| "Going to FSU will only make me stronger"
Undergraduateajp - Oct 10, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 10, 2009
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| Are titles for admissions essays completely necessary?
Undergraduatejwatson - Oct 10, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 10, 2009
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| "Parents will be parents" - MSU essay! - To me success is a relative term
UndergraduateRatman2050 - Oct 10, 2009 / Ratman2050 - Oct 10, 2009
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| "you can suprise yourself with your own determination" - fsu
Undergraduatepatchell5107 - Oct 9, 2009 / patchell5107 - Oct 10, 2009
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| I found out firsthand just how dangerous snowboarding could be. UCF: "bump in the road"
Undergraduatequiksilverq - Oct 9, 2009 / quiksilverq - Oct 10, 2009
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| Edit my undergraduate essay for Wofford College; opinions for improvements
Undergraduatebc325 - Oct 9, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 10, 2009
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| (Carly, true friend) - Someone who has made an impact on your life
Undergraduatecoalerz - Sep 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 10, 2009
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| Drugs Are Cool (University of Pittsburgh Undergraduate Application)
Undergraduatepinkejasmine13 - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 10, 2009
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| "Mommy, why does she look so funny?"
Undergraduatejennyness - Sep 30, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 10, 2009
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| Personal statement (interest in how things work)
Undergraduateruud - Oct 10, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 10, 2009
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| 'Be a part of our team and family' - ucf- determination
Undergraduatepatchell5107 - Sep 30, 2009 / ashc79 - Oct 9, 2009
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| Progress has different definitions; Is progress always good?
Undergraduateporoxjun - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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| I never really thought about college; Why you choose to attend UCF
Undergraduategarrick - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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| Common App essay for UVA, criticism appreciated!
Undergraduateclassfyed - Sep 28, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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| UC Prompt #2: "struggled with obesity"
Undergraduateshaq896 - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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| My personal point of view on animal cruelty and abuse
Undergraduatecoalerz - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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| Commapp Essay (Experience)
UndergraduateLyra - Oct 6, 2009 / Lyra - Oct 9, 2009
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| How can i make my fsu essay more WOW-ing?
UndergraduateBr00ke - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 9, 2009
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| Application statement engineer (avionics)
UndergraduateCrappy - Oct 5, 2009 / Crappy - Oct 9, 2009
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| 'too much negativity' - Can someone look over my UT admissions essays? (I know they're cliche)
UndergraduateParthMirani - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 9, 2009
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| Wearing my favorite Abercrombie shirt/ App: Experience
Undergraduatemarcabundo - Oct 8, 2009 / hera246 - Oct 9, 2009
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| FAMU NURSING Admission essay! LOOK OVER IT to make it perfect
UndergraduateFaith8_88 - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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| my motivations and aspirations for going to NJCU essay
Undergraduatejt213 - Oct 8, 2009 / qudos - Oct 8, 2009
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| U of Michigan- LSA Essay
UndergraduateDJBruce - Sep 29, 2009 / Jeanine - Oct 8, 2009
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| "make a business successful" - UC Personal Statement!
UndergraduateOliverInsixieng - Oct 7, 2009 / OliverInsixieng - Oct 8, 2009
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| Common App - Biotechnology and Agriculture
Undergraduatebam1992 - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 8, 2009
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| The Latin word "Mores" figuratively represents the glue that holds me together
UndergraduateTheMig - Oct 6, 2009 / TheMig - Oct 7, 2009
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| tulane essay, rough and needs critique!
