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COVER LETTER APPLY TO SCIENTIFIC DEVELOPER POSITION AT SCHRODINGER, INC.

2 - The letter is not clear about whether the position being applied for is currently open or if the applicant...

Lettersdolong2110 - Apr 14, 2022 / Holt - Apr 15, 2022
Letter of Motivation PhD (research-based, with pre-defined research topic)

2 - Seeing how the motivation for your studies stems more from related experiences after completing the masters course, the molrational...

Lettersedgmin - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 13, 2022
Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter

2 - I would have to say that the writer over-developed the content of the letter to the point where it...

Lettersvincdels - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 12, 2022
You have received an email from the manager of Science club

2 - The sentence structure and word usage in this letter is so bad, the letter loses all its meaning and...

Lettersquynha1603 - Apr 11, 2022 / Holt - Apr 11, 2022
Letter of recommendation for Berea College

2 - The recommendation letter is highly individualistic in focus. It speaks only of the solitary nature of the student. This...

Lettersyejiitzy - Apr 9, 2022 / Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Motivation letter - Master of Science in Spatial data science - Munster, Germany

2 - The 2000 word maximum need not be used if the writer tends to over-extend his motivational letter with non-motivational...

LettersabdelrhmanCS - Apr 6, 2022 / Holt - Apr 6, 2022
Teaching and National Prizes in Computer Science - Letter of recommendation for GKS-U

3 - Hi, it is my first time here so i didnt notice that. Btw, i cant see my lor...

Lettersbritonnn - Apr 4, 2022 / britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
Application for the Master of Education program in Canada - plan of study essay

2 - 11 paragraphs proves to be too long for a study plan explanation. The winter takes several paragraphs before it...

Lettersjenny_ye - Apr 1, 2022 / Holt - Apr 1, 2022
LOR/Recommendation letter for undergraduate - Business Administration

2 - The letter does not contain the same academic tone that it should have, if a teacher had actually written...

Letterskayce - Mar 31, 2022 / Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Motivation Letter - Research Master in Business - Maastricht University - The Netherlands

2 - The response essay needs to be better structured by creating a clear relationship between the courses of interest to...

Lettershdmquan - Mar 27, 2022 / Holt - Mar 27, 2022
Erasmus Mundus Master In Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE)-- Motivation Letter

2 - The current letter can be made shorter and direct to the point. Remember that there are thousands of applicants...

Letterszack1211 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Letter of Motivation Masters in Cybersecurity (Germany)

2 - The historical references in this essay are all more than 5 years old making these irrelevant in relation to...

LettersRishi986 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Statement letter for pursuing a master's degree in petroleum refining.

2 - The letter is too weak as it does not represent a strong and imperative reason for your decision to...

LettersTheep - Mar 15, 2022 / Holt - Mar 15, 2022
Motivational Letter for the PhD doctoral course in Computer science

3 - Thank you so much for your feedback....

Lettersmuhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 3, 2022 / muhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 4, 2022
[GKS-G] Letter Of Recommendation on behalf of my PROFFESOR for application to SNU

2 - There are conflicting statements in the recommendation letter. An example of the conflict is with regards to the thesis...

LettersViktoriAnders - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 4, 2022
Management Engineering focusing on circular economy motivation letter

2 - A motivational letter aimed at attending an international university masters course is not an academic and internship biography. The...

LettersJulyffff - Mar 1, 2022 / Holt - Mar 1, 2022
Erasmus Mundus European Politics and Society – Václav Havel Joint Master - Motivation Letter

3 - You need to work more in your background, what makes you the best candidate for them? Prove that you...

Lettersiamzakariakk - Feb 28, 2022 / Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SUSTAINABLE FOOD SYSTEM MASTER PROGRAMME AT SLU (SWEDEN)

2 - Disposable sentence. It does nothing to help the essay move forward. Since the prompt already indicates everything the...

Lettersnhidinh2998 - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
My time in Sweden - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship

3 - Hey Holt Thanks for your feedback. That was my mistake when I forgot to remove the first sentence. That...

Lettersnghiabui - Feb 22, 2022 / nghiabui - Feb 22, 2022
Scholarship Motivation Letter - Lund University, Sweden 2022

2 - This is a waste of space in your motivational letter. Sure the words of Sherly Sandberg were inspirational...

Lettersserra_biels - Feb 21, 2022 / Holt - Feb 22, 2022
Motivation Letter for Scholarship admission in Sweden - The environmental master's programs

2 - Why at this institute? How does the knowledge you will gain translate into a benefit for the institute?...

