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Writing task2: rails or roads - what government should concentrate on?

NEW - SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE GOVERNMENT SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON BUILDING TRAIN AND SUBWAY LINES TO REDUCE TRAFFIC CONGESTION. OTHERS THINK...

Writing Feedbackkkkfg - Oct 18, 2022 -
Sport enthusiast, reader, dancer and computer lover. Common App Essay - background and identity

2 - The written presentation fails to satisfy the information requirements as indicated. These activities are quite common among the youth...

Undergraduatejellyybom - Oct 18, 2022Holt - Oct 19, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ADVERTISING

NEW - These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extent do you...

Writing FeedbackGabriell - Oct 18, 2022 -
Computer Science and Engineering - Personal Statement for a Korean University ( GIST , UNIST , PNU )

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I thought writing 80% academics and 20% extra stuffs would do okay. I...

Undergraduatebrian7 - Oct 18, 2022brian7 - Oct 19, 2022
Is international sports event suitable for a country or not? Discuss both views

3 - Here is my advice: this a discuss both views and state your opinion essay so you should discuss both...

Writing Feedbackchienng - Oct 17, 2022kkkfg - Oct 18, 2022
[IELTS - TASK 1] The line graph of tourists to Scotland.

4 - I have some advices for you: - reached its peak quickly only after 5 years before dropping dramatically and...

Writing Feedbackhoanghailhp - Oct 16, 2022kkkfg - Oct 18, 2022
Brave and enterprising women - The "Why Barnard College?" essay

2 - The applicant animatedly speaks of the reasons why her keen interest in the university was developed. It is clear...

Undergraduatevalerialb - Oct 16, 2022Holt - Oct 16, 2022
[IELTS Writing Task 2] Improving the environment, should individuals leave only to big corps + govs?

NEW - Question: Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference....

Writing Feedbackducmatgoclyhoa - Oct 16, 2022 -
The choir teacher - UBC: Explain How You Responded To A Problem

3 - @Wigic I think you need to structure the essay with more context. I would suggest you use the STAR...

UndergraduateWigic - Oct 16, 2022Jasminbajwa - Oct 26, 2022
Commonwealth Scholarship development impact p.1; Climate change poses a huge problem for the planet

2 - Since the writer has not provided the complete essay in response to the given prompts, I find it difficult...

Scholarshipnajam - Oct 15, 2022Holt - Oct 16, 2022
Prospective MS student - Looking for potential research opportunities for fall 2023

2 - Let me just point out that research professors do not appreciate unsolicited emails asking about position openings on their...

Lettersrs26 - Oct 15, 2022Holt - Oct 15, 2022
The cosmetics market value - Chevening scholarship

3 - Thank you for the reply. Of course that i have professional experience but not in that field. What i...

ScholarshipDelya - Oct 14, 2022Delya - Oct 15, 2022
Outgoing, passionate and holistic - Tell us about who you are

2 - The prompt will be used to assess how well you will merge into the student community of the university...

UndergraduateShitty05 - Oct 13, 2022Holt - Oct 14, 2022
The graphs below depict changes in household size, time spent cleaning, and ownership of electrical

3 - I think you have skipped too many details of the graph and therefore it made your idea become confusing...

Writing Feedbacknhinhinhi223 - Oct 13, 2022DanielDang - Oct 16, 2022
CommonApp Essay PS - the effect of Chess on my life

3 - @Holt So if I was to set it to the open prompt, you think it should be good?...

Undergraduatefrizter - Oct 13, 2022frizter - Oct 14, 2022
Writing task 2: Should information about scientific research business and academic world be shared?

2 - The prompt restatement will receive a failing preliminary score because of 2 reasons: 1. It does not clearly and...

Writing FeedbackNguyettrang - Oct 12, 2022Holt - Oct 13, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away

2 - There is no need to attest to the reality of the topic provided for the discussion. There is no...

Writing Feedbacklanlan8898283 - Oct 12, 2022Holt - Oct 13, 2022
Some education systems make student focus on certain subjects at the age of 15 while others require

2 - Okay. The writer understands the subject of the discussion but did not provide the 3 explanatory statements as required...

Writing Feedbackphn0108 - Oct 12, 2022Holt - Oct 12, 2022
[Ielts task 2] The most important consideration when choosing any career or jobs is having a high in

2 - The response of the writer to the question is incomplete. He ommitted responding to the "To what extent?" question...

Writing Feedbacklantern - Oct 12, 2022Holt - Oct 12, 2022
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] - NUMBER OF TOURISTS VISITING A CARIBBEAN ISLAND (2010 - 2017)

3 - I think you were misunderstanding the graph information so therefore your overview and comparison were wrong. The time in...

Writing Feedbackdarrenshan97 - Oct 12, 2022DanielDang - Oct 16, 2022
[IELTS WTITING 1] the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994

2 - I would like to focus my review primarily on the summary overview presentation as this represents a large portion,...

Writing Feedbackalexwriteb - Oct 12, 2022Holt - Oct 12, 2022
Katherine Johnson; pick one woman in history or fiction to converse with - Barnard College prompt

2 - My opinion is that this statement can do with some revisions. For starters, the first paragraph needs to be...

Writing Feedbacksockofate - Oct 11, 2022Holt - Oct 12, 2022
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] An overview on how the island has changed in the aspect of tourist facilities

2 - The immediate thing that hit me upon scanning this report is that the writer does not know how to...

Writing FeedbackTRUNG QUY - Oct 10, 2022Holt - Oct 10, 2022
Physical activity in Australia - Writing task 1

6 - The overall section should be clearer with trends, the group with highest figure and lowest figures. You should replace...

Writing FeedbackNTDimaria - Oct 10, 2022nataliely - Oct 29, 2022
Writing task2: taxing industries as a good way to protect environment

3 - You seems to overlook the clarity of your points. In the second parapraph, "these renewable...green industry" => in which...

Writing Feedbackkkkfg - Oct 9, 2022Charles Le - Oct 12, 2022
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a school uniform?

2 - The prompt restatement of the student should have been clearer in reference to the original prompt. The given sentences...

Writing Feedbackkhangpt2k6 - Oct 9, 2022Holt - Oct 10, 2022
History has become a core subject at high school. However, some say it should be an optional subject

2 - The first 2 sentences in the prompt restatement could cause the paragraph to receive a failing score due to...

Writing Feedbackanh123456 - Oct 9, 2022Holt - Oct 10, 2022
Teenagers spend a lot of time watching Tiktok. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

2 - The examiner may not consider this essay as properly developed and discussed as the advantage and disadvantage paragraphs were...

Writing FeedbackBuckwheat - Oct 9, 2022Holt - Oct 10, 2022
[IELTS WTITING 1] the percentage of sea food imports from three countries to the UK

2 - The essay appears to be 2 words short of the 150 minimum presentation. So there will be word count...

Writing Feedbackwritea - Oct 9, 2022Holt - Oct 9, 2022
Essay about Deep Learning for Grad School Application

2 - There seems to be 2 thesis statement paragraphs in this essay when only one is needed. The first paragraph...

Research Papershoudini2518 - Oct 8, 2022Holt - Oct 9, 2022
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