Writing Feedback / As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq [2]

The Kurdish army stayed alongside Tigris River Valley. They had been surveyed and mapped each inch everything which was Islamic Stated people belong. They had been beating of ISIS to from Fallujah in the mountain and now they forward to Mosul. While U.S. Soldiers were stick together and addition militias from Iraqi, Turkey, Iran and others. Now, situation in Mosul was not conducive. The United Nations was expected more over a million people will be moved to safe place. ISIS rebellions were using a trap in buildings. Some people were facing ISIS terror if they captivated they would be prisoned, beaten until beheaded. On the other hand, ISIS still controlled of Fazilia and sat up heavy gunfire and also sniper and suicide bomber.

Source: news.nationalgeographic..../2016/10/islamic-state-isis-iraq-mosul-syria-offensive/

Writing Feedback / The death of the Thai king throws the country into turmoil [2]

After king of Thai's, Bhumibol Adulyadej is passed. Many people doubted succession not to be soft in this monarchy country. Commonly, milestone in Thailand's politic involved by army power. This situation able to under control in Bhumibol regime which was Thai's army loyal to the king but after his gone the day uncertainty in Thailand. This country had riot in 2014 where the action class violent middle class people against the rural people then this brought the army taken advantage from it. Nowadays, many public goods are closed and some multinational and international organizations have been announcing to their labor to spend their time to work at home for couple weeks. Thai's official confirmed that prince, Maha Vajiralongkorn will be continuing his father throne. For this situation, some analysts argued it may be caused friction because the prince unpopular among Thai's.

source: economist

Writing Feedback / Keep your goals to yourself by Derek Sivers [2]

Many people have personal goals that it imagined to step next closer but honestly, if you tell your dream to other people that it would not good feeling. In fact, psychology expert said that saying someone your objective make them unhappy. According to Derek Sivers, many people try to pursue the goals such as less weight with jogging then you tell to someone which good reaction is good for your motivation. However if they have opposite reaction you will be less motivation to hard work. Hundred people involved in separated test. As a result, those have announced most close at the achieving the goal. Next, what can people do? Siver said, they should resist temptation to announce the goal and deliver social acknowledgment. In Addition, if people attempted to someone goal, just say exactly well done.

Writing Feedback / Why the letter X represents undefined or an unknown? [2]

Letter 'X' is represented undefined or unknown. It something no definition such as the x-files, the x-price, the x-project and so on. The question is why this letter which is representative of unknown? Terry Moore have been explained it by learn some letters or language some countries. Starting Arabic language, he found in letter Syin. Moore elaborated that Arabic language symbols were containing mathematic wisdom and then it translated. Next it known as AL Jabra. However, one of problem was the Arabic symbol unpopular in European countries. To solve this, Moore said that Letter 'shin' translated become 'say on' which meant something that it some undefined and unknown thing. The problem from medieval Spanish scientist are translating these materials. The word 'Shin' become 'say on' cannot be render into Spanish language because Spanish difficult to say this sound. These problems be resolved by using Greek symbol X (read: kai) and then, this letter translated into English become X.

Source: TED, Terry Moore

Writing Feedback / Hundreds of crisscrossing tracks offer a glimpse of life in Africa around 19,000 years ago [2]

A hundred mile from the volcano the Maasai, Africa, the scientist have cataloged preserved human footprint in the mud from 5,000 to 19,000 years ago. More over 350 footsteps sketch in about square 50 meters, it larger than badminton court. Some the path seen to show around a dozen people mostly female and kids who travelled across mud together forward southwest. In overt time researchers have been published their study that they say that it will resemble their result which was identify at least 24 tracks, some possible joggers, more than a dozen people traveling together. For tracking of ancient people footsteps, the researcher created 3-D scans entire of Engare Sero, dance hall and all.