Lettersansurya - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Motivation Letter for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Food engineering

3 - I think it is better to merge these paragraphs which have the same contents to make your assay with...

Lettersjklkoskal - Feb 18, 2022 / Loren - Feb 19, 2022
Upon returning to Vietnam - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship

2 - you only need 2 paragraphs for your motivational letter. Merge the first and last paragraphs since the plans you...

Lettersnghiabui - Feb 17, 2022 / Holt - Feb 17, 2022
Motivation letter for MSc in Business Analytics

2 - This paragraph is more geared towards a statement of purpose rather than a motivation letter since it describes...

Lettersfiorepaola - Feb 14, 2022 / Holt - Feb 15, 2022
Motivation Letter for Sustainable Product Creation - Msc in Engineering

2 - It is always easiest to open with words of wisdom from someone else. It helps you tell the...

LettersEmjay - Feb 13, 2022 / Holt - Feb 14, 2022
Public health - Motivation letter review for scholarship

2 - Address them formally either as Dear Consortium or To the Consortium. It is more acceptable than using the...

LettersAhmedd - Feb 12, 2022 / Holt - Feb 12, 2022
From Germany to Africa - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR A MASTERS DEGREE IN ECONOMICS

2 - Only paragraphs 2,3,5,6, and 7, work for the motivational statement. The rest of the essay is irrelevant to a...

LettersHephzibar - Feb 7, 2022 / Holt - Feb 7, 2022
Canadian Study Permit SOP - I was already refused once

2 - From the very start of the letter, I already saw at least 2 strong weaknesses in the presentation. One...

Lettersanaadi - Feb 5, 2022 / Holt - Feb 6, 2022
Recommendation letter from principal for undergraduate

2 - The letter needs to be professionally written by a writer who can use this as the actual basis of...

Lettersheartadnail - Feb 2, 2022 / Holt - Feb 2, 2022
EPOG Scholarship sustainability consultant motivation letter.

2 - You have chosen 2 areas of study here. A major and a minor, both related somehow to your...

LettersJulyffff - Jan 30, 2022 / Holt - Jan 31, 2022
Erasmus - Track F Glocal - green consulting

3 - Thank you so much for your advices and efforts to put all together. Really appreciated it!...

LettersJulyffff - Jan 23, 2022 / Julyffff - Jan 30, 2022
Motivation letter for the erasmus mundus program in green networking and cloud computing

2 - The applicant lacks the required professional experience to be admitted into the EM program. The consortium will have to...

Lettersaminebdj - Jan 29, 2022 / Holt - Jan 29, 2022
Electronics and Telecommunication Engineering - Erasmus mundus motivation letter

2 - So what? Every student has an ambition to pursue their studies in their field of work. There is...

LettersSanketnawale101 - Jan 28, 2022 / Holt - Jan 29, 2022
Law student - Erasmus mundus motivation letter

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your honest review. I narrowed my topic to a singular theme as you...

Lettersgabriellacosta - Jan 27, 2022 / gabriellacosta - Jan 28, 2022
Practice and theory. Motivational letter for MBA in university of Padua (Italy)

2 - The quotations, regardless of whether these are original or taken from someone else, are not necessary in a motivational...

Lettersahmadshk8888 - Jan 26, 2022 / Holt - Jan 27, 2022
Write a motivational letter for MSC scholarship swedish University of Agricultural Sciences

3 - @Holt Hi Thanks so much I will do as advised...

LettersGlow92 - Jan 26, 2022 / Glow92 - Jan 26, 2022
Motivation Letter for Masters at Tampere University in Peace, mediation and conflict research

2 - The overall letter is not applicable as a motivational reference. The content is more of a conversational personal statement....

Lettersaayushmaniktalia - Jan 25, 2022 / Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Reference letter for Master of Design program in Hungarian university

2 - The first paragraph must contain a clear reference to the position of the person making the reference. It must...

LettersAni0506 - Jan 25, 2022 / Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Motivation letter for applying to master in renewable energy in the marine environment program

2 - Since you are applying to the program with a handicap, the lack of at least 2 years relevant work...

Lettersokurus - Jan 23, 2022 / Holt - Jan 24, 2022
Write an email for Jude about Saturday trip

2 - Unfortunately, the writer only wrote 89 words for a letter that must contain at least 150 words. This will...

LettersButterTrieu - Jan 22, 2022 / Holt - Jan 22, 2022
Motivation letter for the Erasmus Mundus Master in Marine and Maritime Intelligent robotics program

3 - @Holt Thank's for your feedback. so except the fact that I didn't emphasize about my interest in maritime technology,...

