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[Writing task 1] The main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

2 - When you summarize your presentation, make sure to indicate that the pie charts are individually assigned to each year...

Writing Feedbackhuydaoquang - Oct 15, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
The restriction of using vehicles on certain days as a way to reduce air pollution

2 - Your prompt restatement + writer's opinion is too long. It should not be more than 3 sentences in length....

Writing Feedbacknam08 - Oct 15, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
Mental health disorders - Commonwealth Master's scholarships, development impact essay part 1

2 - I am not sure if this is a topic slant that can get you a Commonwealth scholarship. While mental...

ScholarshipPiperskm - Oct 15, 2023Holt - Oct 15, 2023
Essay about separate education for students with different academic levels

4 - There are some amendments I can give to improve your writing: (this is just my personal opinion) - Some...

Writing FeedbackAnhngoc12 - Oct 15, 2023wanttobebetter - Oct 21, 2023
Common App Essay - Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging

2 - Try to avoid using movie references as inspirations for a future career. Specially when you clearly claim that you...

UndergraduateMHJN - Oct 14, 2023Holt - Oct 15, 2023
The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) in 2011 by regions

2 - Never ask the reader to look at the image. You have to narrate the information, not ask the...

Writing Feedbackhtlam11 - Oct 14, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
"My reflection through the car window" - common app essay

2 - The essay is not complete so I cannot truly review it and give you advice on how to improve...

Undergraduatesohaiblol - Oct 14, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
Children watching TV - Writing Task 2

3 - First paragraph: not good job of paraphrasing. It is clear but you will need more advanced words, for eg:...

Writing FeedbackChu Chang - Oct 13, 2023wanttobebetter - Oct 21, 2023
Motivation letter/ Statement of Purpose for MSc of Environmental Economics

3 - @Holt thank you, I will contact you for help...

Lettersferiverhlg - Oct 13, 2023feriverhlg - Oct 16, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: three main difficulties each age has to face when they live abroad

NEW - the problems people have when they go to live in other countries The bar chart demonstrates three main...

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Driving force to be a leader - leadership and influence chevening essay

NEW - I wish to have feedback regarding my essay. please do comment :) Chevening is looking for individuals who...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Juvenile delinquency. Cause/Solution?

NEW - IN SOME COUNTRIES, A HIGH PROPORTION OF CRIMINAL ACTS ARE COMMITTED BY TEENAGERS. WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED? WHAT CAN...

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Was the American Revolution a Civil War?

2 - The formatting of this paper is just all wrong. Paragraphs should be used to separate the idea discussions. There...

Writing FeedbackRonaldwrw - Oct 12, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
A letter of motivation for DAAD master program scholarship in Neuroscience

NEW - They have asked me to write a letter of motivation outlining the academic, professional and personal motives for completion...

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Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay - Digital Illustration

2 - Your leadership and influencing references are not strong enough to compete with the more skilled professionals who will be...

ScholarshipTanzeelaWasti - Oct 12, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
Educated - tara westover; UGA supplemental essay

2 - Would you be comfortable sharing the aspects of your identity that you were having trouble with at the time...

Undergraduatetuxedocat444 - Oct 11, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Begin learning a foreign language

NEW - SOME EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER FOR CHILDREN TO BEGIN LEARNING A FOREIGN LANGUAGE AT PRIMARY SCHOOL RATHER...

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Getting information from newspapers and other media

2 - You made your position clear in the writer's opinion section. Yet you contradicted yourself in the discussion paragraphs. You...

Writing Feedbackthuyduong470 - Oct 11, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
Statement of Interest for admission to the Japanese university as a student from Ukraine

NEW - Hello, I wrote something like this at the first time and I really need help. What should I remove...

Scholarshiptoxyyx - Oct 10, 2023 -
The chart illustrates the contribution in percentage of two different sectors (Task 1 IELTS)

2 - Try to be more specific about the kind of chart that is provided. That will help you gain...

Writing Feedbackekko162 - Oct 10, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
Comparing life with parents to living on campus

2 - I cannot accurately review this essay as the word count and paragraph representations do not follow the necessary requirements...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Hoa - Oct 10, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
IELTS Cause/Problem Essay question on children spending less time with their parents

2 - This is personal information or a representation of your personal opinion. It is not a part of the...

Writing FeedbackDirkhammet - Oct 10, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
The proportion of population who used the Internet in three different countries between 1999 & 2009

2 - A trending statement needs to cover the most common information for the sources provided. You did that properly...

Writing Feedbacksuperattack2002 - Oct 9, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
GKS-U An only child with 4 siblings aspires to become an IT Engineer

NEW - Global Korea Scholarship application essay - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Educational background -...

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Compare pie charts show the proportion of the energy produces from different sources in a country

2 - The summary overview lacks content. Always enumerate the information sources prior to setting up the trending statement. You cannot...

Writing FeedbackNgocAnk - Oct 9, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
The percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living.

3 - @Cao hong Ngoc You should be aware of the structure of sentence such as capital letters or end mark...

Writing FeedbackCao hong Ngoc - Oct 9, 2023Duy Dang - Oct 10, 2023
Why have men's sports been give far more attention by society than women's s? IELTS Writting Task 2

4 - I think you should give the essay a proper stance; either be positive about it or be negative about...

Writing FeedbackCantor Zhukov - Oct 9, 2023TanzeelaWasti - Oct 12, 2023
Gks Undergraduate Essay; I have been deeply intrigued by the world of business

3 - Hello, i am aware of the GKS-UG guidlenes. I read your essay and let me give you my honest...

Undergraduatequenshaa - Oct 8, 2023sushiii - Oct 14, 2023
The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. The process is quite lengthy and complicated

4 - You do not have reached the word limit. You get a low score when you don't complete the task...

Writing Feedbackanhtho06 - Oct 8, 2023TanzeelaWasti - Oct 12, 2023
It starts with a self-awareness - Chevening leadership and influence essay

NEW - Hi all, this is a draft I have prepared for Chevening leadership essay. Wish I could receive some feedbacks...

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