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Apr 28, 2018
Writing Feedback / What is better: work only three days a week for long hours or five days a week for shorter hours? [3]
Dear,
you are welcomed.
Working hours is always a hot issue informalword for academic test regarding the labor law.
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first of all, you need to understand the prompt. Then you have to paraphrase it with the help of synonyms or different structures of sentences making.Finally you give your pinion about it. you write body para 2 or 3 body instead of only one. then it would be reader friendly as well as proper format of writing.
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Dear,
you are welcomed.
Working hours is always
( poor introduction)
first of all, you need to understand the prompt. Then you have to paraphrase it with the help of synonyms or different structures of sentences making.Finally you give your pinion about it. you write body para 2 or 3 body instead of only one. then it would be reader friendly as well as proper format of writing.
First, people can do limited wise ... unclear topic sentence
Working three days
... certain amount of
you need to read a lots to know how a essay develop.
keep writing :)