Letterssofiane - Jan 20, 2022 / sofiane - Jan 21, 2022
Motivation Letter for Imaging and Lighting in Extended Reality Programme (Erasmus Mundus)

2 - Review the requirements of the motivation letter. Compare it to what you have written. Your motivational letter does not...

Lettersbushranajeeb - Jan 19, 2022 / Holt - Jan 19, 2022
Development Economics - Student Exchange Motivation Letter

4 - The reason why you wish to become a participant in the program is not convincing. The reason used is...

Lettersalyssa2036 - Jan 18, 2022 / Holt - Jan 18, 2022
Write a letter, offering practical advice and reassuring students that they do not need to worry

2 - Since this is a letter to a fellow student, you can take a less formal tone in response....

LettersDoie - Jan 17, 2022 / Holt - Jan 18, 2022
Medical Laboratory Science graduate - Motivation Letter for Stipendum Hungaricum

3 - Hello! you use words such as I really want which is kinda informal. Also the second paragraph is too...

LettersTulasse - Jan 17, 2022 / summerarcadia - Jan 17, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter- Msc in Public Health at Debrecen

3 - I really do agree with the consultant, there is no specific correlation with undergraduate course and also specific experiences...

LettersPettypet - Jan 14, 2022 / Tulasse - Jan 17, 2022
Hospitality studies and English - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - The reviewer is not interested in your childhood nor how your parents exposed you to things. Being a...

LettersHuddy22052001 - Jan 16, 2022 / Holt - Jan 16, 2022
A toy car - Stipendium Hungaricum MA motivational letter

2 - This reference does not tie in with the earlier story in the paragraph. The implication was along the...

LettersAni0506 - Jan 14, 2022 / Holt - Jan 14, 2022
UWC letter of information. Reasons for application & record of extra-curricular & service activities

3 - Thank you. I think i know what to adjust...

Lettersr_m - Jan 12, 2022 / r_m - Jan 13, 2022
Scholarship Motivation Letter - MA in Business Development / International Economy and Business

2 - The motivation letter sounds more like a personal statement rather than a highly skilled professional interview. The writer was...

LettersMoos - Jan 11, 2022 / Holt - Jan 12, 2022
My candidacy for enrolment in the Stipendium Hungaricum program; computer science masters

2 - The first paragraph is totally unnecessary. The motivation letter should go direct to the point because the reviewer expects...

LettersItsyoyo - Jan 10, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter - Master's in International Business & Economics

2 - When you say "stint", do you mean as an intern? Or as a regular employee who participated in...

Letterskmg1000 - Jan 10, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
Self-help books - MOTIVATION LETTER

2 - The letter is filled with impressive and almost unrealistic career goals. That does not matter so much though. It...

Lettersrimsha25 - Jan 8, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2022
Thanusan - Scholarship Essay - letter of reference by self

2 - Since this is still a recommendation letter, you still need to follow the name format for a referee....

LettersBen14062002 - Jan 6, 2022 / Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Applying for a Master's degree in computer science; MOTIVATIONAL LETTER OF THE STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM

3 - @Helpmar Your application is tooo long it think you should make attention on the right question of the program...

LettersHelpmar - Jan 4, 2022 / Noureddinehf - Jan 5, 2022
Motivation letter for Master's program in Data Science (no specific instructions for the content)

2 - Well, the motivational letter should reflect the reasons for the next step in your career path. It should not...

LettersDiahr - Jan 4, 2022 / Holt - Jan 4, 2022
Computer science - Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship

3 - Unless there is limitation in word counts, I suggest you to write more about job experiences in the background...

Lettersm4dm0e - Dec 31, 2021 / hhspark - Jan 4, 2022
I'm ready to begin my journey. Motivational letter for BSc in CS (Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship)

2 - The opening paragraph is not helpful as it does not pose any information that is not known to the...

LettersKorn - Jan 3, 2022 / Holt - Jan 4, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER: EUROPEAN MASTER OF SUSTAINABLE FOOD SYSTEMS ENGINEERING, TECHNOLOGY, AND BUSINESS

2 - Explain why you are seeking a double masters at this time owing to the fact that you have...

LetterssaiKrishna Reddy - Jan 3, 2022 / Holt - Jan 3, 2022
Motivation letter for civil engineering master application to RWHT Aachen University

2 - You focused more on your academic and professional biography rather than the specific intent of your interest in studying...

Lettershb52524164 - Jan 2, 2022 / Holt - Jan 3, 2022

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