ichanpants89 [Contributor]
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary Article - Trumps presidency could be good news for science [2]
Hi Lincoln,
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- There are three essential aspects that will be considered by the new president of the United States of America, Donald Trump. Those are space exploration, infrastructures, and medicines.bases will be concerned by the new president, Donald Trump...
-Those will be continuedThese particular issues will be developedusualas planned or even improved.
-EvenHowever, it comes up with several considerations.
- Firstly, in space exploration, Trump remarked his plan that NASA shouldmore concern moretoon human exploration...
-WhileMoreover, they givehave the Earth observation (...) the new way to preventof climate change to national oceanic and atmosphere association.(is it a department or what? seems ambiguous)
-In addition,Heis keenhas a tendency to rebuild more adequate public facilities such as airport and hospital.
- ...; some argue that it willcontributedamagetothe climate change .
- He has aplansplan to allocate $ 1 billion dollars for infrastructure budget , but when it comes to where he earns financial support, itthe source of that fund is still unclear.
- ... to allow importingdrugsmedicine and ease approval process of generic/affordable drugs.
- ...will make medicine's price cheaper price and easier to accessget , not only medicine but onlyalso marijuana will be legalized in several states ...
Hi Lincoln,
Here's my inputs and remarks towards your article summary. I hope you can follow through.
- There are three essential aspects that will be considered by the new president of the United States of America, Donald Trump. Those are space exploration, infrastructures, and medicines.
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- Firstly, in space exploration, Trump remarked his plan that NASA should
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- ...; some argue that it will
- He has a
- ... to allow importing
- ...will make medicine