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TASK 1: The proportion of dwellers' increase in New Zealand between 1950 and 2020

2 - The word count is far more than what you can actually write during the actual test. Using a 20...

Writing FeedbackSallyTTT - May 14, 2023Holt - May 14, 2023
Sustaining Romantic Relationships - ENG102 research paper

2 - Before you launch into your introduction and thesis presentation, define the concept of love first. From there, merge...

Research Papersjuarezfam11 - May 12, 2023Holt - May 14, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries

3 - Thank you so much for your detailed comment. Your advice is really valuable and helps me a lot to...

Writing FeedbackNgaZuna - May 10, 2023NgaZuna - May 12, 2023
Two main tendencies in choosing subjects among different gender students

2 - Use the correct alternative gender assignment. While it is now commonplace to avoid using gender references, the English...

Writing Feedbackdiepnkn123 - May 11, 2023Holt - May 12, 2023
Motivation letter draft for Food Innovation and Design Erasmus Joint Masters Degree program

2 - This is an academic and experience biography. It is not a motivational letter that can be used for the...

Lettersnoveliaananda - May 11, 2023Holt - May 12, 2023
In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas why do you think

2 - You need to provide a sense of order in your prompt restatement and writer's opinion. Follow the flow of...

Writing Feedbacktungaan - May 11, 2023Holt - May 12, 2023
Write a brief overall description of what happening in the following volcabulary:

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I will try my best, Blessings on your day!...

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Tolstoy Essay for University class

2 - Try to avoid the use of citations within the first paragraph of the essay. That is to allow you...

Book Reportsantigeorge - May 9, 2023Holt - May 10, 2023
Video Games and their Benefits: A Research Proposal

2 - The introduction is too busy. It includes too many opinion references, none of which are actually related to the...

Research PapersZachNohKap - May 8, 2023Holt - May 10, 2023
Motivation letter for LLM in Finance application in Germany

NEW - letter of motivation Hey hey, I am considering applying for a LLM in Finance and I have...

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Write a letter to your friend telling them about the book.

2 - There are several confusing elements in your writing that affect the clarity of the your letter. The first confusing...

LettersKhuong Nguyen - May 8, 2023Holt - May 8, 2023
Writing task 1 - The rate of women and men who passed their driving test in an Asia country

2 - The summary overview is a run-on sentence. This must be presented within 2 sentences since there are 2 different...

Writing FeedbackUang2307 - May 6, 2023Holt - May 8, 2023
[WR T2] Is it necessary for schools to prize 'high-grade' students?

2 - You do not need to repeat the instructions to the examiner. He knows what you are supposed to...

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[WRTING TASK 2] Some people think it is more beneficial to take part in team sports than solo sport

3 - + Opinions differ on ... I am of the opinion ... -> Ever since the emergence of sports, there...

Writing FeedbackVivian Slay - May 5, 2023myieltsw2sucks - May 7, 2023
The proportion of travelers who visited Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and festivals in Scotland 1980-2010

2 - This essay cannot be reviewed as an accurate sample of your task 1 essay writing skills. That is because...

Writing FeedbackLinhtthao - May 5, 2023Holt - May 7, 2023
Why Sexual Assault Remains The Most Unreported Crime In Todays Society/Workplace

2 - The essay is covering too broad a topic. Either cover rape within the context of society or, in the...

Research Paperstorrii - May 6, 2023Holt - May 7, 2023
Opinion Essay: Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it almost impossibl to define?

2 - Consider properly timing yourself when you write the essay next time. Use an exam setting where you have an...

Writing Feedbacksunnychan1223 - May 5, 2023Holt - May 5, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1 about how the population component in Australia varies through a period of 15 y

2 - The bar chart is already a drawing of a measurement set. Next time, identify the type of chart...

Writing Feedbackcchauaim8 - May 5, 2023Holt - May 5, 2023
Opinion essay: Some people think news has no connection to people's lives.

3 - Last paragraph : In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that recent news is always in connection with people's life because...

Writing FeedbackNgoc Anh Le - Apr 27, 2023duiter1 - May 4, 2023
Essay: should students have a part-time job

5 - Last paragraph : To conclude, having a part-time job along with studying brings students a substantial number of benefits....

Writing FeedbackNgan555 - Apr 30, 2023duiter1 - May 4, 2023
the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one

2 - Follow the basic rule for English writing. That is, the first word of a sentence is always written with...

Writing Feedbacknickki - May 3, 2023Holt - May 4, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ON TRAFFIC JAMS

4 - metrolotians: i think it's a word to address people not" very big city". You can use" metropolis" instead...

Writing Feedbackanialee - Apr 27, 2023Ngan555 - May 3, 2023
Love for STEM and UX - Self-introduction essay for POSCO scholarship

NEW - Hi all, I want to submit a self-introduction essay for POSCO scholarship. Here's my draft. can anyone help me...

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The field of epidemiology - Why did you choose your proposed course?

2 - While this is a concise presentation of your academic goal and reasons for choosing the university, the AAS actually...

ScholarshipJay_001 - May 1, 2023Holt - May 1, 2023
[WRITING TASK 2]- MAGAZINES

2 - You have written 390 words. A number of words that cannot be accomodated during the split writing time between...

Writing FeedbackTynitex - Apr 30, 2023Holt - May 1, 2023
Practical Examples of How You Intend to Use the Knowledge, Skills and Connections - AAS Scholarship

2 - I am not sure that you should be assuming anything as an example in your discussion. Are you absolutely...

Scholarshipbrendadevita - Apr 30, 2023Holt - May 1, 2023
today is a beautiful day and i want to eat sushi

2 - You have a tendency to write long and rambling sentences. These do not help with your score in the...

Writing Feedbackmyieltsw2sucks - Apr 30, 2023Holt - May 1, 2023
The table describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901

2 - The essay is overwritten by 11 words. This could result in a lack of time to develop a proper...

Writing Feedbackakbotanuedu - Apr 29, 2023Holt - Apr 30, 2023
How has the Internet changed the way we form and maintain friendship?

2 - When writing a task 2 essay, you need to write more than 250 words. While that number is the...

Writing Feedbackduiter1 - Apr 29, 2023Holt - Apr 30, 2023
[WRITING TASK 2]: SCHOOL VIOLENCE

2 - Unnecessary reference point. Such exaggerations will not earn extra points and will result in deductions instead. Stick close...

Writing Feedbacknhuquynh7898910 - Apr 28, 2023Holt - Apr 29, 2023
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