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IETLS WRTING TASK 2: IS IT INHUMANE TO KEEP ANIMALS IN ZOOS? WHY?

3 - overall, your essay has met the requirements for Task Achievement - discussing both view without giving your opinions. You...

Writing Feedbacknnkimngan - May 13, 2021phatdanghocielts - May 14, 2021
UMD computer science - TRANSFER ESSAY

2 - You love your commas way too much. You may not think that proper punctuation matters in these essays, but,...

Undergraduateyogi0115 - May 13, 2021Holt - May 13, 2021
The diagrams show how the bee makes honey, and the stages in the production of honey.

2 - You are short by almost 10 words of the 150 word minimum. Signifying a lack of proper summary presentation...

Writing Feedbackeliza00472 - May 12, 2021Holt - May 13, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Living by themselves

3 - you should state your point of views rather than rephrasing the instruction in the opening by saying I believe...

Writing FeedbackTuss - May 12, 2021phatdanghocielts - May 14, 2021
iELTS essay about genders and work

3 - @Holt Really appreciate your comment, thank you very much...

Writing Feedbackhoquanghuy - May 12, 2021hoquanghuy - May 14, 2021
Study plan for study permit for software engineering; comprehensive and competitive education system

2 - The study plan you present lacks a study focus based an research purposes in relation to career planning and...

UndergraduateSamantha1 - May 12, 2021Holt - May 13, 2021
How many people paid a visit to Ashdown Museum

2 - 245 words is only 5 words short of minimum word count forthe task 2 essay, which is written in...

Writing Feedbackanhnta2004 - May 12, 2021Holt - May 12, 2021
The Ministry of Finance - STUDY OBJECTIVE FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM

2 - Your study/research objective is limited to your local career path alone. As a Fulbright scholar, your main objective should...

Scholarshipgonzforever - May 11, 2021Holt - May 12, 2021
Some educators believe that the most important trait a teacher can have is self-acceptance.

2 - How does this relate to the teacher discussion? The reference point in the original discussion is in relation...

Writing FeedbackNavpreet - May 11, 2021Holt - May 12, 2021
English (talk about The Guardian's view on Australia Day: Change the date )

2 - The history of the event is difficult to understand and follow. The ESL presentation will not even pass as...

Writing FeedbackKim555 - May 11, 2021Holt - May 12, 2021
Individual and governmental action should be taken to inhibit vast tracts of forests from vanishing

2 - The essay is only 221 words. I am afraid that the wordcount deduction will be difficult for your work...

Writing Feedbackphuongphamviet - May 11, 2021Holt - May 12, 2021
IELTS Writing task 1 check my passage on real estate

5 - If I were you, I would change a little bit for the introduction like: The figure illustrates the different...

Writing Feedbackjosh_550442 - May 11, 2021Johnlee94 - May 14, 2021
Writing task 1 process: the production of bricks

3 - I have done the IELTS test. I would like to share what I have done in my writing task...

Writing Feedbackngocmainguyen - May 11, 2021gonzforever - May 11, 2021
The diagram below shows the lifecycle of the butterfly.

2 - What kind of chart? You call it a life-cycle chart, a development chart, or even a process chart....

Writing Feedbackhoangthutrang - May 11, 2021Holt - May 11, 2021
Whether would you think is more important, the book or the cover?

2 - Did you mean to use that as the hook for your opening statement? If you did then you...

Writing Feedbackjenniep - May 10, 2021Holt - May 11, 2021
Letter - to express my interest in the position as a local tour guide

3 - Many thanks for your comment. It is the first time I have written Task 1 and I will be...

LetterstuanVMMU - May 10, 2021tuanVMMU - May 11, 2021
Stop gambling around! (essay for an exam in Netherlands)

2 - What is the exam you will be taking ? What are the discussion requirements? The lack of writing instructions...

Writing Feedbackbaai - May 10, 2021Holt - May 11, 2021
SOP for Master in Data Science; I aspire to teach and research at a university/research center

4 - Thanks for your comment. I will effect the changes as suggested....

Graduateeosopoku - May 10, 2021eosopoku - May 16, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: It is possible to live a normal life as others after releasing from prison

3 - Thank you for your advice. I will read all again to check my mistake...

Writing FeedbackLinh_Nguyen - May 9, 2021Linh_Nguyen - May 10, 2021
[IELTS Mock Test 2021] January Writing 1 - students in Australia

2 - There are only 144 words in this presentation. You missed the word requirement by 6 words. Percentage deductions to...

Writing FeedbackThi Nguyen - May 9, 2021Holt - May 10, 2021
A Look at Animal Agriculture from an Environmental Perspective

2 - Define and differentiate. These 2 are usually seen as connected but yeseparate environmental topics. Educate the people who...

Research Papersfruitfulfaerie - May 9, 2021Holt - May 9, 2021
The line graph compares figures for daily travel of employee by three different transports in UK

2 - Where is the image? It will be hard to assess the accuracy and quality of your work without it....

Writing Feedbackkieoanh - May 9, 2021Holt - May 9, 2021
My topic is about migrating drawbacks and how to improve urban life for all citizens

2 - Your restatement needs work. There was a point in the first sentence when you began to deviate from the...

Writing Feedbackladybirdteddddd - May 9, 2021Holt - May 9, 2021
"I need to believe that extraordinary is possible." Personal statement about urban life

2 - You did not provide the writing instructions for this personal statement so I cannot be sure about how applicable...

UndergraduateRahim123 - May 8, 2021Holt - May 9, 2021
The graph below shows changes in the distribution of average household income between 1965 and 2015.

2 - The lack of image will prevent me from giving your work a full review. Provide an image next lime...

Writing FeedbackDieuanh111 - May 8, 2021Holt - May 9, 2021
What are the reasons for world poverty? The main factors of this phenomenon and possible solutions

2 - The essay is below the required minimum word count. The word percentage deductions tells me that you either did...

Writing Feedbackhoaithuong03 - May 8, 2021Holt - May 9, 2021
AAS Supporting Statement - Master of Urban Design and Master of Urban Planning

2 - Start the essay by introducing your academic background and relevant work experience. Do not make that information selective based...

ScholarshipJeffrisip - May 8, 2021Holt - May 8, 2021
Waste is not treated efficiently so the authority should pass laws to promote adequate actions

3 - Hi Karlie, I have some comments for your writing. I find the two most significant things you need to...

Writing Feedbackkarlie - May 8, 2021Johnlee94 - May 9, 2021
Should there be any restriction on how many years an educator may teach the same subject or grade

2 - Use the descriptive term "educators" rather than - "professors". The more generic reference allows you to generally discuss...

Writing FeedbackLetty134 - May 7, 2021Holt - May 8, 2021
Island map - summaries the information and make comparisons where relevant

2 - The task 1 essay does not require an analysis nor a conclusion. Therefore, the reference to safety standards should...

Writing Feedbackvukhoa - May 7, 2021Holt - May 8, 2021
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