Writing Feedback / Positives and Negatives of Zoos [NEW]

Have you ever gone to the zoos? Usually, zoos are used for the parents to take their children for a media learning to explain something new about animals. In their home, maybe their children only know animals from a picture, a television, a magazine, an internet, toys, and many others. But in the zoo, they can do an interactive communications with the animals and sees the real animals directly. In general, there are a lot of advantages about the zoos for many people. But, it has a several disadvantages too about the zoos. For the people who have pros sides about the zoo, they said which zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation. Nowadays, most of animals are used for an experimental research by human. Because of that condition, the population of many animals is decreased with abnormal cycle. The second opinion who stands at pros side said that zoos are educational, interesting and fun. As I said before that in the zoo, which has visitors starting from kids, teens and adult, they can do a lot of positive thing such as make an interactive communications with the animals and it makes them feel happy. And actually kids and teens can learn and get a lot of new information about animals in the zoo.

The people, who have stood at the contradictive side, said that zoos have a lot of disadvantages. The first one is, animals are kept in cages or have a limited space. As a building that made by the human, because human just have a limited area, the effect was felt by the animals. They only have a limited area from the others and make them stressed and confused because of that. The second opinion for the people who stood on the contradictive side said which animals are losing the freedom to hunt for food. In the zoo, the animals have a habit to wait the food from human, and because of that condition, they lose their instinct for hunt for food and also lose an animal's instinct.

As far as I am concerned, even though zoo has a lot of advantages and disadvantages, zoo is one of a realistic place to bringing your children to give many positive influences for them. In that place, you are just not getting information about the animals, but also it can make your quality family become a best one because of the entertainment in that place.

Writing Feedback / Pros and Cons About Vegetarianism : Perspectives Opinion [3]

There are many opinions about pros and cons of being vegetarian. The opinions that agree about that said, being vegetarian same like you choose the side to be a healthy one. Vegetarians are just consumption of the foods which concern on vegetables and they leave the protein from the meat. Being vegetarians besides for saving the rare animals, it has a lot of benefits for people who do that. The first one, being vegetarian can make your body has a good looking. Because they consume a lot of vegetables and fruits which contains much fiber to carry out digestion. Besides, vegetables and fruits are keeping our stomach full much longer and they have fewer calories. The second benefits being vegetarians are to make your body fresh for a long time. Being vegetarian means that to decrease calories from the meat and increase a nutrition and vitamin for your body. The vitamin and nutrition from the fresh vegetables and fruits make your body healthy than before and spared from the others disease.

The people who have a contradictive opinion about vegetarianism said that vegetarians do not eat a balanced diet. Being vegetarian means that you can lose a lot of protein from your body because of protein just has from the animals' meat. The others bad things being vegetarian are you can lose a vitamin B12 and makes you placed a syndrome anemia pernicious. Because of many vegetarians is not brought in the eggs and some milk on their foods. And also being vegetarians makes you lose vitamin D which needs for your body to enter the calcium, because vitamin D is too difficult to find on the vegetables and fruits.

Even though there are a lot of pros and cons about vegetarianism, I suggest to all of vegetarians is not forgetting to eat some meat because of it has a lot of benefit too for our body such as a protein, vitamin B12, calcium, and others. But for vegetarians, not to eat too much to keep your vegetarians program still works.

Writing Feedback / There are several factors for people to move around and it have advantages and also disadvantages. [3]

Writing Task 2 : The advantages and disadvantages about move around to another place

Nowadays, people have to live in a several different places in their lifetime. However, it is totally different with the old generation which has to stay in one place throughout their life. There are several factors for people to move around and also it has advantages and disadvantages.

In my view, people have to move to the others city because of job opportunities. Most of them believe that they can find the other works which has more salary than they had. And also, most of companies obligate their officers to move to other areas of companies to make improvisation within their position in the companies. As such, people have to move to other areas because of their professionalism for companies.

What is more, I think the most advantage to go to another place is people can learn about original culture in each area. It can increase our knowledge and ability to face others personality, which method that we have to apply with them. For example, if we meet people from western, we have to be more respectful with them because of their culture is a like that. As a contrast, if we meet person from western, we have to be more expressive and being who we are. As such, move to other places can improve our knowledge about culture of each place.

However, there are some disadvantages when you go to new places. Firstly, it is more stressful, as people have to adapt to the new environment. It takes longer time to know about characteristic of new people in their new vicinity. Secondly, people have to learn about something new in their community, and sometimes people do not want to do that because they do not have enough time.

All in all, I think there are more advantages if people move to somewhere new because it makes change, not only your knowledge but also your skill and method to face new people and environment. If human beings do the same things all the time, they will not develop new interests or find out about the world.

Writing Feedback / Summarize Graphic Chart 4 on Cambridge Book - Starmouth School library statistics [2]

The graph gives information about the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School. There are two categories that shown based on the chart. The first one is amount of books read by students, and the second one is four-year period about the statistic. Overall, amount of books read by girls reached a peak in 2012 and the boys reached a top in 2011.

