justivy03
Oct 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / Differences in rates of various evening courses at an adult education center [3]
Hi Fauziyah, below are my thoughts on your analysis and I hope it helps with your revision.
- in rates of various evening courses at an
- adult education centerarethat were
- percentage of the age group.
- Overall,Women tendedwomen tend to enroll
- in language courses while men
- tended to choose painting classes .
- Atfirsta glance,
- it can be seen that mostof coursenumber of participants are in the 50+ age group.
- In this case, woman who attended language class
-In the oppositeOn the other hand ,
- Turning to the pie chart,
- most of the participants of the evening courses was filled
- Participantsin the under the 20 age group washas doubled narrow compared byto 20-29 age group at 5 percent.
There you have it Fauziyah, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your revision and for future writing reference, mind the accuracy of your information, make sure that you observe this through and through.
Hi Fauziyah, below are my thoughts on your analysis and I hope it helps with your revision.
- in rates of various evening courses at an
- adult education center
- percentage of the age group.
- Overall,
- in language courses while men
- tend
- At
- it can be seen that most
- In this case, woman who attend
-
- Turning to the pie chart,
- most of the participants of the evening courses was filled
- Participants
There you have it Fauziyah, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your revision and for future writing reference, mind the accuracy of your information, make sure that you observe this through and through.