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UBC SAUDER PERSONAL PROFILE QUESTION

2 - This sounds like a very concise presentation of the problem that you faced as a co-CEO of the school...

Undergraduateseniorstudent - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
The graph about the percentage of tourits visiting different countries in 2010

2 - Try to clarify the type of graph next time. There are several graphs used in the task 1 essay...

Writing FeedbackLangfarm - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
Causes, effects and solutions in waste and rubbish pollution

4 - Apart from that, I can see that you used advanced vocabulary and the structure is good but as mentioned...

Writing Feedbackthtrang - Nov 29, 2023sankook - Dec 5, 2023
Writing task 1 - Process of growwing and making products from pineapples

2 - You only have 20 minutes to write this task 1 essay. It is not advisable that you write over...

Writing Feedbackhoangkelvin - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Common App-The contagious influence of smiles

2 - You have too many references for the Smile reference. Bring it down to 2 examples. Keep the perspective of...

Undergraduatepawan_pai02 - Nov 28, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
Quitting Basketball - Common App Essay

3 - I've met many new amazing, interesting, and beautiful people who I will remember for the rest of my life,...

Undergraduatemaxn - Nov 28, 2023ductam06 - Nov 29, 2023
Write an essay about the negative impacts of social media on teens

2 - Where did you get this information? Cite your source. This is authoritative information that you are providing so...

Writing Feedbackaubreyyy - Nov 28, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
Reforming the United States Prison Industry

2 - I would try to connect the essay to recidivism at this point. The Swedish model works on preventing...

Writing Feedbackpjoseph13 - Nov 27, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed

2 - The image information is incomplete. You have not provided any data regarding the number of charts, and what specific...

Writing FeedbackCyllyn 13 - Nov 27, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
GKS - Study plan. One year of Korean language course

5 - Thanks, it was the first draft so i didn't really put a lot of effort in the grammar side...

Scholarshipmolly1303 - Nov 26, 2023molly1303 - Dec 9, 2023
Why business? GKS-G Personal Statement | GMBA ASPIRANT |

3 - First of all, Thank you sir/madam for your corrections. I will use your suggestions and yeah I am not...

Graduatesankook - Nov 26, 2023sankook - Dec 1, 2023
Personal Statment GKS Graduate 2023 - Advertising & Public Relations Department

NEW - Summary: Starting in 2023, the GKS requirement is to write every essay within 3 pages. Please help me review...

Graduateernimeilina - Nov 26, 2023 -
My experience editing for the school news broadcast - UBC Important Activities Prompt

2 - You can insert a final paragraph that would touch on how you won an award for your hard work....

Undergraduatethe john award - Nov 26, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
NTU Scholarship Essay- Everything happens for a reason

4 - @molly1303 @Holt Always be open to change Must be in a new thread. Useless comments = BAN....

Undergraduateuniver12 - Nov 26, 2023univer12 - Jan 31, 2024
Screen Time Impact on Babies

2 - The research is one sided. It fails to consider the positive aspects of screen time on babies as some...

Writing Feedbackmanareldirais - Nov 26, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six

2 - You cannot use words of uncertainty in the presentation. Since this is a single opinion essay, you are...

Writing Feedbacknntruong0510 - Nov 25, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
TU Delft MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter

NEW - Dear Admission, I am Peter. I grew up in a family with a strong football atmosphere, where my...

LettersPeterrrH - Nov 25, 2023 -
Writing task 2: The increase in the production on the natural environment

2 - Your prompt restatement is still close enough to the original presentation for this to be considered a plagiarism of...

Writing FeedbackHaohao0719 - Nov 25, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born

2 - You summary overview is not very clear. Are you trying to tell us that the line graph shows information...

Writing Feedbackdieuanh121205 - Nov 25, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
Common app essay "My mother's Hardships and how it helped me grow as a person"

2 - The essay is too focused on your mom and how it affected or pushed other relatives to help you....

UndergraduateAbdullahKhan114 - Nov 23, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Combining arts and coding texas A&M engineering essay

2 - Bring up the reference to the college professor. Lengthen that discussion to allow you to expand upon how his...

ScholarshipLeawi - Nov 22, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying

2 - Where are you basing this reference on? The original prompt only indicates a job. The type of job...

Writing Feedbackjamiethyha - Nov 21, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The graphs below show the employment rate of each gender in four different contries in 2002

2 - I do not need to read the topic or see the image to know that this is not an...

Writing FeedbackNbhuong - Nov 21, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
to low- cost airlines, many people can travel abroad. Is it a positive or negative?

2 - You already indicated that low cost travel is a positive development in your writer's opinion paragraph. It was clearly...

Writing FeedbackThaoThanh - Nov 21, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Essay about why I want to transfer to Spelman College

2 - Well, this is most certainly a very personal essay. Thank you for sharing it with us. It is emotional...

Undergraduatelivvv12 - Nov 20, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Question: Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film

2 - You have not taken the correct approach to writing this essay. Based on the given writing guide question, you...

Writing FeedbackNguyenhienngoc - Nov 19, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Increasing reciprocal exchange is positive or endanger cultural identity. Discuss both views.

2 - The essay is actually overwritten at 326 words. You do not have the time to write that many words...

Writing FeedbackAnhwuan - Nov 19, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 - STUDYING ABROAD

2 - You forgot to mention working abroad as well. It is important not to miss out on reference points...

Writing Feedbacktranggggg - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Some students prefer to take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel.

2 - You should not be presenting an opinion in this case. The essay writing instructions asks you to deliver an...

Writing Feedbackbilaldev - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
"Leadership at Prosper's case comp" - UBC SAUDER (UNFAMILIAR SITUATION PROMPT)

2 - You do not really need to enumerate the names of the team members in this case. Group pronouns will...

Undergraduateramenlegend - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
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