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Motivation Letter For Master's in Embedded Systems at the University of Saarland, Germany

5 - @fassehmemun10 Ok. When you said starting with the second paragraph would be a good start, do you mean...

Letterscapriciousduck - Apr 2, 2021capriciousduck - Apr 6, 2021
Treasury operations / Accounting - How will the proposed study contribute to your career*?

3 - The first problem this presentation has is formatting. Divide the short, medium, and long term plans into paragraphs. The...

Scholarshipgonzforever - Apr 2, 2021Holt - Apr 3, 2021
"Raising in a middle-class family was indeed demanding" Commonwealth Scholarship Personal Statement

2 - The essay is on point until you get to the last paragraph. Since it appears that you are going...

Scholarshipfassehmemun10 - Apr 1, 2021Holt - Apr 2, 2021
Is society's overall success more important than individual well being?

2 - I am not sure about the prompt that you are responding to so I cannot be very accurate in...

Writing Feedbackanubhavkaro - Apr 1, 2021Holt - Apr 2, 2021
IELTS writing task 2: Punishing children at an early age, agree or disagree?

2 - Your essay response format is incorrect. The prompt paraphrase and response to the direct questions have altered the response...

Writing Feedbackkiro14893 - Apr 1, 2021Holt - Apr 19, 2021
Supporting Statement AAS Scholarship for Master Degree in Public Health

4 - Hi Hanna, I think the sentences in your essay are too long and complex. You might want to break...

Scholarshiphanaadilaa - Apr 1, 2021OscarPangestu - Apr 6, 2021
AAS Scholarship for public policy

3 - Hi Dlsm, I think you need to be more careful also about active-passive form in your sentences. Your opening...

ScholarshipDIsm - Apr 1, 2021OscarPangestu - Apr 6, 2021
Personal Statement for MSc Data Science scholarship in Sweden

3 - Thank you for your advice. Do you mean that I need to combine Machine Learning, Business, and Big Data...

Scholarshipkenna007 - Apr 1, 2021kenna007 - Apr 1, 2021
SHORT ESSAY FOR LLM PROGRAMME AT THE UNIVERSITY OF EAST FINLAND

3 - @Holt Thank you for this. I will draw out a draft and put it up here for your...

EssaysSeyilaw007 - Mar 31, 2021Seyilaw007 - Apr 1, 2021
SOP MCs Computer Science - EPFL - academic background and career strategy

3 - Thank you! I hadn't imaged that I had to be so precise about my future career. I'll try to...

Graduategiupiter_kh - Mar 30, 2021giupiter_kh - Mar 31, 2021
The maps below show the development of a particular area from 1965 to the present day

3 - Your overview may causes reader confusion, as you describe specifically. The amount of information of the last two paragraphs...

Writing Feedbacklahieuu63 - Mar 30, 2021tung126 - Apr 15, 2021
For a happier tomorrow - The American University in Cairo essay

2 - You described what the university is best known for in relation to Psychology. You have not described how you...

UndergraduateOnoud - Mar 30, 2021Holt - Mar 31, 2021
Why is cycling not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

2 - You are being asked 2 direct questions at the end of the original prompt. You are required to give...

Writing Feedbackthiendep123 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Apr 8, 2021
Writing task 1 the alteration of country's export of several products for one year from 2015

2 - Your information in the first sentence is incorrect. First of all, there are two images represented, a table chart...

Writing FeedbackNMU123 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 30, 2021
Reasons to support the idea of having new teachers each year

3 - @Holt Many thanks for your advice!...

Writing FeedbackJasmine999 - Mar 29, 2021Jasmine999 - Apr 8, 2021
English teacher - TESOL and the prospect for my future career (AAS)

4 - thank you, Oscar. I just delete the phrase because it is little bit confusing....

ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 29, 2021DA786 - Apr 7, 2021
My Interest in Life Sciences - NUS Personal Statement

NEW - Hi, I need some help in cutting this essay down to 2000 characters and structuring it better. I also...

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Development Impact Plan - Theme: Science and Technology - Commonwealth

2 - Your response is widespread but common. It does not present a proper representation of each development issue as it...

Scholarshipzaineb0131 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 30, 2021
Possibility of space tourism and its impact on astronomic

2 - Right off the bat, I can tell you that this essay will not get a passing score because of...

Writing Feedbackphong4703 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
Study plan for master's of enterprise management for university in China

2 - This is not a study plan. This is a personal statement. There is nothing in this presentation that represents...

Graduateasya - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
Writing task 1: The chart show households in renting and owning accomocation in English and Wales

NEW - Houses owned vs rented 1918-2011 The chart illustrates how purchasing and renting houses of people in England and...

Writing FeedbackLe Minh Hien - Mar 28, 2021 -
The proposed study will have a vast impact on my professional career - Australian awards scholarship

3 - @Abl steven Hi, let's me to add some feedback. first of all, as there is a limited word in...

ScholarshipAbl steven - Mar 28, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
To afford a house instead of renting one is tremendously essential for people in some nations

3 - @Holt Firstly, I want to thank you for giving me those comments. Secondly, I want to make this clear....

Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021giangkc1811 - Mar 29, 2021
Not one without water - Personal Statement for Commonwealth Shared Scholarship

2 - There should be an expanded discussion in relation to the second paragraph. Consider how you contributed to solving the...

Scholarshipchhena96 - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
Autobiography to apply scholarship study abroad

5 - @giangkc1811 Ok. I will try to write again. Thank you so much 😊...

Scholarshiptuongvy1992003 - Mar 27, 2021tuongvy1992003 - Mar 28, 2021
AAS Scholarship Master of Commerce; Data Analyst for business, Digital Transformation Specialization

5 - I would advise you to add at least one other university - which provides a similar programme - for...

Scholarshipalfazrinb - Mar 27, 2021Alif ID - Apr 9, 2021
NZ International businesses - Is this a well thought out Introduction and Thesis Statement

2 - You cannot jump from first to last without representing the discussion topics in between. You have the right idea,...

Writing Feedbackkartstar113 - Mar 27, 2021Holt - Mar 28, 2021
Master in Local Government - How will the proposed course will contribute to your career?

4 - Hello @assad12. If you are not an Australian citizen, I would advise you to be cautious since there are...

Scholarshipassad12 - Mar 26, 2021Alif ID - Apr 14, 2021
Learning Korean - GKS - Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan

2 - The language study plan is normally responded to within 1-2 paragraphs that immediately outline the pre-Korea and post-Korea language...

Graduateiyo - Mar 26, 2021Holt - Mar 27, 2021
Self-employment became popular among the majority of people. Why is that?

6 - @NMU123 thank you, I'll try to rewrite this topic with the suggestions you've mentioned :D...

Writing FeedbackMsC - Mar 25, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
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