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The graph below shows the number of foreign visitors to the coast, the mountains, and the lakes

2 - The main concern that I have about this presentation is that you are not writing the 3 sentence minimum...

Writing Feedbacktthaooooo - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
"I can do it" app eassy for Computer Science major GKS_U

2 - The GKS-U application essays follow a highly specific question and answer format. You must respond to a series of...

UndergraduateMinahil - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
Many people across the globe are consuming an exorbitant amount of sugar-based beverages

2 - When asked to discuss the reasons for a problem, the assumption of the examiner is that you shall be...

Writing Feedbackanielts7239 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
Describe a situation when you had to make a difficult decision. How did you make your decision?

2 - It did not seem like this was a difficult decision for you to make. You seemed comfortable in the...

Writing Feedbackturkeshhan - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

3 - refrain from using "we", "i", "our", "my"..., especially in an example. They will make your evidence less objective and...

Writing Feedbackmee_lina07 - Aug 26, 2023tinnucbebe - Aug 29, 2023
Write a reply to Sara. In your email - ask her what she want to do - suggest places

3 - @nguyenthuthuya35 How have your -> How has your Many thank -> Many thanks It's glad to -> It's nice...

Lettersnguyenthuthuya35 - Aug 26, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] UNEMPLOYMENT RATE AND PEOPLE LEAVING IRELAND FROM 1988 TO 2008

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Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Aug 26, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
Essay about South Asian Mental Health Care Seeking Behaviors.

2 - In order to write a proper thesis paragraph, you have to outline the ojectives of the paper. You...

Research Papersvjs1615 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
[IELTS Task 2] Discuss about the positive & negative effects of working/studying from home

2 - This is not the writing instruction. You were given a specific question to respond to as the basis...

Writing FeedbackHauau123456 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
In at least 150 words, write an opinion paragraph about the topic below. Some parents teach their ch

2 - The topic for writing is not complete. Where is the writing instruction? I cannot really assess what you are...

Writing Feedbackvivify - Aug 25, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
Different perspectives about the role of taking risks in both; their professional and personal lives

7 - Overall, good organization of the essay. I recommend to add 1 sentence of example to explain this point "Those...

Writing Feedbackvietnguyen2306 - Aug 25, 2023kn197 - Aug 28, 2023
Some people believe it is better to work out in a gym, while others prefer to exercise outdoors.

8 - 1. Many sentences are grammatically incorrect. First, use free "Grammarlly" to correct your sentences. 2. In terms structuring your...

Writing Feedbackphudainguyen - Aug 25, 2023kn197 - Aug 28, 2023
Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that govern

3 - For me, the most obvious minus is the TA. Your examples seem to deviate from the focus of the...

Writing Feedbackmahns - Aug 24, 2023Camlinh22 - Aug 27, 2023
The pie chart compares the difference in expenditure of two countries Japan and Malaysia (2010)

2 - The essay is short of the minimum 150 word count by 9 words. Percentage points will be deducted from...

Writing Feedbackthwchage - Aug 24, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
The percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas

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The reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000

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[IELTS-Opinion Essay] Parents should spend more time with children helping them with their homework.

4 - I like your ideas ,however, I think you should use more compound sentences in order to enhance grammatical requirements,...

Writing Feedbackboreddao - Aug 23, 2023luuyennhi - Aug 31, 2023
Technology - Statement of Purpose for UGRAD undergrad exchange program 2024

3 - @basit123 I think you should discuss some more ideas that you are going to perform in the future...

Undergraduatebasit123 - Aug 23, 2023Minahil - Aug 26, 2023
Leveraging my networking skills to impact the health sectors - Chevening Networking Essay

NEW - Hello Everyone, please this is my draft for the Chevening networking essay. All suggestions are humbly welcome. I...

ScholarshipFrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023 -
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Bar graph: Multiple social networking sites used in Canada 2014-2015

3 - In the second paragraph " a decrease to 28%" should be changed to "a gradual decrease to 28%" ...

Writing FeedbackIlearnhowtowrite - Aug 22, 2023kainan - Aug 29, 2023
The widespread use of the internet has caused many problems. What are these? What solutions

3 - you should outline several solutions outright in the introduction and wrap them up when concluding....

Writing Feedbacktaljahy - Aug 22, 2023tinnucbebe - Aug 29, 2023
Describe differences in an island which has undergone a lot of changes

2 - When used as a simple writing exercise, this piece of writing could be judged as a good effort. It...

Writing Feedbackhongdao0301 - Aug 22, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
The layout of the city of Nelson in the past and its transformation to the present day

2 - You cannot complete 242 words in 20 minutes. The task requires a maximum of 200 words based on the...

Writing Feedbackminh2306 - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
People who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009 in 3 countries including USA, Canada, and Mexico

2 - You cannot say "including" because there are only 3 countries represented in the image. You should be referencing...

Writing Feedbackchaungoctoan - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
More people for less traffic?

2 - This is not a totally acceptable writer's opinion. While the response would immediately be perceived as correct, you...

Writing Feedbacktinnucbebe - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
The opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field of our life

3 - Your overview : To show the reader your perspectives at the beginning and not simply merely paraphrase the question,...

Writing FeedbackBrianWang - Aug 21, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
IELTS - Unpaid community service as a part of schools compulsory section

2 - The task 2 essay is a mere 4 paragraph essay at any given time. You have written 6 paragraphs,...

Writing Feedbacktuanh181006 - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 22, 2023
The transformation that Dubai has undergone over the time

2 - The essay will have a difficult time achieving a passing score. It is less than the mandatory 150 words....

Writing Feedbackdollydorrie - Aug 20, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Agree/disagreeScientific research should be controlled by the governments rather than individuals?

3 - I think that at the end of this topic if you add "it seems to me that" after "In...

Writing FeedbackTra Tac - Aug 20, 2023kainan - Aug 29, 2023
Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial

2 - Do not merge your personal opinion with the public discussion points. The format for your response paragraph, based on...

Writing Feedbackha1406 - Aug 20, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
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