nda18
Nov 13, 2016
Writing Feedback / Downloading copyrighted music and books from the internet - IELTS Writing Task2 [6]
Hi, these are my thought towards your essay
1. the most crucial part of IETLS Task 2 is you should write at least 250 words.
2. you should try to arrange you essay and include these : Introduction, Body 1, Body 2, and conclusion
3. In my opinion, this trend hashad positive consequences for ...
4. released, without paying any money
[in my opinion it would be better if you write ' without purchasing it']
keep writing and good uck
Hi, these are my thought towards your essay
1. the most crucial part of IETLS Task 2 is you should write at least 250 words.
2. you should try to arrange you essay and include these : Introduction, Body 1, Body 2, and conclusion
3. In my opinion, this trend has
4. released, without paying any money
[in my opinion it would be better if you write ' without purchasing it']
keep writing and good uck