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Common App Personal Essay - Life's Journey and Lessons

2 - There seems to be a disconnection between the death of your grandmother and the silence that you suddenly decided...

Undergraduatesamaahshameer - Jan 18, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A motivation letter for a program at the University of Rome.

2 - There are actually too many screened information in this presentation for me to give you a useful observation but...

LettersLeila321 - Jan 18, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
In some cultures, children are often told that thay can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

2 - There is no need to include this in the summary paragraph. You are not being asked to give...

Writing FeedbackTOM PARKER - Jan 18, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities

2 - The opening statement will recieve a failing score. You have not properly restated the public opinions and there is...

Writing FeedbackTNhi2003 - Jan 17, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed

2 - You will lose TA points for simply repeating the writing questions instead of creating a writer's opinion based...

Writing FeedbackANDYBAO123 - Jan 17, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS Task 2- children spend hours every day on their smartphones

2 - While the English language used in the presentation is not perfect, it is acceptable enough to receive good GRA...

Writing Feedbackg1131692 - Jan 17, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Personal Statement for a MSc in Computer Science from the University College London

2 - The essay seems to be open ended. The last paragraph seems to be hanging. There is no clear concluding...

GraduateCS_Masters2024 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Application Supplemental Essay (Why Barnard)- First-Year Transfer to Barnard College

2 - I am not very convinced about the effects of traditional Chinese dance with regards to finding your most powerful...

Undergraduatenafizux - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1 (Line graph) - The money spent by British parents on their children's sport

2 - A chart is different from a line graph. The original prompt uses the term "chart" to describe the...

Writing Feedbackuyen_465 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A writting task 1 about some changes in an area

2 - Incorrect image identifier. This is a map illustration, not a graph. this mistake in image reference will affect...

Writing FeedbackPhongbeo12 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Computer Science Degree - Stepindium Hanguricum Scholarship for applying to CS BSc

2 - A motivation letter should not contain any references to your high school studies or your position upon high school...

ScholarshipMoBassem - Jan 15, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Nanyang Technological University Scholarship Essay - Value and beliefs

2 - When you speak of values and beliefs, this should relate to the way that you participate in your community....

Undergraduatelemon_macarons - Jan 15, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Allowing children to use phones at the school

2 - Well, the discussion approach could be better. For these types of comparison essays, the examiner gives extra points for...

Writing FeedbackRahma20 - Jan 15, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture

2 - Do not exaggerate your response. Know when to use a measured response to the question and when not...

Writing Feedbackkhanhan - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS-TASK2: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

3 - @Holt Thank you for your help, Im truly appreciative and I will find ways to fix it. Just one...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Dec 28, 2023caohuyen93 - Jan 18, 2024
Design: an art and a science - Personal statement for GKS-G scholarship

3 - Okay please. Will work on it...

Scholarshipkerchscholar - Jan 7, 2024kerchscholar - Jan 17, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR M.SC IN ARCHITECTURE AND URBAN DESIGN IN MILAN

3 - I really love how you take account of the feedback from the consultant and how you shape your already...

GraduateSupreena - Jan 14, 2024himca - Jan 17, 2024
IELTS task 1 report on Dairy products

3 - @Holt I want to say thank you so much for your assessment. Would it be fine if I create...

Writing Feedbacksummerchilld - Jan 13, 2024summerchilld - Jan 14, 2024
Learning and Creativity - advice SOP for masters

2 - Refrain from mentioning the 8th grade in this essay. You are applying for admission to a masters course....

GraduateAkshay66 - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Family and friends - ideas UBC personal profile

2 - You are spending too much time talking about how you influenced your friend. That is the longest aspect of...

UndergraduateIssacLee16543663 - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Visitors to Ashdown Museum: IELTS - Describe table and charts

2 - What was the rate for the extremely unfulfilled visitors? You did not indicate the percentages for that section of...

Writing Feedbackthienji - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum, for BSCS (undergraduate),Pakistani student

2 - You first indicated that your reason for applying to the scholarship is the positive experience of your friend. You...

LettersManahilFatima - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 Question: some people argue that university students should be free to choose

2 - Your first sentence in the first paragraph is misleading. There is no fiery discussion sparked across the globe. A...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 13, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
International Applicant applying for West Point seeking feedbac, Explain Why you want to attend USMA

2 - The essay response does not indicate if you will go back to your home country and serve as an...

Undergraduatesapper5446 - Jan 13, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MASTERS IN PUBLIC HEALTH FOR GKS

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I felt is not very necessary to explain in details, but I know better...

ScholarshipGlorychi - Jan 3, 2024Glorychi - Jan 13, 2024
IELTS what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

3 - Your introduction is irrelevant to the topic - you are supposed to paraphase the topic in your own words,...

Writing Feedbacknguyendf - Jan 7, 2024Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
BRAZILIAN EMIGRATION (essay for an exam)

3 - @Holt Hi, Holt! Thank you very much for your feedback. I carefully read your response and I will try...

Writing Feedbackgmt16 - Jan 12, 2024gmt16 - Jan 13, 2024
Modern technology makes people less creative?

3 - @Holt thank you so much, but can you elaborate on more about anchor topics? i actually find this term...

Writing Feedbackwalk0nastarry9 - Jan 7, 2024walk0nastarry9 - Jan 13, 2024
[IELTS Writing task 2] Countries are becoming more and more similar

3 - I think your ideas are a little seperated. Instead of listing different reasons, try to elaborate on only one...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Jan 4, 2024Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
The impact of enterprises - GKS-G GMBA | Goal of study and study plan

3 - @Holt Thank you for the review but my whole essay got edited its just the introduction part my whole...

Graduatesankook - Jan 11, 2024sankook - Jan 13, 2024
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