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The multiverse theory - QUEST BRIDGE ESSAY - Is this too generic?

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I'm not exactly sure what I should take out. Due to the fact that...

Scholarshipizyuki - Mar 2, 2023izyuki - Mar 3, 2023
The arts or health and education ?

3 - The main problem with this essay is that the ideas are not well developed and your thesis is also...

Writing FeedbackLong Le - Mar 2, 2023rakeshkukkar013 - Mar 3, 2023
The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need of commuting

2 - The essay is all set to receive a failing mark. There can be no other consideration for this discussion...

Writing Feedbackcuongtran - Mar 2, 2023Holt - Mar 3, 2023
IELTS WRITING PART 2: the importance economic progress for a country

3 - Although I believe that rest of the essay is fine, there are some serious issues with your body paragraphs....

Writing Feedbackandrepr1 - Mar 2, 2023rakeshkukkar013 - Mar 2, 2023
Due to a higher life expectancy rates nowadays, the retirement age of employees should be increased

3 - @Holt Thanks for replying and advising me. Actually, I tried really hard to keep this essay under 300, but...

Writing Feedbackrakeshkukkar013 - Mar 2, 2023rakeshkukkar013 - Mar 2, 2023
TOEFL task 2 essay on dancing aiming for a full score

2 - Try to avoid using contractions in your academic writing presentations. Always spell out the 2 words necessary to deliver...

Writing FeedbackTOEFLtaker2023 - Mar 2, 2023Holt - Mar 2, 2023
Sugar-based drinks are more popular in many countries. What is it caused by?

2 - You are not being asked if the subject posed is true or false. So it is not necessary for...

Writing Feedbackkaililam260 - Mar 1, 2023Holt - Mar 2, 2023
IELTS 2: Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries.

2 - In the prompt restatement, why did you indicate "individuals" alone, which has an all encompassing age reference as opposed...

Writing Feedbacknightrain - Mar 1, 2023Holt - Mar 2, 2023
IELTS 2: Different views about whether teachers should give their students assignments or not

3 - Further explanation for P2 'Furthermore...view about school' will make this reason more convincible, why asking children to do homework...

Writing Feedbacktrangta0807 - Feb 14, 2023nightrain - Mar 1, 2023
Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, technology)

3 - 1. your essay is too long for IELTS writing. 2. informal writing, such as putting 'and' 'but' at the...

Writing FeedbackBeanMiller - Feb 27, 2023nightrain - Mar 1, 2023
More and more people no longer read newspaper or watch tv programs to get news. They get news about

3 - wow, thanks for your reply. if I rewrite the third paragraph's first sentence: even though the trend is good,...

Writing Feedbacknightrain - Feb 28, 2023nightrain - Mar 1, 2023
Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treat

2 - The essay has not followed the discussion requirement for the task. Hence, it will receive an automatic failing score...

Writing FeedbackGigi Clarkson - Feb 28, 2023Holt - Feb 28, 2023
IELTS: Parents responsibility of making their obese children fat. Should they be punish for it?

6 - The essay is quite brief and needs more supporting ideas. It is also founded several grammatical errors. I must...

Writing FeedbackKrystal Tran - Feb 18, 2023andrepr1 - Feb 28, 2023
The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students, on average, at one university

4 - The essay presented a clear overview and analyzed some primary points. There are a few grammatical errors and I...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 21, 2023andrepr1 - Feb 27, 2023
IELTS WRITING PART 2: the importance of homework for children

4 - Hi @Holt Thanks for the frank feedback. I noticed that my restatement is inaccurate and can cause a...

Writing Feedbackandrepr1 - Feb 20, 2023andrepr1 - Feb 27, 2023
Physical fitness and mental health.

2 - In - text citations are not properly referenced in this paper. While you are referencing other people and articles...

Research Papersazalieg - Feb 26, 2023Holt - Feb 27, 2023
The percentages of four recycled materials, namely paper, glass, aluminium and plastic

3 - There are lots of grammar mistakes in your essay I can barely understand your essay at some point because...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 12, 2023Panjasrose - Feb 26, 2023
IELTS Task 1 The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media

2 - You are prone to using word fillers in your reporting essays. This is not a positive thing when it...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 22, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
Writing task 1 : top ten countries which have the highest number of Internet users

2 - This is not a part of the image presentation so the reference to China's actual population is not...

Writing FeedbackPanjasrose - Feb 23, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
The percentage of people in each age group who watched a film in cinema regularly (1984-2003)

2 - Even though you wrote 7 words over the advised 200 maximum word count for this presentation, the report itself...

Writing FeedbackPanjasrose - Feb 24, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
Some say that the university students should pay the full cost of their studies

2 - I have to immediately call your attention to the presentation format of this essay. I am not sure if...

Writing Feedbackabsarkhan125 - Feb 25, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
Ielts2: Video records are better way to learn the way people in the world live rather than documents

2 - Well, it appears that you are 25 words short of the acceptable word count in this presentation. That poses...

Writing Feedbackaqua modern 409 - Feb 25, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
Essay about whether or not change is good

2 - You did a very good job in the prompt restatement. Your opinion was also well developed but came short...

Writing Feedbackbaongan00006 - Feb 25, 2023Holt - Feb 25, 2023
(writing task 1) The title: Percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited different attractions.

2 - While the writer did meet the minimum word count at just over 150 words, 152 words to be precise,...

Writing FeedbackVang - Feb 24, 2023Holt - Feb 25, 2023
[Ielts 1] Numbers of young people in four countries using three types of transportation in a year

2 - The summary overview is lacking in information. There must be a reference to the measurement type, which is by...

Writing Feedbackceewlz - Feb 24, 2023Holt - Feb 24, 2023
Task 2: Many people think that it is a waste of money to save animals of endangered species like the

2 - The prompt restatement should have integrated the animal examples from the original because these animals are expected to be...

Writing FeedbackSachin341 - Feb 24, 2023Holt - Feb 24, 2023
Should governments invest money into repairing roads and highways rather than on public transport?

2 - Why did you write almost 400 words for a task 2 essay? My guess is that you did not...

Writing Feedbackacountforessays - Feb 24, 2023Holt - Feb 24, 2023
(IELTS Essay) In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large

2 - The second sentence in your prompt restatement is a problem. While it does represent a part of the original...

Writing Feedbackaurangzaib517 - Feb 24, 2023Holt - Feb 24, 2023
[Ielts 1] The proportion of school boys, based on two groups of age, who took part in various sports

3 - I'm not an expert but I think there are some major errors in this report 1. The data is...

Writing Feedbackceewlz - Feb 23, 2023Sachin341 - Feb 24, 2023
Task 2: Some people believe that governments should take large proportions of people's salary

4 - @Holt Thanks for feedback, I'll look forward to correct my mistakes....

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