Source: news.nationalgeographic

Writing Feedback / Programming bacteria to detect cancer (and maybe treat it) [2]

Nowadays, technology made big change entire human life. It used rapidly and computer involved by scientist to create more innovation. For example computer program able to assist Bacteria to detect cancer inside human body. An explanation from researcher, Tal Danino said that bacteria can help human to detect cancer even another disease. He developed a software where it can write algorithm DNA inside the Bacteria. This program can communicate with Bacteria molecule. The method was bacteria synchronize together and then grew up as a colony. Then, the program assisted the colony to spread out to detect disease that phenomena he called a supernova. Interestingly his program Bacteria grew naturally in human body and sent signal to the machine and the detect cancer or treat. It will be benefit to detect cancer and other disease in the future. His vision has technology can support in human life.

Source: TED, Tal Danino

Writing Feedback / Tax dodgers in India and Indonesia have been given a chance to come clean [2]

Two developing countries in Asia, India and Indonesia have same problems about tax revenue. India where have more over 1 billion people only have a few tax revenue approximately 1 million rupees while Indonesia's 255 citizens number, there 27 million people are registered. Both countries have GDP ratio number at 11 percent. Regarding this issues, India's government has expected to collect in 4.4 billion dollar from the 64,275 taxpayers which targeted people who live and worked in overseas. In addition, India just paid 373 million dollar from 633 people who owned up. Whereas Indonesia which is trying an amnesty tax. A number 328,000 people have taken advantage when tax amnesty launched in July which ended in September. The taxpayer are politicians and businessmen. They are suspect hidden their wealth and save money in overseas bank.

Writing Feedback / Let's All Obsess Over This Intricate Map of Alt Music History [3]

The history of band music performance started to a legendary band in England, The Sex Pistols begin its performance in 4 June 1976, Manchester Hall. Now, this performance has been peak up to rank one all the time. However it not the band but the spectators made the exhibition famous. A counter culture rock music spilled out from these. The band had influenced many kinds music today such as punk, ska, hardcore, grunge, etc. To connect those complex relations all band, a researcher looked by the poster on a circuit board from a transistor radio namely music-mapping print. As a result, firstly, researcher used symbolic code commercially available transistor radio it came out in 1954 then manifested into poster form and frozen in time. Secondly, the music mapping used musical connections to identify listening recommendations. Those between band types and layers between legends like The Clash and Television-are delightfully easy to find this music map.

Writing Feedback / Let is simplify legal jargon By Alan Siegel [2]

Alan Siegel in his speech on TED talked that today government was complexity responsible which run a 16 pages constitutions where took at 2,074 pages and more than 400,000 words to present into senate. He explained the simple things achieving this about transparency and empathy in building of humanity and communication. Siegel as keynote speaker on this session as capacity in businessmen. Had been developed design business and focus a new people and interactive with others such as the government, people and business for long years ago. He explained to be more simple it how to organize the legal document to check and re-check. He said that Obama always have time to correct and all important document. Moreover Siegel explained about changing the content that he proud about date, calendar for large company as IBM. IBM have responsibility in business. Along his speech He cited many data from statistic, for example 1 in 10 taxpayers received a notice or letter from IRS, a business organization in America. In the last, he had quotation from former president, Thomas Jefferson which said when the subject is strong, simplicity is the only way to treat it. It was meant agency or organization to make clarity, transparency, simplicity and national priority.

Source: TED

Writing Feedback / The punishment depends from different circumstances and motivations of the crime [2]

Some people believe that there should fixed there should fixed punishment for each type of crime, others however that the cirumtances of an should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that punishment of crime type should be cleared while others argued that the circumstance of person to instance to crime because motivation factor and might be taken into account before deciding punishment. In this essay I will discuss of both of views. However, I agree that law should be cleared in each crime type.

Common believe that people should be obey of law. It is meant that people who commit to crime should be looked by circumstance and motivation. For example, and economic reason. Some people evolve in crime because they are unemployment. In urban area, number of crime people are average young people. They have not education, low economic background. As a result they cannot another choice and then become a young gangster. Government should be more attention of their reason and then give punishment.

On the other hand, law maker should be fixed the variety of crime. Nowadays, many variation of crime cannot be cleared because government was still confused to finish it. For example corruption, It is extraordinary crime. Many people are jailed most of public representative, government officer. They have been punished fewer 20 year while China have policy to death penalthy of this case. In the other hand, other crime such as drugs crime have death penalty. Those problem have to be more elaborate and fixed before punishment.