According to that chart, a number of books read by girls increased gradually on the 2009 - 2010, which are thirty-five books. It was followed by another slightly rise in the next year, among 2010 - 2011 on twenty books. However, the girls read books immediately during 2011 - 2012 for forty books and it made this period to be a top list position. Due the fact of that condition, it made them to be a sharp rise statistic based on the chart.

According to the chart, amount of books read by boys increased slowly during 2009 - 2010, which are fifteen books. But, there was followed by a dramatic rise on the next year among 2010 - 2011 on sixty books and also it reached peak condition. However, there was a sharp fall on the next year, which are on 2012 and the statistic of boys condition become fluctuated during 2009 - 2012.

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Writing Feedback / Opinions about Advertising : The Advantages on Situation [5]

Advertising creates demand for products. With advertising, the companies can tell the consumers about their products and also if the consumers know about their products, the application for their products is increase immediately. However, advertising is necessary in free market economies. In the free market economies like the internet and social media, its can help the companies or the person to sell and to introduce their new products or their old products. If the companies or the person use the advertising massively, they can get a lot of income for that because they can do anything with advertising. Even though their own products are not good for the people but if the advertising to packaging the products is good, many people will buy the products. To controlling of the massive progress in advertising, it should be regulated. The regulation must been exist to make a rule about how to make a healthy advertising for the consumers, the products that can be on advertisements, and the others rules.

Writing Feedback / Summarize TED video : Bill Gates talk about mosquito, malaria, and education [4]

Based on the TED video by Bill Gates with topic mosquito, malaria and education, we know that Bill Gates with his foundation tried to reduce amount of malaria case in many country, especially on development country. He said that this disease always give the infection to the child, which has 1 - 5 years old. To make it clear, he has a statistic during amount of the children were born, and amount of children were died before the age of five. At 2002, there are 135 million children were born and less than 10 million of them died before the age of five. He said that it was a phenomenal thing, which is one of those lives matters a lot. As a conclusion of his speech, he believes that we have to increase our efforts to make a deal on the destiny of next generation because they are the part of us to make a better life in the future.

Writing Feedback / The bar chart shows amount of carbon dioxide emissions from different forms of transportation [4]

The table gives information about the percentage of travelers' per-form of transport and average age of traveler. The table shows amount of carbon dioxide emissions from different forms of transportation. All in all, the most common means and causes the most pollution of transport is experienced by car-driver only.

According to the table, self driver only the most popular forms of transport, which is forty-eight percent. The second favorite means of vehicle is train or bus, which are thirty-seven percent. The least common forms of transportation is a cycle or walk, in four percent. And also at the second line of table, train or bus comes to the highest average age of travelers, on forty-seven years old. The lowest average age of passengers is cycling or walking, which is thirty-nine years old. If we make a comparison among the highest and the least mid-age of the travelers, the gap is no more than ten years old.

Based on the bar chart, self driver causes the most pollution means of transport, which is around 0,3 kilograms carbon dioxide. The second most smog is a car with more than one person, which is 0,05 kilograms carbon dioxide. The least or no pollution form of transportation is cycling or walking.

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Writing Feedback / Animal Rights : a contradictive perspectives about The Rule [3]

Several times later, animals are used in research for some products (cosmetic, medicine, etc) before used to humans. Because of that, there are many pros and cons from the activists whom love the animals. The activists believe that the research for the animals is breaking the rule about animal rights because they did not have enough power to protect themselves from the human. For the activists that has a contra opinion, they told that even though the pro opinion said that the research is not breaking the rule. And what about from the animals' side? If they can talk like a human being, the activists that have a contra opinion think maybe the animals did not want to be a human experiment for their research. Because when the animals become an experiment, all of human do a bad thing for them like beating and torturing them. The other opinion said that some animals that used for a research is not similar to human, like a rabbit and a mouse. For that condition, maybe the effect from the research is not working for the human. This is why the experiment has a bad thing for the human and also for the animals. Except that, because of the animals like chimpanzee and monkey have a similarity with human being, it is right to do an experiment for them? It is like do the experiment for human too because they have an intelligence and consciousness like human being. So because of that fact, even though we can do an experiment with the animals, as a human like the others, I suggest you are not to do that because it makes the animals hurt and get a bad thing from the research.

Writing Feedback / Summarize TED video : Al Gore, New Thinking On The Climate Crisis [2]

Summarize TED video : Al Gore, New Thinking On The Climate Crisis

On that TED video, Al Gore argues that the way to make more people care about the environmental crisis is to write legislation dealing with the environment. On that video, he explain about a lot of problems during human become an extinct population, such as global warming, a war, lack of green areas, and also a problems about how care a people with another one. He believe, when people have a bit more care each others, many dispute can be solve more easily because they can feel the same things with others. To make his arguments become a real, he wanted legislation focused on the environment and make it very near the bottom of congressional list of concerns. The aforementioned evidence reveals that government with they legislation is more close to the environment, to make them believe that their government do a right things. And also, Al Gore focuses more on the political side of what can we do to help the environment.

