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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE- MS STATISTICS FOR UNIVERSITIES IN USA

3 - @Holt I just completed by undergraduate studies and currently working as a graduate trainee so I don't have more...

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Education - focusing on certain subjects or studying a wide range of subject is better?

2 - While the writer has shown a clear understanding of the discussion topic and the method of discussion, he still...

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Medical Laboratory Science graduate - Motivation Letter for Stipendum Hungaricum

3 - Hello! you use words such as I really want which is kinda informal. Also the second paragraph is too...

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Give the advantages and disadvantages of attending tutoring classes.

2 - Although this is not for a TOEFL or IELTS test, the same essay writing rules apply to the formatting...

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Aerospace Engineering Motivation for KTH - the master's program at the University of Pisa, Italy

2 - The first paragraph is a throw away. The introduction it provides does not move the essay forward and fails...

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Hospitality studies and English - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - The reviewer is not interested in your childhood nor how your parents exposed you to things. Being a...

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The time I broke my promise

2 - The essay will succeed in confusing the reviewer because the writer has decided to tell the story from the...

UndergraduateYeva22 - Jan 16, 2022Holt - Jan 16, 2022
Nowadays, due to the development of medical care, human life expectancy keeps increasing

2 - The writer has taken a general discussion approach to this essay. It is understandable why he may do that...

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The number of changes in the way people got to a city hospital from 2007 to 2010

3 - Firstly, I must say, good job on the usage of cohesion. I also really like the way you used...

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What, in your opinion, would be the most important elements of an ideal world to live in?

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My creative and original thinking- Who you are-UBC essay

2 - You seem to have misread the topic focus of this statement. You are constantly referring to "I" when the...

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Patna resident - Study Plan to improve foreign languages (Korean, English, etc) for KGSP

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback and suggestions. I'll improve it....

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More and more people are seriously overweight. The solution to this problem.

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Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter- Msc in Public Health at Debrecen

3 - I really do agree with the consultant, there is no specific correlation with undergraduate course and also specific experiences...

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Ielts writing task 2: scientific research - who should take responsibility?

2 - The writer must remember that the paragraph needs to contain only basic information to meet the restatement +...

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Purdue can assist me in exploring the field of computer science in far greater detail

2 - Simply mentioning the professors names does not mean that the classes will support your interests. The focus changes from...

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Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter / Electrical Engineering at Debrecen.

6 - tks a lot for ur feedbacks, i've did some adjustments from ur suggestions as well as myself too and...

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A toy car - Stipendium Hungaricum MA motivational letter

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STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM ESSAY - BA OF ECONOMICS

6 - I think the first paragraph is unnecessary? but you can just alter it into something simple, and make it...

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Travelers using different commuters to work in Houston, their average age, transport' CO2 emission

2 - Although you wrote 163 words, way above the basic requirement, you have not done a good job at analysing...

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UCAS Personal Statement for Biomedical Engineering at a UK university

2 - I believe that you are inefficiently looking at the importance of Math and Chemistry in this case. Biomedical Engineering...

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UBC Sauder School of Business - I had changed my lifestyle - Respond to an unfamiliar situation

3 - @Holt Thank you for your help! I'll consider writing the essay in a different topic....

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Affect of global warming.

2 - The scope of this essay should cover only a general analysis of the provided topic, global warming. This...

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UWC letter of information. Reasons for application & record of extra-curricular & service activities

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UBC Essay, What is important to you? - Self-improvement is one of the most important aspects

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Morocco and engineering - HUNGARICUM SCHOLARSHIP

4 - @UKdoesntexist (don't copy-paste) Hello bro i prefer in this paragraph that you don't mention any name of any...

ScholarshipUKdoesntexist - Jan 12, 2022sdiri19 - Jan 14, 2022
The line graph illustrates how many tourists made a visit to an island in Caribbean from 2010 - 2017

2 - Okay. The most effective summary overviews are always written within 3 sentences covering the topic, high trend, low trend...

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Diagnosed with ADHD - UBC Personal

2 - Replace the total response. The additional information is to be used for your additional academic information and how these...

Undergraduatesummerarcadia - Jan 12, 2022Holt - Jan 12, 2022
UBC Pers. Profile - An important value that has been ingrained in my mindset is community engagement

2 - Community engagement is definitely one of the considerations for this prompt requirement. It is important that the writer engage...

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Football and MVP - TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE

2 - There are two things that the reviewer will be looking for when he reads the response to the questions...

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