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Everybody should travel since there are many clear advantages that traveling provides

3 - I think instead of "too", it's better to use "as well" for your essay. And some words and...

Writing FeedbackAdolph42 - Apr 17, 2021alicebui191 - Apr 26, 2021
Some people are regarded to be born with certain talents, and others are not

4 - i think you should give more evidence about children are born with natural abilities. don't give only examples. and...

Writing Feedbackyendao - Apr 17, 2021hglingg - Apr 21, 2021
The Importance of Destigmatizing Mental Health

2 - You have to remove the quote that is presented in the first paragraph. As a general rule, in-text citations...

Research Paperscarlieh - Apr 16, 2021Holt - Apr 19, 2021
A Look Into Climate Change Skepticism

2 - Provide a factual, evidence supported example of this climate change. A particular region of the world where the...

Writing Feedbackhebasaad32 - Apr 16, 2021Holt - Apr 16, 2021
Master of Social Work and Psychology - AAS Supporting Statement

2 - Include information prior to Covid, during Covid, and a projection regarding GBV once the pandemic is lifted or...

ScholarshipRis - Apr 16, 2021Holt - Apr 16, 2021
Internship about famous places in the largest city of Vietnam

2 - Due to your redacted information, the sentences you wrote no longer make any sense. The paragraphs you present do...

Graduatekaonashi - Apr 15, 2021Holt - Apr 16, 2021
Energy field - my proposed course and institution in Australia

2 - The reason for you proposed course must be similar to a motivation or career goal. The presentation does not...

Scholarshipmariaindira - Apr 15, 2021Holt - Apr 16, 2021
The reason why I choose the Public Health course

4 - @Holt thank you for your feedback. it is very helpful...

Scholarshipkurulu - Apr 15, 2021kurulu - May 6, 2021
Different cultures and lifestyles - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR USEFP SEMESTER EXCHANGE PROGRAM

2 - The overall essay is extremely vague in reference. You need to be clearer in your presentation in terms of...

Scholarshipfaseeh - Apr 15, 2021Holt - Apr 15, 2021
Relationship Between Anxiety And Motivation in College

3 - In your intro you mention your own struggles in a way that feels out of place. The wording is...

Writing FeedbackJordanMKnapp - Apr 14, 2021carlieh - Apr 16, 2021
A hobby or interest can change from time to time as a reflection of trends and fashions

2 - Your first reasoning paragraph is over explained. It is too wordy and forced you to write over 300 words,...

Writing FeedbackRachael12345 - Apr 14, 2021Holt - Apr 15, 2021
Supporting Statement for AAS: Why did you choose proposed course - Master of Education

3 - Great write up. Only comment I would give you is to remove the last paragraph. This will give you...

ScholarshipMachica - Apr 14, 2021brsn - Apr 15, 2021
The change in percentage of the population - IELTS Writing Task 1: Table

2 - Since you are trying to help the reader create a mental picture of this table, you should include the...

Writing Feedbacktung126 - Apr 14, 2021Holt - Apr 15, 2021
Master of Economic Policy (MECPO) - MECPO AAS

2 - You need to have a focus beyond Covid - 19 to help make your desire to compelete this program...

Scholarshipkra013 - Apr 14, 2021Holt - Apr 15, 2021
International law - AAS Supporting Statement for LL.M. Study in Australia

2 - You need to focus less on your background and interest development because you are applying for a masters degree...

ScholarshipAlif ID - Apr 13, 2021Holt - Apr 14, 2021
These days youngsters mimic among others their favourite sports personalities.

2 - You are being asked to respond to a direct question: Question: Do you believe professional athletes make good...

Writing FeedbackHarleneisme - Apr 13, 2021Holt - Apr 14, 2021
The graph illustrates carbon dioxide emitted per person on average, in four different countries

2 - The summary overview is a run-on presentation. The first sentence should have ended after the inclusive years were presented....

Writing Feedbackblackjack - Apr 13, 2021Holt - Apr 19, 2021
Essay on Contribution of Proposed Study to Career Plan - AAS application for MBA Program

2 - You only gave a description of your career plan. There is no reference to how the learning at the...

ScholarshipOscarPangestu - Apr 12, 2021Holt - Apr 20, 2021
Why I choose to study the bachelor of commerce majoring in economics? Australian Awards Scholarship

5 - Hi Nicky. My advice would be that you need to elaborate more about your proposed institution. You need to...

ScholarshipNickyross - Apr 12, 2021Alif ID - Apr 14, 2021
IELTS Formal Letter: college cafeteria lunch

2 - The first sentence in the letter is too abrupt. You need to have a formal and cordial opening paragraph...

Writing Feedbacknkoksokbaby - Apr 11, 2021Holt - Apr 13, 2021
IELTS: Formal Letter: School renovation and volunteering

2 - The letter is unclear regarding the reason for your visit to the local school. Were you there as part...

Writing Feedbacknkoksokbaby - Apr 11, 2021Holt - Apr 13, 2021
MOTIVATION LETTER ABOUT FLUID MECHANICS

2 - This is a personal statement. It contains information that shows the development of your interest in Fluid Mechanics. It...

Graduatelaylaa - Apr 11, 2021Holt - Apr 12, 2021
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR USEFP SEMESTER EXCHANGE PROGRAM

2 - As a draft, this is an essay that has potential and nothing more due to under development of the...

Scholarshiplevi285 - Apr 11, 2021Holt - Apr 12, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year

3 - For one thing,you did't answer the question directly because you changed the question from advantages and disadvantages to pros...

Writing Feedbackthaonguyen2910 - Apr 11, 2021blackjack - Apr 13, 2021
IELTS writing task 1: the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day.

3 - @Holt thank you so much...

Writing FeedbackChouchouKhuu - Apr 11, 2021ChouchouKhuu - Apr 17, 2021
Draft of research paper/persuasive essay on how to define success as a foster youth

2 - In the opening presentation, you were aiming to create a comparison between high school graduate from a family and,...

Research PapersSHI2170979 - Apr 11, 2021Holt - Apr 11, 2021
ESP practitioner - TESOL and the prospect for my future career (AAS)

2 - This is not a definitive career goal. There is uncertainty in your presentation thus, making the contribution of...

ScholarshipDA786 - Apr 10, 2021Holt - Apr 19, 2021
THE MIGRATION FROM RURAL AREA TO CITIES IS INCREASING

2 - You have made a serious error in the prompt restatement presentation. The instructions asks you to present a thesis...

Writing Feedbackkhanhdoan_1110 - Apr 10, 2021Holt - Apr 11, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 Discussion - The study of food science and its preparation

2 - This is a 5 paragraph discussion essay. The format for the information presentation should be based on a 2...

Writing Feedbackphatblack - Apr 9, 2021Holt - Apr 10, 2021
On Travelling to DaLat Trip

2 - I would have to say that the format for the presentation is improper. You are using a poetry based...

Writing FeedbackTientranvn2001 - Apr 9, 2021Holt - Apr 19, 2021
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