Writing Feedback / Police and Crime Prevention, a perspective opinion [2]

Have you ever imagined the cities without crimes in them? Truthfully, communities hope that polices doing their job as maximum as possible to decrease the amount of crimes in their cities, because the job of polices are to catch criminals. And polices must also prevent crime and make communities safer. When polices did not do their job as maximum as possible to decrease amount of crime at cities, a huge number of societies at cities feel anxious with their cities and also they lose their confidence to police officers. But, when police officers try to do their job to cut down crimes at their working areas, they have internal problems such as lack a number of police officers. As a result, sometimes there are vast number areas which cannot be reach by polices. The problem can be solved by them with increasing the number of police officers on the streets, to make them available to reach the other areas.

Police officers should be seen as part of the community, because to maximize their program to decrease a plenty of crimes, they need a help from communities too. To make their program successful to decrease considerable amount of crimes, they should be involved in the community with education and prevention. That is really important to do by police officers, because sometimes the citizen did not really pay attention about that and give responsibility to polices to prevent crime at their cities. It cannot be happened because as citizens, we have a responsibility too, like police officers for decrease a large number of crimes to safety our cities, especially our families.

The aforementioned evidence reveals that, even though police officers have a responsibility to make our cities safety from criminals, as good citizens, we must pay attention too about the crimes to keeps our beloved areas are more safety as soon as possible.

Writing Feedback / Walking around in the country comes to the top list of the reason for visiting the New Zealand [2]

International Visitors to New Zealand : reason for visit

The bar chart gives information about the reason of visitors to visit New Zealand. It has a five reasons for coming to that country, such as go to the museum, do a boat sport, climb the volcano mountains, looking for scenery, and than just walking around surroundings the country. And also at the left side of line, it has percentage of the reason to come to New Zealand. Overall, walking around on that country comes to the top list based on the chart.

According to the bar chart, walking comes to the first list and mostly reason of visitors, which is around eighty-five percent. The second most popular purpose of holidaymaker is sightseeing the scenery, with around seventy percent. If we make comparison between the first list and the second list, it has a range no more than twenty percent. And then, the third place comes to boat to surround a river or lake, which has fifty percent.

Forty-five percent comes from visiting volcanoes as the other reasons to go to New Zealand. For the least and the last, goes to visit museums, it has forty percent according to the chart. And also the range of fourth list with the last one is no more than five percent.

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Writing Feedback / Summarize TED video : Taylor Wilson, who built a nuclear fusion reactor [3]

On that video, I get information about Taylor Wilson, a young people who built a nuclear fusion reactor on his garage. It started when he was a child and he was dreaming about to make a new star on the jar. And after that he started to make it happen on his garage. There are two points on that video, the first one is nuclear fusion is our energy future and the second one is kids can really change the world. On the first point, he explains about nuclear fusion reactor and how to create it on his house. He talked about a physic theory more specific and describe about the reactor. Due the fact of his invention about nuclear fusion reactor, he won the Intel International Science and Engineering Fair and met President of United States, Barack Obama to introduce his creation. And on the second point, he believes that other kids can do the same thing like him, to find the things which can change the world.

Writing Feedback / The pie chart gives us information where people who travel to New Zealand come from [10]

International Visitors to New Zealand : country of origin

The pie chart gives us information about where people who travel to New Zealand come from. According to that data, there are six countries of origin visitors who come to New Zealand. And also on that chart, there are seven parts of chart to differentiate each country.

A closer look at that chart shows that Australia has the largest percentage for country of origin visitors on New Zealand, which is forty percent. The second place is come from United Kingdom on twelve percent. United States makes complete of top three usually visitors come from to New Zealand, on the nine percent.

The East Asian countries, China, Japan and South Korea, send five percent, four percent and three percent each. However, twenty-seven percent come from other European countries. Overall, on the pie chart we know that more than seventy percent of holidaymakers come from Britannia areas.

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Writing Feedback / Summarize Task : Itzhak Perlman, The Greatest Violinist in the World [3]

Itzhak Perlman is the greatest violinist in the world because with his inadequacy, he still can play violin very well from the others. He suffered from polio when he was child and it's damaged his legs. But he never gives up reaching his goal to be a greatest violinist in the world. So that's why, he took his first lessons when he was young child at the Music Academy of Tel Aviv and his teachers recognized that he will be a greatest one someday. Not long after that, at thirteen years old, Itzhak went to United States to appear on television, and until now, he has played in almost every major city. His music is very special because many people say that he is able to communicate the joy he feels in playing, and the emotions that great music can deliver. Because of his talent, he won a lot of awards such as Grammy Awards for his recordings and Emmy Awards for his work on television.