abangabul93
Oct 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / A Perspective Happiness of People in Their Marriage or Single Life Over Time [4]
Hello @SarlindaDS_27, I got some suggestions for your writing:
1. The charts provide(THE) information about..
2. Additionally, all of the spousesare still keep (TO BE) happier even though(WHETHER) they have or not have next generation or children (OR NOT) .
3.But(BY CONTRAST/ON THE OTHER HAND)for people in elderly stage seems(TO BE) happier ..
4. ... in all of marriage life (DOES) not give ...
Please, pay attention in Subject Verb Agreement .. Keep writing :D
Hello @SarlindaDS_27, I got some suggestions for your writing:
1. The charts provide(THE) information about..
2. Additionally, all of the spouses
3.
4. ... in all of marriage life (DOES) not give ...
Please, pay attention in Subject Verb Agreement .. Keep writing :D