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WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss both view - should spend money on bicycle or public transport?

3 - I appreciate your help! thanks a lot:) Actually, I'm a beginner, so I will definitetly make a lot of...

Writing Feedbacktuan1618 - Jun 7, 2022tuan1618 - Jun 7, 2022
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] BAR CHART - GLOBAL MOBILE PHONES SALES BY BRAND

3 - appreciate your useful feedback!!! thanks a lot! have a nice dayy...

Writing Feedbacktypicallyarimel - Jun 7, 2022typicallyarimel - Jun 7, 2022
Book Review: THE QUEEN'S GAMBIT at least 1000 words.

2 - As this is a book report and not a film review of the book, there should not be any...

Book ReportsChloeduong - Jun 7, 2022Holt - Jun 7, 2022
(IELTS WRITING) Governments should ban dangerous sports? Discuss and give your own opinion

2 - Representing a statement of concern was totally unnecessary since this was not represented as such in the essay. It...

Writing Feedbackthaole2901 - Jun 7, 2022Holt - Jun 7, 2022
State the reason for studying in Japan and what you wish to study at a university in Japan

2 - This can be used as a general reference point for a properly developed essay response. It at least gives...

Scholarshipalita - Jun 6, 2022Holt - Jun 6, 2022
Essay regarding the consumption of unhealthy food

4 - You can use "therefore" instead of "thus" to avoid repeating...

Writing FeedbackAxis0019 - Jun 6, 2022hoangtran - Jun 10, 2022
People claim that in the upcoming years, printed publications will be replaced by online materials

2 - Do not make claims that are not present in the original version so as not to negatively affect prompt...

Writing Feedbackpoopie - Jun 6, 2022Holt - Jun 6, 2022
Task 2: academic writing: what factors affect food choices

3 - Thank you so much for giving me meaningful advice. I will try to review my essay and write it...

Writing FeedbackTran Thi Linh - Jun 6, 2022Tran Thi Linh - Jun 7, 2022
Some people believe that learners should be taught what is necessary for their expertise

2 - The first sentence in this presentation is a prompt topic deviation but not an opinion misrepresentation. Placed in the...

Writing FeedbackPhan Son - Jun 6, 2022Holt - Jun 6, 2022
Valedictorian Admission Form (Grade 8) - what qualities do you posses

3 - @Holt Thanks for your review, your critique is thoroughly appreciated. The only directions that I was given were that...

ScholarshipMkDeltaXD - Jun 5, 2022MkDeltaXD - Jun 5, 2022
The question is whether specialized data should be widely available or not

2 - The prompt paraphrase is not going to receive passing considerations for 3 reasons: 1. The writer indicates a...

Writing Feedbackthaishaf - Jun 5, 2022Holt - Jun 5, 2022
The pie charts illustrates how many people took part in organizations voluntarily (2008 and 2014)

5 - Conversely, the figure for a person in an educational organization and others ......

Writing Feedbackuyen2028 - Jun 5, 2022danielsmith - Jun 20, 2022
IELTS Task 1 essay about the rate of people working in different jobs in 2 towns

6 - 1. "It can be seen that" shouldn't be stated in the 2nd paragraph, instead you could say " Overall,...

Writing FeedbackMinh Tam - Jun 5, 2022beckaa - Jun 23, 2022
Many subjects are dropped at school, leading multiple changes for students.

3 - @Holt thanks a lot !!!!!! i'll keep practicing and preventing myself from making these mistakes....

Writing Feedbacknhu thao - Jun 5, 2022nhu thao - Jun 5, 2022
The shown diagram depicts the procedure for reprocessing plastic bottles - IELTS 1

2 - This type of essay writing does not receive a passing score. That is because when less than 150 words...

Writing FeedbackKim2k5 - Jun 4, 2022Holt - Jun 4, 2022
IELTS[WRITING TASK 1] The number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

2 - The summary overview is incomplete as it does not mention the value reference of the data as collated. The...

Writing Feedbackelenaphan05 - Jun 4, 2022Holt - Jun 4, 2022
IELTS Wirting Task2 Happiness definition

2 - While the essay more than meets the required word count, the presentation format is incorrect. The IELTS Task 2...

Writing FeedbackIELTS HOU - Jun 4, 2022Holt - Jun 4, 2022
[WRITING TASK 1] the Internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010 - 2011

2 - The presentation has 4 images which means it should have followed the 4 reporting paragraph format. The lack of...

Writing Feedbacknguyendynamo - Jun 3, 2022Holt - Jun 3, 2022
How to be well prepared before an exam

2 - The essay has good ideas that could have been better developed. I see this essay as a 4 paragraph...

Writing FeedbackFujiwara no Sai - Jun 3, 2022Holt - Jun 3, 2022
Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?

2 - The topic paraphrasing is off-base. The writer's interpretation of the original topic does not reflect the correct meaning and...

Writing Feedbacktrangntt150801 - Jun 3, 2022Holt - Jun 3, 2022
The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.

2 - The summary overview and trending statement are well developed in this essay. The 2 sentence presentation is concise, clear,...

Writing Feedbackchungdinh - Jun 3, 2022Holt - Jun 3, 2022
Essay about schools preparing students for university instead of jobs

2 - The prompt restatement + personal opinion paragraph should only be 2 sentences long for agree or disagree and extent...

Writing FeedbackMatt1313 - Jun 2, 2022Holt - Jun 2, 2022
Essay about the power of advertising in the sale of consumer goods

2 - 2 problems exist in the prompt paraphrase. The first problem is that the author has opened with non- supported...

Writing FeedbackMatt1313 - Jun 2, 2022Holt - Jun 2, 2022
INFLUENCE OF ADVERTISEMENTS ON CONSUMERS - CAUSES AND SOLUTION

2 - The prompt restatement should carry an academic tone and should not be using slang English words such as "bombarded"....

Writing Feedbackkimsunoo - Jun 2, 2022Holt - Jun 2, 2022
Some people say that advertising is extremely successfull at persuading us

3 - @Holt Thank you for the detailed response but would it score 7 or above in the ielts exam?...

Writing FeedbackMatt1313 - Jun 1, 2022Matt1313 - Jun 1, 2022
Whether parents or school should be responsible for unhealthy lifestyle of children

2 - The prompt restatement does not accurately seem up the original discussion points. The mistake in the interpretation was caused...

Writing FeedbackMaimaimaii - Jun 1, 2022Holt - Jun 1, 2022
The proportion of people in five different cities in Australia who consumed coffee and tea

2 - It is important for reporting purposes that the writer treat this as an actual analysis. An accurate analysis never...

Writing Feedbackphuongmaihihihi - May 31, 2022Holt - May 31, 2022
There are a variety of advantages for pupils to follow the higher learning path after graduation

4 - There is an absence of paraphrasing for the question prompt. That alone will make the essay unacceptable for IELTS....

Writing Feedbacklequangtien98 - May 31, 2022Matt1313 - Jun 2, 2022
Pros and cons of living or studying in other contries

3 - Although use, the term pros and cons can be replaced with more formal words such as benefits and drawbacks...

Writing FeedbackDuy020 - May 30, 2022Matt1313 - Jun 2, 2022
GKS Personal Statement for Undergraduate (Software Engineering)

3 - @Holt sorry i will correct it. i got confused with words. thank you for your correction...

Undergraduateaevliz - May 30, 2022aevliz - May 30, 2022
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