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How to write an essay about the principle of double effect in medical ethics?

2 - Have you considered writing the paper by combining the religious concerns into the medical ethics aspect? Doing so would...

Essayswriterstudent123 - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
Paraphrase introduction in IELTS Writing task 1

2 - Well, the paraphrase clearly shows your lack of proper English word knowledge and usage. You are using archaic English...

Grammar, Usagegiangluongmeox - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
IELTS Task 1: The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas

3 - @Holt thank you for your advice, I will try to read more and do better next time....

Writing Feedbackcalicoshafira - Jan 9, 2023calicoshafira - Jan 9, 2023
"The lesson of hard work and persistence" - personal statement

2 - I strongly urge you to remove the introductory paragraph in this statement. Since the word requirement is less than...

Undergraduateanukk - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
To impart knowledge - objectives and how these are appropriate to your long-range goals.

5 - There is a slight improvement. Open the statement with the current last sentence to provide the direct academic goal...

UndergraduateLucarian - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 14, 2023
Internally young forever (about the blue zone states and Dr. Sinclairs research)

2 - Some is a plural adjective so it cannot be used with a singular reference. Use the indefinite article...

Writing FeedbackDreamgirl01 - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.

2 - Always remember that this report is written on the assumption that the reader does not have a copy of...

Writing Feedbackthuyne - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
Young Professional for International Business and Economy - A motivation letter for undergraduate

3 - I find it quite interesting, but you could add a paragraph depicts what are your favourite subjects at the...

Lettersalieayaa - Jan 8, 2023chewbacauk - Jan 10, 2023
Research essay on the Federal Reserve- Feed Back

2 - Create a stronger opening statement and thesis presentation by removing the cited sources within the first paragraph. As a...

Writing Feedbackjos2250 - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline

2 - Your restatement is confusing to read. To be honest, it is not even remotely close to the original discussion...

Writing Feedbackjimmy1104 - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Motivation Letter for erasmus mundus to Consortium dealing with ME3

2 - For starters, you need to know that a motivational letter should only comprise a single page, single spaced, no...

Lettersahsan9702 - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
Revewing a Motivational Letter for IFROS (intelligent Field Robotics Systems) Scholarship

2 - The motivation and interest in the program comes in strong in the fust paragraph. It clearly lays out the...

Lettersglowstorm - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
IELTS writing task 1: Demographic change in Japan

3 - @Holt Thanks for you help, that's really helpful for me. Have a nice day!...

Writing FeedbackSunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 11, 2023
The population of young adults has been far higher than that of elderly people in some countries

2 - There is a redundancy existing in your opinion statement. The double presentation of your openion in a single sentence...

Writing Feedbackghadtj - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Pushing myself - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU?

2 - The prompt only asks for one important topic. Therefore you have to choose between motivation and self. discipline. I...

Undergraduatekngsleyw - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
IELTS writing task 2: The causes and solutions of reoffending

2 - Contact me privately for comprehensive scoring services. It is not part of our free review offering anymore. ...

Writing FeedbackSunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 11, 2023
IELTS writing task 2 Why women's sports receive less attention than men's sports

2 - The topic interpretation and your point of view should stand alone in the paragraph. You will automatically receive a...

Writing FeedbackSunny0629 - Jan 6, 2023Holt - Jan 12, 2023
Studying in Hungary challenge. International Relations - Motivation letter for STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM

2 - Relate the motivation more towards being inspired by the current Russian diplomatic relations on a global scale. That would...

Lettersthe writer - Jan 6, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Essay for a master's degree in labor law (regarding an unfair job recruitment system)

2 - The worst thing that a scholarship applicant can do is use the personal statement, specifically the motivation discussion to...

ScholarshipRamadan - Jan 6, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Worldwide relations. Motivation Letter for Master's Program with Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - Thank you for indicating that you will be applying to 2 masters programs. The problem is that I cannot...

Lettersbsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile Essay - UNFAMILIAR SITUATION (not liking poetry)

2 - This is certainly a good response that covers both the problem and unfamiliar situation prompt. I like that you...

Undergraduatetxd123 - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 6, 2023
Computer science and software engineering - What are your educational goals - Waterloo

3 - Hey there, I had to answer this question as well! I think you should concentrate on why you decided...

Undergraduatemuhammadso - Jan 5, 2023Slyrae - Jan 7, 2023
"Outgoing," "passionate," and "holistic" - personal statement!

2 - Why are you shouting at the reader? Do you want me to have your account suspended for disrespect? You...

UndergraduateSunilPal - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 5, 2023
In a couple paragraphs, provide a summary of activities you have completed from the last three years

2 - The presentation format is not correct. When told to write a few paragraphs, provide 2-3 paragraphs that will cover...

ScholarshipSunilPal - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 5, 2023
Should children be banned from using their phones during the school day?

5 - This essay presents a balanced view on the use of phones in schools. it acknowledges the potential distractions and...

Writing Feedbackhuongggtra - Jan 4, 2023glowstorm - Jan 9, 2023
IMSISS Erasmus Scholarship SOP, International Relation

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. I'm making corrections right away....

ScholarshipEternal - Jan 4, 2023Eternal - Jan 6, 2023
Personal Statement for MSc in Finance in the UK

3 - Merged: Statement of Purpose for my MSc of Business and Finance at Warwick Business School The school...

Graduatechewbacauk - Jan 4, 2023chewbacauk - Jan 10, 2023
Motivation Letter for Universities offering Human Computer Interaction

2 - Heed the warning about the last chance. This will be the first and last redacted essay from you that...

LettersZzssrish - Jan 4, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
UBC PERSONAL PROFILE (SAUDER). INVOLVEMENT PREPARES YOU FOR THE FUTURE

2 - Think of yourself as say, a Native American / American Indian. Imagine being raised on a conservation camp with...

EssaysReverse - Jan 4, 2023Holt - Jan 4, 2023
In recent days, shopping is not considered as a responsibility anymore

2 - The essay will immediately receive a failing preliminary score. The writer has not followed the writing instruction as provided....

Writing Feedbacklyphung - Jan 4, 2023Holt - Jan 4, 2023
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