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Conservative upbringing - TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE

2 - The response format is incorrect. This personal statement does not respond to the questions provided. Did you actually read...

Undergraduateaaravchopra2004 - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2022
Mental Health and the Preemie Parent

2 - Good work on the creation of the discussion premise. The backgrounder and topic statements are quite solid and clearly...

Research PapersSharonH - Jan 8, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2022
UBC Personal Profile First Question Essay - Adventurous

3 - also write how your friends see you as a person to get a jist of your persnality...

Undergraduatelucydobs - Jan 7, 2022aaravchopra2004 - Jan 8, 2022
ERASMUS MUNDUS LETTER OF MOTIVATION ON INTERNATIONAL LAW OF GLOBAL SECURITY PEACE AND DEVELOPMENT

2 - Please review your prompt requirements. There is a missing element in your motivation. The foundation of your interest in...

Scholarshipamnanasir77 - Jan 7, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2022
My Short Poem; Slave to my Mirror

3 - It is very well written and has a deep meaning to it....

Poetryfelixtobi - Jan 7, 2022aaravchopra2004 - Jan 8, 2022
Oral communication plays a more vital role than the written one in our life

3 - The writing prompt reminds me of one of the TOEFL independent writing tasks. As a student, who did pass...

Writing FeedbackHienngyen - Jan 7, 2022Diahr - Jan 7, 2022
How do you think you will be able to apply what you learn in workshop in your current position

2 - The most applicable aspect of this response is the fact that you see yourself applying what you will be...

ScholarshipThang Dang - Jan 7, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Despite of some drawbacks, the exchange programme would be beneficial for all teenage students

2 - Wrong reference. The prompt restatement will fail since it does not refer to the correct rephrasement that relates...

Writing Feedbackhaikhoa0914 - Jan 7, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Task 2 - Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals

2 - Fix the format of your response to fall more under the response format expectation. Combine these two...

Writing Feedbackttthienct91 - Jan 7, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Will the development of AI will make human labour obsolete

2 - I assume that this is your response to the general IELTS discussion. I base this observation on the way...

Writing FeedbackPham Nguyen - Jan 7, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Next Korean wave - GKS Personal Statement for Animation master

2 - Regardless of the divorce your father had made a contribution to your character development. Offer a few sentences...

Scholarshipbarblesiv - Jan 6, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
UBC - tell us more about an activity - medical shadowing/internships

2 - Talk about your performance within the activity only. There is no need to discuss how you got into the...

Undergraduatepogthief - Jan 6, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Pluralistic, polyphonic, unclassifiable mass - Wellesley College Supplemental

2 - I'm not sure if this section will sit well with the reviewer as the Western world views this...

Undergraduateminhthao03 - Jan 6, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Thanusan - Scholarship Essay - letter of reference by self

2 - Since this is still a recommendation letter, you still need to follow the name format for a referee....

LettersBen14062002 - Jan 6, 2022Holt - Jan 7, 2022
[Writing task 2] Computers are becoming essential part of education. Pros & cons

2 - Understood but incorrect. Your focus is on the improvement of education due to computers. The original topic refers...

Writing Feedbackphuongviet911 - Jan 6, 2022Holt - Jan 6, 2022
Motivation Letter for Matriculation and for ICP scholarship

3 - Many thanks for your reply and your guidance. Unfortunately, the scholarship has not provided guidelines on how to...

ScholarshipMullah - Jan 6, 2022Mullah - Jan 6, 2022
Computer Science - Applied for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship

6 - Just take it in consideration what @Bo I mean, take into consideration what @Holt has written. What are...

ScholarshipNoureddinehf - Jan 5, 2022Mullah - Jan 6, 2022
Human and professional - Erasmus Personal Statement: GLOCAL Global Markets and Development pathway

3 - I am not sure whether they have provided a guideline on the length of the motivation letter, kindly check....

ScholarshipGhof97 - Jan 5, 2022Mullah - Jan 6, 2022
Academic objectives and Computer engineering

5 - @Somebody3 Hello, I only finished my bachelor's several months ago, so please take my answer with a grain of...

ScholarshipSomebody3 - Jan 5, 2022Diahr - Jan 7, 2022
Privilege to collaborate with the United States - The Global UGRAD Program

2 - Why do you keep presuming? I think this is your favorite word. It is such a favorite that you...

Undergraduatesixthofjune - Jan 5, 2022Holt - Jan 6, 2022
More and more people prefer choosing online courses to learn, than attending regular classes

2 - The essay clearly missing the prompt restatement + personal opinion paragraph. This is the first paragraph that is presented...

Writing FeedbackKoharu - Jan 5, 2022Holt - Jan 6, 2022
Some people think young people are not ready for crucial positions in the government...

3 - While the points you make are quite good, I believe it can be presented in a better way. At...

Writing Feedbackdnthao2932018 - Jan 5, 2022kaching00 - Jan 7, 2022
International Master Global Markets, Local Creativities - Statement of Purpose Draft

2 - The applicant should not open the essay by discussing the accomplishment of someone else. Rather, the opening statement should...

Scholarshipeleven_11 - Jan 4, 2022Holt - Jan 5, 2022
Math, more than just numbers and figures - a personal life experience with lessons gained from it

2 - The essay is insightful based on the personal aspect. However, it does not reflect on how it affected those...

ScholarshipTPK05112003 - Jan 4, 2022Holt - Jan 4, 2022
Applying for a Master's degree in computer science; MOTIVATIONAL LETTER OF THE STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM

3 - @Helpmar Your application is tooo long it think you should make attention on the right question of the program...

LettersHelpmar - Jan 4, 2022Noureddinehf - Jan 5, 2022
The graph depicts the proportion of releasing carbon dioxide from each citizen among four nations

4 - In your third paragraph, you use "at the beginning of the period" rather than "at the beginning of the...

Writing Feedbacksassyna - Jan 4, 2022nhmt - Jan 18, 2022
Coffee production and consumption - IELTS writting task 1. (PIE CHART)

2 - For the summary information, try to use specifics for the pie charts. At least mention how many pie charts...

Writing FeedbackMabel21 - Jan 4, 2022Holt - Jan 4, 2022
Races - What do you do for fun (MIT)

2 - I believe that the essay will be even better if you can add to the fun that you have...

UndergraduateINeedHelp2836 - Jan 4, 2022Holt - Jan 4, 2022
MIT essay - community question - one way in which you contributed to your community

2 - This is a good start. It shows how you helped the community but, it is an impersonal method of...

UndergraduateHighSchoolKid456 - Jan 4, 2022Holt - Jan 4, 2022
What problems do people older than sixty five usually face?

4 - From your essay, there are basic mistakes made that you need to improve on to make it appealing and...

Writing Feedbacknhmt - Jan 4, 2022erictutor23 - Jan 6, 2022
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