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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million tonnes from four different sectors

5 - Hi. As a reader, I'm not happy with the "enormous change" sentence. First, I think you could make...

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IELTS Writing task 2 - Discussion - The effects of international tourism to local countries

2 - Good work on the 2 restatement sentences. You covered the interpretation excellently. However, the need for the thesis statement...

Writing Feedbackbeloyal - Mar 19, 2021Holt - Mar 20, 2021
Gender Gaps in the Workplace (AAS Supporting Statement)

3 - @Holt Holt, thank you very much for the valuable input!...

Scholarshiprosanna89 - Mar 19, 2021rosanna89 - Mar 20, 2021
Going to school or homeschooling

5 - The way that you are using to divide your essay is inappropriate. There should not be just one sentence...

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Anesthesiologist Assistant Program Personal Statement: Experience with Healthcare Disparities?

2 - I can understand how your father's illness would have opened your mind to considering a career in healthcare. However,...

GraduateGenJen - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
Why becoming a GOI-IES Scholar matters to you, what you'll gain from this scholarship?

2 - This is actually an ordinary essay that does not have any stand out points or references that could catch...

Graduatemebax64893 - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
iELTS essay about the internet which has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years

4 - Hi friend, I have taught that we should avoid using generalization in the essay. "nobody can deny the fact...

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IELTS TASK 2 - WHAT ARE THE CHALLENGES WHEN MOVING TO NEW PLACES AND STRATEGIES

2 - Yes, you wrote it within 40 minutes. However, you are still over explaining and using useless sentences that do...

Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
Museums and art galleries are not needed today, because of technology

3 - Hi Long231312, I think there has been an unclear idea in your statement. Although you claim to be partially...

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Short essay about Heuristics (Questbridge College Prep Scholars Program) 1st prompt

2 - If you are really confident that you wish to be a Cognitive Science student, then you should not be...

Scholarshipradioq - Mar 17, 2021Holt - Mar 18, 2021
Workforce Competency Development through TESOL (Australia Award Scholarship)

2 - The information you provide as an introduction is specific to only your country. You make it appear as if...

ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 17, 2021Holt - Mar 18, 2021
Motivation Letter for Scholarship from a final-year chemical engineering student

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. Is there any feedback for the fifth paragraph and the rest of the...

Scholarshiphabibalaziz123 - Mar 17, 2021habibalaziz123 - Mar 17, 2021
fossil fuels are the main sources of energy,alternative energy should be encouraged for used

2 - The original prompt for this essay asks if you think this is a positive or negative development. Since your...

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Nowadays many ecosystems in the world are experiencing problems

2 - - Whose extinction? What is this discussion about? What is the purpose of this essay? The original prompt...

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Japan - An event has that influenced you - STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM

3 - @xin18 In my opinion, I personally think that I would not have the interest to read it to the...

Scholarshipxin18 - Mar 16, 2021wyh99 - Mar 16, 2021
Essay 1 - examples of the benefits that the GOI-IES would provide me

2 - The professional aspect does not have a convincing motivation for your application. The reason for your desire to receive...

Scholarshipnatfernandesss - Mar 16, 2021Holt - Mar 16, 2021
eCommerce - Goal of study and detailed study plan - you in advance wish you all the best

3 - I didn't see any content that describe your study plan. Maybe you have missed it so here's my soft...

ScholarshipPoKhuYu - Mar 15, 2021wyh99 - Mar 17, 2021
Letter of Intent for undergrad Turkey Burslari scholarship application - Computer science degree

3 - I'm sorry I should've been more clear with what I intend to do with this sample, I will...

LettersAhmed adobewan - Mar 15, 2021Ahmed adobewan - Mar 18, 2021
Personal Statement For KGSP Graduate Program 2021 - Master's Degree in Psychology

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your constructive comments. I will try to modify those information to makes my...

Scholarshipwyh99 - Mar 15, 2021wyh99 - Mar 16, 2021
Sports science - Personal statement for KGSP-G (2021)

2 - The motivational questions you are using in this essay are very shallow and basic. These do not represent a...

ScholarshipBhardwaj7714 - Mar 15, 2021Holt - Mar 16, 2021
The difference between men and women who did daily physical activity in Australia

NEW - fit people in aUSTRALIA The bar chart provides information about how difference between men and women who live...

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The potential damage for children when they are overusing computers. Write 250words

3 - Sorry, an important exam of mine is coming and I have to prepare quickly by writing two simultaneously. Thanks...

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English Learning during Covid-19 and ESP for Young Adults - TESOL Master Degree Essay (AAS)

2 - The paragraph about the pandemic should be worked into the motivation for your desire to complete the masters program....

ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 15, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021
Traffic jams and traffic accidents are big problems in Vietnam

2 - This is a 4 paragraph essay that utilizes only 2 reasoning paragraphs. One for the causes and one for...

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IELTS writing 2 - Topic: pros and cons of public transport

2 - You are not being asked to discuss why public transportation is so popular and some negatives of using it....

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Some people believe that owning a home is more important than renting one.

3 - Hi friend, firstly, I believe to get a higher band, your introduction should be paraphrased, not copied from the...

Writing Feedbackcecilisabella - Mar 14, 2021juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
Cross major - Personal Statement - GKS Graduate University Track

2 - - Do not use English slang words. This term is used as a derogatory reference to someone who...

Graduatehrdynt23 - Mar 14, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021
IELTS TASK 1; The rate of employed British people based on genders in various working fields in 2005

3 - Thank you for your advice. I know my essay is too long but I dont know how to cover...

Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 14, 2021juliachung - Mar 15, 2021
IELTS Writing 2 - Rich Countries aid to Poorer Countries

3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I just wondering if my conclusion is clear enough? In your opinion, will I...

Writing FeedbackFarfarisca - Mar 14, 2021Farfarisca - Mar 14, 2021
GKS Scholarship- Statement of purpose (Language Study Plan) - English and Korean

3 - Thank you so much for your help, I made the study plan as an essay form just as you...

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