebook or Youtube

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Writing FeedbackNhatnotop - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries

2 - Use at least 2 sentences for the summary overview. You will get an impressive summary score if you use...

Writing Feedbackmmmphugn - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
Financial support to poorer countries is not effective

2 - The summary overview does not need to be a social studies lesson. It should only be composed of 2-3...

Writing Feedbackurrachelbae - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
WRITING TASK 1: The graph below shows the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004

2 - ther eis a conflict in this reference between the singular and plural words. 4 indicates a plural number...

Writing Feedbacktp123 - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
The data about the volume of travelers who visited an island in the Caribbean between 2010 and 2017

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your evaluation. I will have some fixes and adjustments in my next test....

Writing FeedbackRTroMT - Aug 4, 2023RTroMT - Aug 11, 2023
Writing task 1: The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it: This is the overview part I have...

Writing Feedbackeya123456 - Aug 4, 2023eya123456 - Aug 10, 2023
What brings more merits - getting an occupation or continuing studies after finishing school?

3 - @Holt that you mean those in body graph? sorry I dunno exactly what u mean to improve my writing...

Writing Feedbacknhim3607 - Aug 1, 2023nhim3607 - Aug 10, 2023
The pie charts show results of a survey of university about their part-time and full-time students.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other

2 - Do not over emphasize your opinion statement. It is not necessary in this case since you were not...

Writing FeedbackStellalightfairy - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
Writing task 1: The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry's sectors contribution

2 - You incorrectly interpreted the image. When you say between, that means there are years mentioned that connect the...

Writing FeedbackVivian Gia Linh - Aug 4, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
Both views to indicate the impact of using phones by students in school

2 - It is fine that you told the reader what you will be discussing. However, you will not get...

Writing Feedbackmayanhshine1803 - Aug 4, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
My research paper on medical racism

2 - the paper seems to be lacking depth when it comes to the actual research into the background of medical...

Research Paperslexikylee - Aug 4, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
Both view when using smartphones.

2 - You atr trying to convince the examiner that you have a valid opinion regarding the subject based on...

Writing FeedbackQngiua - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
It is argued that parents should educate their kids to become a good person in society, not school

2 - This sentence will result in preliminary task accuracy score deductions. That is because you did not offer a...

Writing FeedbackLehau - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
Learning history in school

2 - Try to write no more than 300 words with your next essay. You cannot write more than that during...

Writing Feedbackhayeon1402 - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
Children should do organized activities or be free in their free time.

2 - There is a problem with the prompt restatement. You did not accurately restate both public opinions, standing aside from...

Writing Feedbackvantotet - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
Convenient foods will replace traditional foods in the future... you agree or disagree?

2 - You showed that you understood the writing task. You also provided the correct response format for it. The word...

Writing FeedbackNgoc Ling - Aug 2, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
IE Academic WT2 - The use of mobile phones does as much harm to the society as smoking does

2 - Wrong. You are directly being asked for your measured response as the writer of the essay. You cannot...

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