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Stepping into the gates - UGRAD statement of purpose

2 - Focus on developing paragraph 3. That is where you purpose seems to lie, but seems unexplored for the most...

UndergraduateMominat - Aug 30, 2023Holt - Sep 16, 2023
The chart bar about consumer in 3 category who consumption fruit and vegetable.

2 - You do not have a problem with understanding the image and yet, you have a problem reporting it. You...

Writing Feedbackfnuruladilah - Aug 29, 2023Holt - Sep 16, 2023
Nowadays, finding out about the history of the house or building is the hobby of many people

2 - When you write the essay, always make sure to include a proper summarized response in your first paragraph. Remember,...

Writing Feedbackngocanhnek - Aug 29, 2023Holt - Sep 16, 2023
This diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting

NEW - Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant The pictorial chart...

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Review: letter of explanation for my study permit reapplication

2 - The essence of your reconsideration letter is lost in the basic translation from one language to the next. It...

Lettersphemmy680 - Aug 27, 2023Holt - Sep 13, 2023
Statement of research interest for a Ph.D application in Quantum Gravity

NEW - Hello everyone. I am writing a statement of research interest (SRI henceforth) and a cover letter for a Ph.D...

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Describe an event or experience in the past 2 years that taught you a lesson.

2 - You are missing a transition paragraph in this essay. A reflection discussion should have followed the first paragraph to...

Writing Feedbackturkeshhan - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
A padded cell - QuestBridge Personal Essay

2 - You are right about the "I am poor" theme of the paper. That does not fly with the reviewers...

Scholarshipantiquelegend - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
The graph below shows the number of foreign visitors to the coast, the mountains, and the lakes

2 - The main concern that I have about this presentation is that you are not writing the 3 sentence minimum...

Writing Feedbacktthaooooo - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
"I can do it" app eassy for Computer Science major GKS_U

2 - The GKS-U application essays follow a highly specific question and answer format. You must respond to a series of...

UndergraduateMinahil - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
Many people across the globe are consuming an exorbitant amount of sugar-based beverages

2 - When asked to discuss the reasons for a problem, the assumption of the examiner is that you shall be...

Writing Feedbackanielts7239 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
Writing Ielts task 1, decribe the manufacture of frozen fish pies

NEW - the process of making fish pies The diagram below describes the process of making processed fish pies. Take...

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Recommendation letter for Undergraduate degree for GKS program_Biotechnology

NEW - This is my recommendation letter that I wrote on behalf of my high school principal. Dear Board of...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] More and more students at university today are not chosing to study science

5 - @Giangtrankim Thank your for your comment!...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Aug 16, 2023Duy Dang - Sep 1, 2023
[IELTS-Opinion Essay] Parents should spend more time with children helping them with their homework.

4 - I like your ideas ,however, I think you should use more compound sentences in order to enhance grammatical requirements,...

Writing Feedbackboreddao - Aug 23, 2023luuyennhi - Aug 31, 2023
ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS CAUSED BY HUMAN ACTIONS AND SUGGESTED SOLUTIONS

NEW - You have such a good range of vocabulary and collocations. However, I can give you some advices : -...

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The amount of phone usage time by teenagers is increasingly rising

2 - In my opinion, you are having some grammatical errors. - "lead to" should be followed by a noun or...

Writing Feedbackserenitytran - Aug 29, 2023luuyennhi - Aug 30, 2023
Essay for MSc Business Analytics Australia scholarship - demonstrating the University's values

NEW - Hello Everyone, Please help me with my draft for the MSc Business Analytics scholarship. Thank you Topic: Please...

Scholarshipkainan - Aug 29, 2023 -
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Bar graph: Multiple social networking sites used in Canada 2014-2015

3 - In the second paragraph " a decrease to 28%" should be changed to "a gradual decrease to 28%" ...

Writing FeedbackIlearnhowtowrite - Aug 22, 2023kainan - Aug 29, 2023
Agree/disagreeScientific research should be controlled by the governments rather than individuals?

3 - I think that at the end of this topic if you add "it seems to me that" after "In...

Writing FeedbackTra Tac - Aug 20, 2023kainan - Aug 29, 2023
Application for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Europubhealth+ Program - motivation letter

NEW - Hi all, I kindly ask for your insights and feedback on my motivation letter, which I have prepared...

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Cramming and immersion are becoming increasingly recognised as methods of gaining knowledge.

NEW - Cramming and immersion in education Although cramming and immersion have earned a reputation as favored and commonplace study...

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Will schools be a thing of the past?

NEW - In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet...

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The widespread use of the internet has caused many problems. What are these? What solutions

3 - you should outline several solutions outright in the introduction and wrap them up when concluding....

Writing Feedbacktaljahy - Aug 22, 2023tinnucbebe - Aug 29, 2023
What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

3 - refrain from using "we", "i", "our", "my"..., especially in an example. They will make your evidence less objective and...

Writing Feedbackmee_lina07 - Aug 26, 2023tinnucbebe - Aug 29, 2023
Growing Up In The Family Restaurant

NEW - Growing Up In The Family Restaurant The experience of working in my family restaurant taught me the importance...

Undergraduatesebastian323 - Aug 28, 2023 -
[IELTS T. 2] Remote working has its own pros and cons, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

NEW - Recently, some office workers have begun to work from home instead of commuting to an office each day, and...

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Chevening essay - How networking helped me succeed in my career development

NEW - NETWORKING essay Chevening is looking for individuals with strong networking skills, who will engage with the Chevening community...

Scholarshipkn197 - Aug 28, 2023 -
Different perspectives about the role of taking risks in both; their professional and personal lives

7 - Overall, good organization of the essay. I recommend to add 1 sentence of example to explain this point "Those...

Writing Feedbackvietnguyen2306 - Aug 25, 2023kn197 - Aug 28, 2023
Some people believe it is better to work out in a gym, while others prefer to exercise outdoors.

8 - 1. Many sentences are grammatically incorrect. First, use free "Grammarlly" to correct your sentences. 2. In terms structuring your...

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