Undergraduatetaytortot1209 - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 7, 2009
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| UPenn: Page 217 of Autobiography starts with an incomplete sentence
Undergraduatemarcabundo - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 7, 2009
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| "track and cross country" - another fsu Vires, Artes, Mores essay
Undergraduatethebluehippo - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 7, 2009
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| Essays about meaningful life experience and family influence - FAMU admission
UndergraduateSxmBeauty - Oct 7, 2009 / marcabundo - Oct 7, 2009
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| Kumdo Tournament - 'final, tiebreaking point' - a personal contribution or experience
Undergraduatexxgraceanxx - Oct 7, 2009 / SxmBeauty - Oct 7, 2009
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| Common Application Essay - Holden Caulfield
UndergraduateBoNyKiD07 - Oct 4, 2009 / BoNyKiD07 - Oct 7, 2009
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| 'accidental discovery of Boston Univ. was through a popular college guide' - BU
Undergraduatevickaay - Oct 7, 2009 / coalerz - Oct 7, 2009
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| 'made $20,000 through various websites' - Common App Essay for top Universities
Undergraduatetheicfire - Oct 6, 2009 / blacks - Oct 7, 2009
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| 'I thought about my Grandma' - My Big Setback- University of Michigan Essay
Undergraduatedanderson2692 - Oct 4, 2009 / danderson2692 - Oct 7, 2009
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| Admission Essay question, usage of "Vires, Artes, Mores"
UndergraduateVolleygirl - Aug 3, 2008 / starfish13 - Oct 7, 2009
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| 'Thousands miles from Tianjin, China' - UMich diversity
Undergraduateshaokunkaren - Oct 7, 2009 / shaokunkaren - Oct 7, 2009
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| Anime (My essay to u-m)
UndergraduateSephiroth - Sep 24, 2009 / Sephiroth - Oct 7, 2009
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| 'training was overwhelming' - Common App a significant experience and its impact
Undergraduateblacks - Oct 6, 2009 / theicfire - Oct 6, 2009
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| 'A minor electrical problem' - UCF Obstacle/Bump in the Road Essay
UndergraduateCarrieC92 - Oct 6, 2009 / TheMig - Oct 6, 2009
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| "My most profound interests; the universe" - UIUC Essay (#1 of 2)
Undergraduateagm - Aug 11, 2009 / agm - Oct 6, 2009
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| 'Youth pastor' - UF Essay - meaningful event/experience
Undergraduatempatt02 - Oct 5, 2009 / mpatt02 - Oct 6, 2009
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| "find fulfillment in helping others" Looking for critiques on UC admission essay
UndergraduateKTT - Sep 30, 2009 / SeeHerFly - Oct 6, 2009
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| 'The Backyard Baseball League' - Common Application Personal Essay- Wiffleball
Undergraduatecchstroy - Oct 5, 2009 / cchstroy - Oct 6, 2009
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| "some people are meant to go to college" - Undergraduate Admissions essay
Undergraduatelilboo2 - Oct 6, 2009 / bam1992 - Oct 6, 2009
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| "That is intellectual exhaustion." - Stanford Short Essay: Intellectual Vitality
UndergraduateTimMill - Sep 30, 2009 / TimMill - Oct 6, 2009
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| Is it OK to point out that you are not a good student because of other pursuits?
UndergraduateMalibuSky - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 6, 2009
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| There are two things that I love about life - UMD essays
Undergraduaterbtla - Oct 5, 2009 / rbtla - Oct 6, 2009
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| "How would you describe yourself?" - Penn State Admission Essay
Undergraduatebritmin - Sep 22, 2009 / britmin - Oct 6, 2009
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| I remember the day when my interest in computers began; PS Computer Science transfer
Undergraduateveronicak5678 - Oct 5, 2009 / veronicak5678 - Oct 6, 2009
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| 'visit to Victoria hospital' - ucas medical personal statement
Undergraduatel3goals12 - Oct 5, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 6, 2009
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| 'A new electrical plug' - UIUC Essays (Academic Interests/Activity)
Undergraduateqyuiosilent - Oct 5, 2009 / qyuiosilent - Oct 6, 2009
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| 'the best of my life weeks' - Common App Essay (Evaluate a Significant Experience)
UndergraduateSome1 - Oct 5, 2009 / mina_sedaghatir - Oct 5, 2009
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| My house is a farm (UF college admission essay)
UndergraduateKlaa5 - Oct 4, 2009 / Klaa5 - Oct 5, 2009
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| 'Real people' - UT at Austin topic essay A. Important person
Undergraduatezbennett10 - Sep 29, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
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| "the death of my beloved grandmother" - UCF Essay - Bump in the road
UndergraduateBrandonArnet - Sep 28, 2009 / alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
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| UCF Undergrad Essay on obstacle--how is my essay?
Undergraduatepianogirl246 - Sep 20, 2009 / alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
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| Common App - Influential Person (My teacher and the Humanities
UndergraduateJulietTheSpooky - Sep 17, 2009 / queela09 - Oct 5, 2009
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| UCF personal obstacle; Life was good, money wasn't ever a problem
Undergraduatescaremechelle - Oct 5, 2009 / rhutch - Oct 5, 2009
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