akbarmappiare
Aug 23, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary TED Try Monotasking To Be Successful In The Multitasking World [2]
Hi Farida..
These are my corrections.
Multitasking is doing many jobsin AT one time.
There are only A few people who
people to considerabout the
products whichhas HAVE successful result
Note:
I am pleased to read your summary. Honestly, you show the prestigious progress. I have not found major errors. Besides that, although you did not write plenty of the sentences, you describe the information well. However, I have the suggestion for you. You should explain the speaker of TED's video at the first sentence. The introduction of your summary explained the speaker and its expertise.
Overall, it is a useful summary .
I am looking forward to reading again.
Hi Farida..
These are my corrections.
Multitasking is doing many jobs
There are only A few people who
people to consider
products which
Note:
I am pleased to read your summary. Honestly, you show the prestigious progress. I have not found major errors. Besides that, although you did not write plenty of the sentences, you describe the information well. However, I have the suggestion for you. You should explain the speaker of TED's video at the first sentence. The introduction of your summary explained the speaker and its expertise.
Overall, it is a useful summary .
I am looking forward to reading again.