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Your English teacher asks you to make a speech to your classmates to inform them about your team.

2 - Well, the speech itself is engaging and has an excitement that will make the listener want to know more...

Speechesafsharapriana - Feb 9, 2022Holt - Feb 10, 2022
Leadership and problem-solving skills - choosing your program and Waterloo

3 - Is the length of paper enough? I think you can add some more convincing info...

UndergraduateLogi - Feb 9, 2022LLIMITT - Feb 15, 2022
Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.

2 - Neither statements provide a direct and correct response to the question. The writer cannot use a response...

Writing Feedbackimintokookcoconu - Feb 9, 2022Holt - Feb 9, 2022
Does getting a college degree guarantee you will have the career you love?

3 - Never. I got a degree in English language and Literature and work in a completely different field. I like...

Research Papersale2050315 - Feb 9, 2022LLIMITT - Feb 16, 2022
"Humility is the best teacher" - University of Washington Personal Statement

2 - While the description of your hubris at the start definitely made you a bit of a hateful person, you...

UndergraduateKalsiam - Feb 8, 2022Holt - Feb 9, 2022
Topic: People struggle with new things in their life

2 - The exam taker shows a clear grammar range and accuracy problem in the first paragraph. He has almost no...

Writing FeedbackDongba2004 - Feb 8, 2022Holt - Feb 9, 2022
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's

2 - Good move identifying the number of charts in the image. However, for clarity needs, you should use 2...

Writing Feedbackaitran2311 - Feb 8, 2022Holt - Feb 9, 2022
KGS Language Study plan (Hangul) - before and after you come. Remarkable milestone in career path

3 - @lkjhgfdsa0303 You do your preparation very well and its a good point for writing it in the first paraghraph...

Scholarshiplkjhgfdsa0303 - Feb 7, 2022nitakajole - Feb 13, 2022
Written a motivational letter for Msc in Electrical Engineering. Check out it once

3 - @holt thank you so much for went through my letter. if you noticed in paragraph no 5 i mentioned...

Writing Feedbackgolamsarwarjoy - Feb 7, 2022golamsarwarjoy - Feb 8, 2022
The internet has greatly increased our access to information

2 - This is an incorrect prompt restatement. The original prompt asks the question "To what extent do you think...

Writing Feedbackkhanguwu - Feb 7, 2022Holt - Feb 8, 2022
The diagrams illustrate the renovation works which have been made on a small island for tourism

3 - @Holt Thankyou for your feedbacks. I would appreciate if you score my essay....

Writing Feedbackkittymai - Feb 7, 2022kittymai - Feb 8, 2022
From Germany to Africa - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR A MASTERS DEGREE IN ECONOMICS

2 - Only paragraphs 2,3,5,6, and 7, work for the motivational statement. The rest of the essay is irrelevant to a...

LettersHephzibar - Feb 7, 2022Holt - Feb 7, 2022
Article: Causes of teen depression

3 - Would also like to add something regarding a sentence in your essay which is, "Last year, researchers found that,...

Writing Feedbacktranghg - Feb 7, 2022felixtobi - Feb 21, 2022
Solid education and technical skills - LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR GERMANY

3 - @Holt This LOM is to apply directly to the University, not for DAAD Scholarship. and could you suggest to...

Writing FeedbackRonal123 - Feb 7, 2022Ronal123 - Feb 7, 2022
The given pie charts depict the proportion of the standard money spent on diverse household expenses

2 - This phrase does not properly inform the reader about the number of charts that have to be dealt...

Writing Feedbackmin30070336002 - Feb 7, 2022Holt - Feb 7, 2022
I have written my language study plan for GKS, Go through it once

2 - Make sure to refer the reviewers to the attached TOPIK test certifications for all levels, even if expired....

Undergraduatetanya308 - Feb 6, 2022Holt - Feb 7, 2022
More and more people are opening accounts for social media and online banking purposes

3 - Hi there! I hope my feedback will be useful in further developing your essay! First of all, to...

Writing Feedbackthuylinh15 - Feb 6, 2022alyssa2036 - Feb 9, 2022
The bar chart shows percentages of small, medium and large companies which used social media

2 - This is not very clear in meaning. I do not doubt that the confusion in your summary presentation...

Writing FeedbackMarco phoenix - Feb 6, 2022Holt - Feb 6, 2022
Canadian Study Permit SOP - I was already refused once

2 - From the very start of the letter, I already saw at least 2 strong weaknesses in the presentation. One...

Lettersanaadi - Feb 5, 2022Holt - Feb 6, 2022
Essay on Scholarship Contribution to Human Resource Development Needs

2 - All you did was provide your work background, which is a good basis for the response, but you...

Scholarshipwahidr - Feb 5, 2022Holt - Feb 5, 2022
Aastha means faith - KGSP Personal Statement Graduate

3 - Thank you for your feedback...

ScholarshipRenu1973 - Feb 5, 2022Renu1973 - Feb 5, 2022
International Relations_Personal Statement_GKS_GRADUATE

2 - This is an interesting personal statement but, it does not reflect the total personal statement considerations for the GKS...

Graduatesolmartinez - Feb 5, 2022Holt - Feb 5, 2022
Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms

2 - While this is an interesting opinion, it should not be placed at the opening part of the prompt...

Writing Feedbacklzo_24 - Feb 5, 2022Holt - Feb 5, 2022
Study Plan to improve Foreign Languages (Korea and English degree course) before and after you come

5 - @Renu1973 I think the outline that you want to deliver is good enough. However, I suggest you to wrote...

ScholarshipRenu1973 - Feb 4, 2022helloitsme - Feb 15, 2022
IELTS Task2: Preserving traditional culture or not. We should not ignore it.

2 - The most glaring error in this task presentation is the first paragraph. The simple prompt restatement (2 sentences for...

Writing Feedbackjason83925 - Feb 3, 2022Holt - Feb 4, 2022
Recommendation letter from principal for undergraduate

2 - The letter needs to be professionally written by a writer who can use this as the actual basis of...

Lettersheartadnail - Feb 2, 2022Holt - Feb 2, 2022
Cambridge IELTS 10 Writing Task 1 - Sales of fairtrade-labelled bananas and coffee

3 - Suggestions between 1999 to 2004 => in the span of 6 years starting from 1999 the timespan =>...

Writing Feedbackmahfuj840 - Feb 1, 2022frr0717 - Feb 3, 2022
Studying hanguel - I am writing this laguage study plan for gks

3 - Hi there! It's great to see someone who is applying for the same program I tried to apply for...

ScholarshipBear26 - Feb 1, 2022alyssa2036 - Feb 2, 2022
IELTS C13 T2 - The statistics in percentage of households regarding their forms of accommodation

2 - Good work on advanced English word usage. This is definitely an impressive college level English word that will...

Writing Feedbackfrr0717 - Feb 1, 2022Holt - Feb 1, 2022
Management and leadership - PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS GRADUATE - MBA

6 - Thank you @nitakajole I appreciate your feedback. @beestory thank you so much for your advices . I wish...

GraduateHiba21 - Jan 31, 2022Hiba21 - Feb 13, 2022
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