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The statistic of ticket buying online based on age and how the internet was access in 3 countries

3 - If you want to give a comparison, you should compare between two variables only. For example, you can talk...

Writing Feedbackgreencoconut - Sep 13, 2021monicaaa0017 - Sep 14, 2021
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship/ Mass Communication Major

2 - The applicant is applying for the wrong undergraduate course. Rather than Mass communications, he should be applying as a...

Undergraduatehaving100issues - Sep 13, 2021Holt - Sep 14, 2021
The Importance of owning a house

2 - There are 2 seperate sentence ideas here. This run-on is not good for the idea clarity in the...

Writing FeedbackDieulinhngoc27 - Sep 12, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
An aging population is one of the most alarming issues among the countries in this day and age

2 - The response format of the essay does not relate to the orginal discussion topic or discussion instructions. The presentation...

Writing FeedbackAntoshi123 - Sep 12, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others disagree

3 - I suggest "what meets their demands" instead of "what meets the demands of them"...

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Love always wins! REVIEW OF A FILM

4 - @isamj Hi, it helps if you use proper spelling, i.e. crash vs crush. They're different....

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Why owning a home rather than renting one is important for people? Is this negative or positive?

2 - The prompt restatement veers away from the orginal presentation because, rather than simply restating the topic, the writer has...

Writing Feedbacktuna0709 - Sep 11, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
What is an effective life?

2 - The essay does not make its intention clear to the reader. Is the point to define an effective life...

Undergraduatesinojisak02 - Sep 11, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
GKS LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN before come to Korea and after; My long-time interest in this country

5 - @nb19 Thank you so much for your feedback, i maked a few changes before sent my doc to gks...

ScholarshipMoonlight33 - Sep 11, 2021Moonlight33 - Oct 8, 2021
TOPIC: What causes young people, especially university students, to feel negative?

4 - more link word i think so...

Writing FeedbackDaisyyyyy - Sep 11, 2021hoangdepzai3904 - Sep 14, 2021
One of the most increasingly ubiquitous trends today is online shopping

2 - - Merits and drawbacks are in plural form. Therefore the plural form of the pronoun "this" must be...

Writing Feedbackgiang12345 - Sep 10, 2021Holt - Sep 11, 2021
[WRITING TASK 1] The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010.

4 - I suggest that you replace "categories of clothing and manufacturing" with "clothing and manufacturing categories"...

Writing Feedbacktan_ho - Sep 10, 2021Goldengoat - Sep 14, 2021
Personal Statement for KGSP Undergrad '22- The inscrutability [of economics] is perhaps not unintent

2 - It is best to avoid using quotations to explain yourself in the essay. The reviewer does not need to...

Scholarshipohyouarenana - Sep 10, 2021Holt - Sep 11, 2021
The line graph gives information about the fluctuations of food price index and average oil price

2 - There is a correlation measurement indicated in the original image. When the writer referred to the correlation, that specific...

Writing Feedbackthewind96 - Sep 9, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
Report: Evaluation of the 'International food' course in the Superior school of cookery.

2 - Observations should be either positive or negative. These are not references to what was learned in class. Such a...

Writing Feedbackisamj - Sep 9, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
Personal Statement GKS Graduate 2022 University Track Master's Degree Chemical Enginnering

3 - try to better connect one paragraph to another! :)...

Scholarshipshriibk - Sep 9, 2021may4 - Sep 23, 2021
How to make academic writing interesting?

13 - @dbessays First, pick a few topics that are connected to a variety of issues that are well-known to you....

Student Talkdbessays - Sep 9, 2021Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
Everyone should become vegetarian because a healthy meal does not necessarily require meat

2 - This has nothing to do with the discussion provided. References must be suitable to the given topic. In...

Writing Feedbackhieuhieu - Sep 9, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
Target: Band 7- Writing Task 2: The influence of technology to lifestyle

2 - There are 3 seperate ideas presented in this long sentence. one of the ideas are properly depicted in...

Writing Feedbackchieumap2110 - Sep 9, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
The global water use and the water expenditure in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo

3 - @Holt i don't think my coherence is bad, in the first chat, i illustrate the diffenrent period of the...

Writing Feedbackhoangdepzai3904 - Sep 9, 2021hoangdepzai3904 - Sep 14, 2021
It is true that environmental problems are not received care enough from citizens

3 - Hi, I would like to point out your errors in your essay. 1. The first grammatical mistake is noticeable...

Writing Feedbacktramtrieu - Sep 9, 2021huyjunnie - Sep 11, 2021
LEADERSHIP IS NOT A TITLE BUT AN ACTION - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP ESSAY

5 - @monicaaa0017 Hi Monica, in my opinion, the experiences you have described have illustrated how the leadership factor is there,...

Scholarshipmonicaaa0017 - Sep 8, 2021Socapanggiring28 - Sep 15, 2021
The bar graph below shows basic information about uses of leisure time among different age group.

2 - The writer used a topic restatement + opinion presentation for the first paragraph. A discussion format exclusive to the...

Writing Feedbackiraitc - Sep 8, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship, Pharmacy major

3 - @Maya2004 As the other consultant said you should try to write more about English . And this truly not...

ScholarshipMaya2004 - Sep 8, 2021Jessica05 - Sep 10, 2021
BEGINNER-WRITING TASK 1: Recycling process of aluminium cans

5 - I think for the introduction you can say The diagram gives the information of the process of how aluminium...

Writing Feedbackhominhthu15 - Sep 7, 2021monicaaa0017 - Sep 14, 2021
TASK 2; The idea that people should have their own house instead of renting one

3 - I think your whole idea was correct but the way you deliver the idea was incorrect and not in...

Writing FeedbackDungBui - Sep 7, 2021monicaaa0017 - Sep 12, 2021
Salary issue between famous athletes and other important professionals in society

NEW - Topic: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people...

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What should and should not be taught at school has been a perennial debate

2 - The prompt restatement must be a factual representation of the orginal within 2 sentences. No actual opinion coming from...

Writing Feedbackdomkhoa - Sep 7, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
WRITING TASK 2: UNPAID WORK

3 - I think your conclusion is incomplete as it is supposed to be at least 2 sentences. You should accentuate...

Writing Feedbackphongthanh - Sep 7, 2021benedictandrew - Sep 9, 2021
BEGINNER- WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism

2 - An economic discussion was not stated in the original prompt. The reference is for a general advantage reference....

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