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|Lost And Found - Narrative Essay
3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....
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|"Zoo Rejection" - my essay
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|"Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs" --- Does it flow?
4 - Good afternoon. This is a great essay. The content is good and well cited, the paragraphs are very...
Writing Feedbackjordanlee - Oct 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
|We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.
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|'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay
2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...
Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|'This woman is my mother' - discuss a person and his or her influence on you
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|"The Voting Age" essay
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative)
8 - That's a good start. What kind of examples can you think of that illustrate these three items? Regards,...
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|Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay
2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...
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|Summary On Pain Meds - paper
2 - Good evening. This looks like the start of a really great paper. You have solid information provided from...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals
NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...
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|which airplane flies the farthest- science report
NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....
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|Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work
4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)
2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...
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|Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?
NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 8, 2008 / — -
|"The Soldier's Duty" - Argumentive Photo Essay need help with more Ideas
6 - Sealion Please contact this member off-forum, via their email or other contact information provided in their membership information....
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|Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?
4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...
Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|Character of a Man - Essay
NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...
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|Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother
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|Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word
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|Essay Based on an Essay You Read
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|Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]
NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...
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|Tattoos and piercings essay. Audacious Alterations.
2 - My main concern with this essay is that there is a lot of uncited information here, opening the door...
Writing FeedbackFayFua - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Modern brigade de cuisine system..
NEW - I really think that writing is my weakness. Regarding this essay, I wanna explain the different kinds of chefs...
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|Comparing Christine and Penny essay
Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
|"Designing a hero" - essay about Linda Segers, "Creating the Myth"
2 - Good afternoon. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...
Writing Feedbacksweetcherokee74 - Oct 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 4, 2008
|My teachers and the teacher's day - essay
NEW - Students and teachers are always on the different bank of the lake. Just like how it goes in my...
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|Choices that define us and Haunt Us Essay
2 - Good morning. The second essay is better constructed and more organized, so I have edited it here: ...
Writing Feedbacktomotomo - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Writing an essay about essay - Revising
2 - Good morning. Since the prompt for this assignment was not posted, I can edit for grammar and mechanics...
Writing Feedbacksexy1984 - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Four ways to control stress, take up a hobbies, exercise regularly, set realistic goals, etc.
2 - Controlling Stress In other words, having fun with family and friends ...If this is the conclusion to the...
Writing Feedbacktimka - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|Three main reasons that have inspired me to continue my education
4 - I think with the corrections this essay will answer the prompt easily. Your thinking and writing skills are illustrated,...
Writing Feedbackvaldezs - Sep 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 29, 2008
|obstacles (definition essay)
2 - Good evening. What is/are the prompt/specifics for this assignment? I am afraid I will need more details to...
Writing Feedbackestherq0901 - Sep 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 28, 2008
|Memoir - Analysis of how music changed my life for AP11 English
NEW - Sarah Joncas Nothing's Gonna Change My World Everyone has a favorite song, one that he or she...
Writing Feedbacksarahjoncas - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|"americanism means to be proud" - essay
Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|Naturalism in all of its naked horror - essay
2 - Good evening. Well, you've definately gotten a topic, haven't you? :) Don't be afraid, it's just a fancy...
Writing Feedbackkaytee - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|Speed essay - free interpretation
NEW - Hi, can you help me look through this? Thank you! Racing Speed Daemons The rain slicked down...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 27, 2008 / — -
|Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice
2 - Good evening. "What we sacrifice definitely reveals what we care about the most. I am living in Vietnam....
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|Fear of Change - The Lottery Essay
3 - Good afternoon. Without having access to the lecture and notes, I have to say I think you've fulfilled...
Writing FeedbackBradlays - Sep 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|AODAI - MY NATIONAL COSTUME - description paragraph
Writing Feedbackglass2611 - Sep 23, 2008 / glass2611 - Sep 25, 2008
|Essay about the effects of participation in a sport?
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|Debate Essay: Human Cloning Research
NEW - Human Cloning Research The scene of this conversation takes place at Sacramento State University science clubroom. This is...
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|"This is the worst economy I've ever seen." - Personal Essay
3 - Thank you very much for the critique :) Much appreciated! I would say this forum is really helpful for...
Writing Feedbackkids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008 / kids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008
|Diego Maradona. When people succeed, it is because of hard work.
NEW - " When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you...
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|Health promotion - Article Summary
4 - That depends on the citation style your instructor/institution requires. Once you find that out you can do a quick...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
|'Suicide / LA Diaries' - Essay On A Time In My Life I Felt Desperate
Writing FeedbackMementoMori - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|Death Didn't Choose Me - THESIS
6 - I'm sorry you couldn't find the assistance you were looking for here; unfortunately, we do not rewrite or create...
Writing Feedbacklokitongue - Sep 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
|Rubik's cube - having trouble with a conclusion
NEW - Could you please give me any grammar mistakes in this essay. Also I am having trouble writing the conclusion,...
Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|Snippet Essay, Mita point, Okinawa, Japan.
NEW - Please review this essay for grammar and content. Its my rough draft. The main guideline for this essay is...
Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|The Good Sides of the Internet Invention
NEW - Internet good sides. "For me, one of the best moments of the 20th century is the invention of...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|"Dear Joe" - an unhappy experience - essay help
Writing Feedbackmonterosa - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|Two seasons winter, and fall - check if I ramble, and puncuation
NEW - Prompt: two seasons winter,and fall Note: My teacher wanted me to combine 2 of my paragraphs, without a...
Writing Feedbacktimka - Sep 23, 2008 / — -
|"How Advertising Interferes with Parenting - Grammer and logical fallacies
NEW - I have to turn in this paper tomorrow, Its on how advertising effects how we raise our children. I...
Writing Feedbacknaggles - Sep 23, 2008 / — -
|L.A. brothers - "This is now your new home, welcome home!"
NEW - hello, i made this essay and i had trouble putting more metaphors in it. can u help me change...
Writing Feedbackpinks1026 - Sep 23, 2008 / — -
|Super Size Me! - Movie reponse/ Most memorable part
3 - There is one answer: fast food. Super Size Me! The statement immediately provokes the question inside me: Why...
Writing Feedbackmacho - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|Studying through a computer or studying in school (what students prefer)
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|The Obstinate Man -- Essay on knowing vs. believing and opining vs. ignoran
2 - Good afternoon. What is the prompt for this essay? What kind of assistance are you looking for? ...
Writing Feedbackranman - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|Essay on addiction - what does it mean?
4 - How about something like "Lesser Known Addictions" or "Addicted to Technology"? You're welcome....
Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Sep 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Movie review essay "The Pursuit of Happyness"
NEW - Please look this over for me and tell me what you think. I would appreciate any changes in grammer...
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|Beautiful death of Hektor
NEW - Hey, I was just wondering if you could correct my essay for grammar and whether I proved my thesis....
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|Studying abroad: seeking better opportunities for students?
NEW - I have some questions. I was certainly effected I do not get why using 'effected' instead of 'affected'...
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