In conclusion, those statements that I mentioned before. I stand the punishment need cleared and I recommend that stakeholders need be discuss intensionally about it.

Writing Feedback / OPEC agrees its first production cut since 2008 [3]

Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) made a decision that member of this organization cannot agree about cartel system because Iran and Saudi Arabia was still rival in this sectori. On September 28th the OPEC members gathered a meeting and agreed to cut and limit of production to 32.5-33 m barrels per day. Saudi Arabia was decreased significantly in production. Next, these will take noticed of what the agreement talked about Saudi Arabic. This country had insisted that it would cut output only if other producers followed suit. However, This condition, OPEC brought into direct conflict with other such as like Iran. This country had been decreased of oil production while the Algiers Agreement will be possible if Iran won of argumentation. On the other hand, this agreement already discussed about oil price whereas the oil market had been decreased the price this year. For additional information, OPEC still powerfull in oil global market.

Writing Feedback / Anthony Goldbloom, Machine learning expert, shared his experience in TED channel. [3]

The jobs we will lose to machines-and the ones we want not

Anthony Goldbloom, Machine learning expert shared of his experience in TED channel. He argued that machine has changed people live which it not only able to task simple things but many applications. Machines are utilized in industry and academia such as data operating, cooking, game, data sharing, grading essay and disease testing. Simply, machine capable to operate many things in every situation. This hard to imagine that machine was able like human do. However, machine was brought some negative impact in people live. Online crime, credit card hacking as two of many effects caused by using machine. In this situation, people should be aware about growth of modern technology. As a result, with the globalization era, machine has responsible to change of human condition.

Source: TED

Writing Feedback / THE VICE PRESIDENTIAL DEBATE WAS A LOT MORE FUN ON TWITTER [2]

Twitter has taken apart of America vice presidential debate of the 2016. Two candidates, Tim Kaine and Mike Pence are debating to grab American's voters. Along session, Kaine interrupted a lot while Pence was calm. Americans who was attended in venue which it predict Pence sixty percent won as vice president. This debate was successful because twitter gave real-time power in US democracy. Mike Pence spent much time not defending Donald Trump whereas Pence was brought out and stand in Hillary Clintons' campaign. He has only need material to win the race. On the other hand, for Donald Trump, he promised to tweet his running debate yesterday and ensured that many journalists are able to watch his feed in twitter. In the end, the debate was over and the election will be postponed for more than a month.

Writing Feedback / How Young Malawian Boy Build a Windmill [2]

Wind is free source and an alternative energy. This energy is more advantage than disadvantage. For intense, Malawian inventor, William Kamkwamba made a windmill machine to generate electric in his home. He invented of this equipment by reading a science book. Soon after reading, he made some experiment, then it changed the structure specially the windmill design and bought some material to assemble. Next, He tested this machine for tree times and then it was assembly by raw material such as plastic pipe, bamboo, propeller, cable, storage battery, etc. This machine is rotated by wind. As a result, it is able to generate electric which supplies to four lights and two radios. In age 19 years old, dropped out at the school, he spent many time in energy for better life in Malawi village. Next plan, he prepare to build hydro-power energy in Malawi.

Source: TED

Writing Feedback / A research published that the amount of ivory elephants in Africa were significantly decreased [2]

A legal trade of ivory would wipe out elephants

Recently, a research published that the amount of ivory elephants in Africa were significantly decrease of demand to overseas. It caused by legalizing trade. The study also announced that ivory demand is twice greater than amount of ivory. Now, number of elephants are decline significantly. In fact, demand for ivory in Asia that these some 27,000 elephants are killed a year. It was against ivory trade that some countries around the world are set to discuss about international ivory trade which banned 1989. Some argued that the illegal trade would decline as result of legal sale ivory. However, others argued that a legalized trade will bring some elephant populations are increase enough. Zimbabwe and Namibia where both proposed bring back the trade on the ivory. Next, these scenario would happen that looked by new study had result which these countries have quotas high enough to meet demand. It meant, over-exploitation drive elephants in danger.

