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Buy local - Large businesses have bigger budgets for marketing and promotion

2 - The prompt is not asking if the goverment should bear a responsibilty for what happened. your TA score...

Writing Feedbacktommy12 - May 22, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
People in metropolises suffer now from numerous difficulties in their daily life - IELTS Task 2

2 - Respond using a thesis statement. Outline your discussion before you write the preliminary response. The following outline should help:...

Writing Feedbackmtun11 - May 22, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
IELTS task 1 - two charts demonstrating a research about adult education

3 - ''There are two charts demonstrating'' should be ''demonstrate'', cause it always demonstrates, not only at the moment You have...

Writing Feedbackphamhuong - May 22, 2021huen - May 28, 2021
Opinion about some people have chosen to take a holiday trip away from home in Tet recently.

3 - Thank you for your opinion ^^ I'll try studying IELTS essays format in depth....

Writing FeedbackNormie - May 22, 2021Normie - May 23, 2021
Why Master of International Sustainable Tourism Management as a graduate program in Australia? AAS

2 - Huh? You never mentioned what that was. You better offer a clearer professional motivating factor. You should...

Scholarshipshy2shine - May 22, 2021Holt - May 22, 2021
SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES IN THE SAME WAY THAT REGULATES THE DRUG, ALCOHOL

2 - she prompt is asking you to decide if the government should regulate the fast food industry in a manner...

Writing Feedbackhoaivynguyen - May 21, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
Agree or not and why: Young people today do not give enough time to help their community.(250 words)

3 - About the "young man", I was trying to refer both genders (since "man" can be use as a substitute...

Writing FeedbackNormie - May 21, 2021Normie - May 22, 2021
The number of plants and animals is declining. What are the reasons? Suggest some solutions.

3 - thank you so much...

Writing Feedbackreallllchichi - May 21, 2021reallllchichi - May 24, 2021
WRITING ESSAY TASK 2 - FAMILY AND FRIENDSHIP

2 - Where is this indicated in the original prompt? There is no evidence to support this exaggeration in the...

Writing Feedbackannalesmile - May 21, 2021Holt - May 22, 2021
MOTIVATION LETTER TO A GERMAN UNIVERSITY. International Finance.

2 - Good motivation on a personal scale. However, you should try to add an intrinational motivation since you are...

LettersJjay - May 21, 2021Holt - May 22, 2021
Profit from movie genres - BAR GRAPH

4 - Thanks so much for your advice <3...

Writing Feedbackngbichngoc13 - May 21, 2021ngbichngoc13 - May 23, 2021
I was not selected and I want to know why! | Personal statement of KGSP/GKS 2021

4 - In my opinion, the first paragraph of your essay could have been more unique. "Clean buildings, fantastic scenery, ..."...

Scholarshipapiw - May 21, 2021techmind20 - May 23, 2021
The state's expenditure on art

2 - You are not supplying a proper extent response. There needs to bea measured reference to your opinion. There...

Writing FeedbackAnnie99 - May 21, 2021Holt - May 21, 2021
Pharmacobiochemistry and environmental biochemistry; Study objective for Fullbright students program

2 - Restate this part to create a global impact on this field of study. The scholarship gives weight to...

Scholarshipimaoakpe - May 20, 2021Holt - May 21, 2021
Essay for a medical 'PAINWEEK' conference scholarship

2 - The essay should lose the "We" references since this in an individual rather than group application. The reference to...

Scholarshipgpatama - May 20, 2021Holt - May 21, 2021
The government have duty to solve the childhood obesity problem

2 - Let us start with the most basic requirement . of a task 2 essay. That is, an essay of...

Writing Feedbackphghienle - May 20, 2021Holt - May 22, 2021
The differences in wheat exports among Australia, Canada and European Community from 1985 to 1990

5 - @Normie Thank you so much for your recommendation !! @Salimakmur Thank you for helping me...

Writing FeedbackAzure11o2 - May 20, 2021Azure11o2 - May 23, 2021
When Angklung being the Learning Instrument in Europe (Motivation Letter for applying PETaL EMJMD)

3 - @Holt okay, thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it...

Scholarshipmad_amran - May 20, 2021mad_amran - May 20, 2021
The graph and table give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in 2 country.

3 - The intro said "between Brazil and Congo in 2000," but in the overview, I see it from 1990 -...

Writing FeedbackCallmemin - May 20, 2021Salimakmur - May 21, 2021
The bar chart compares water consumption for three main purposes in different places in the world

3 - Thank you for your response ! I will fix it...

Writing Feedbackthathu072 - May 19, 2021thathu072 - May 20, 2021
Starting a business - AAS Scholarship Questions

3 - thank you for your advice...

Scholarshippkla - May 19, 2021pkla - May 19, 2021
The diagram delineates the step-by-step production of chocolate

2 - Your summary overview had a good start but then, you dropped the ball when you tried to summarize the...

Writing Feedbacknghinbp - May 18, 2021Holt - May 19, 2021
"My path to GS from running away from home" - Columbia General Studies Essay

4 - This is overall a really good essay in terms of describing where you come from and what you stand...

Undergraduatemaysol - May 18, 2021techmind20 - May 26, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2: Essay on benefits of international sports events to host country

3 - @Holt I'm really sorry because I remember reading "To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"...

Writing Feedbacktheloststudent - May 18, 2021theloststudent - May 19, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2: The global import of food (Positive/Negative)

2 - This statement is unnecessary as it does not address a specific discussion requirement in the original prompt or...

Writing Feedbacknotme - May 18, 2021Holt - May 19, 2021
Renewable energy - Study goal - Posco Asia Fellowship

6 - Just learning is not a valid study goal. What is the goal and professional application of your research? What...

ScholarshipSalimakmur - May 18, 2021Holt - May 23, 2021
Changes in consumption of margarine, low fat - reduced spreads, and butter between 1981 and 2007

2 - For clarity purposes in the summary, separate the sentence presentations based on topic. The better format would be: ...

Writing FeedbackAnnHuynh - May 18, 2021Holt - May 19, 2021
Agree or not: Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success at school.

2 - Your approach to writing this essay is not in an appropriate task 2 format. I therefore, have to ask,...

Writing FeedbackNormie - May 18, 2021Holt - May 18, 2021
AAS Scholarship - Contribution to solving problems

2 - Work on presenting your work background first. Establish how or what your observations wire that led to the research...

Scholarshiphoangnam - May 18, 2021Holt - May 18, 2021
MSMEs Development - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? (AAS)

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback I totally get your point Will revise accordingly...

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