Writing Feedback / Star basketball player endorses Hillary Clinton [3]

Cavalier stars basketball player, James LeBron has supported Hillary Clinton for next president of the United States. He said that, He endorsed Hillary because this candidate will continue Barack Obama Legacy. Moreover, He believe that, Hillary has committed to provide a good policy in education and reduce the violence. According to LeBron, The United States need a president who bring in unity and peace among other people. No matter where she or he were from even the color of skin. American must stand equally. LeBron has argued this issue after attacking some policeman and his charity organization announced a program in August 2015 to help students attend college.

Writing Feedback / A Storm Wiped Out Power to An Entire State in Australia [2]

For couple days, South Australia is still fighting with storm effect after power device had turned down. ABC News reported that power had been resuming at the center of Adelaide on Thursday while a thousand consumers are without electric supply and horrible weather expected recovery completely.

According to ABC, the storm destructed public facilities such schools, shops, and gas stations were closed. The government spoke that blackout cannot been prohibited. Official said force winds took out twenty two towers and tore down power lines. This dropped down many trees and rooftops ripped off buildings.

"This is an unprecedented event. Nobody has seen such a catastrophic failure of so much major infrastructure in any other part of the nation." ABC quoted from official South Australia.

Writing Feedback / African social dance which influenced the world [2]

A Visual History of Social Dance in 25 Moves

Camille A. Brown talked on TED channel about African social dance which had influenced in the world. This dance had merging social engagement and dance belong to group. Actually, many type of this dance, Brown said more less thirty motions are dancing in African and Afro-American but to make it simply, I took only two examples; Charleston and Hip-hop. Those dance more popular among Africa people. Charleston is complex dance that need more improvisation while hip-hop which it is happening in the world. Teenager until old people are dancing this.

In question is why social dance popular in African? Simply, in past decade, slavery affected suffering to African people. By dance they express and protest which their condition. As result, dance took apart in African movement. As a speaker said, African dance make boundaries blurred.

These dance to express in social relation, intimacy and freedom.

Source: TED Channel

Writing Feedback / A glory day to Hillary Clinton in first presidential debate [2]

Hillary started impressing performance which is defeated the rival, Donald Trump of the first presidential debate at Hofstra University, America. This campaign as like asymmetric war that explained unequal battle. The candidates have not same idea such economy sector, Trump blamed Hillary which she do nothing to fix this problem along 30 years as public representative. On the other hand, Hillary striking back which Mr Trumph talked non-sense. She was good preparation and notoriously. By the end of debate, the candidates spent more time talked about tax and war. Trump had been denying for not paying income tax to federal whereas Hillary opposite, said 'on behalf of myself, and I think on behalf of a majority of the American people, say that, you know, our word is good. Thus, this debate resulted that one candidate who was good preparation and other confused, 1-0 to Mrs Clinton.

Source: economist.com/blogs/democracyinamerica/2016/09/win-hillary-clinton

Writing Feedback / Clint Smith, a poet and teacher spoke about the danger of silence on the TED channel [3]

The danger of silence by Clint Smith

Clint Smith, a poet and teacher spoke up about the danger of silence on the TED channel. He begun speech with quoted of Marten Luther King Jr story who reflected African movement in America. Smith talked that silence is residue fear entire in his life and African people as well, for example, discrimination, violence and war. At the beginning he live in suffered, no soda, no food, no home, as the result he give up. However he realized that every man want to be as human, have right to live which every people are needed life good, freedom and equal. A short, he stand front of the audience is speaking up against discrimination and injustice.

Source: TED

Writing Feedback / The history of England Conquest [3]

In the 11th century, England had responsible twice invasions which changed the nation. This country has more adequately invader. It defeated two conquests in the site only 50 years which impact on culture, politics, law and language because Danish conquest in 1016.

After thirty years, all area surrounded by Scandinavian overhand by England. Denmark people ruled belong Svein while Cnut and an England kingdom separated between King Elthered and his young prince Edmund. Over time England has not be able to maintain among 6 months of class against Cnut's armies whereas it did not have planned final victory for Cnuts at Essex in eightieth century. Soon after after Edmund passed away six weeks later, Danish-Norman dynasty become formed.

The last story, even Cnuts has not the first Danish King in the UK but he founded more less impact in the English kings. Further his generations were responsible by the epochal situation of year 1066 become history and collective memory in England people.