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How have you implemented a change or reform? Controversial court judgments

3 - Actually, I have experience as a volunteer to teach students about the Laws of Electronic Information and Transactions because...

ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 15, 2021
Study impact on my career as a Policy Analyst and Planning Expert in government

3 - Oh, I see. I just realized that I didn't really discuss my career goal and just put it as...

ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 15, 2021
Museums and art galleries? Everyone can observing artifacts and artistic creations in the internet

2 - Having written only 259 words, I do not feel like you have fully reached the potential of this essay...

Writing FeedbackLinhh2407 - Mar 9, 2021Holt - Mar 9, 2021
Motivation letter for the PhD programme at the Aarhus University Faculty of Arts

3 - @Holt thank you so very much for your suggestions. You are right about everything. I have limited space of...

Lettersmimika987 - Mar 9, 2021mimika987 - Mar 9, 2021
Agricultural economics and rural development - Graduate Program - GKS - Personal Statment

2 - The essay is a relaxing read that covers all of the elements required in the discussion. However, I feel...

GraduateKasogi - Mar 9, 2021Holt - Mar 9, 2021
The Effects of Human Activity on Climate Change (Seeking criticism and main points of weakness)

2 - Remove the in-text citation in the first paragraph. The first paragraph is your thesis paragraph or introduction to the...

Research Papersleighannfraley - Mar 9, 2021Holt - Mar 9, 2021
UGRAD - I can resolve Georgia's internal and external problems

3 - @Holt Thanks for the answer,I already started fixing the said points by your advice,it really was dry and missing...

UndergraduateSeenBetterDes - Mar 8, 2021SeenBetterDes - Mar 9, 2021
PERSONAL STATEMENT - master program / knowledge and respect of Korean culture

2 - I cannot help you in this case because you did not post an essay for my review. Only you...

Essaysamal123 - Mar 8, 2021Holt - Mar 9, 2021
Do you like living with wealthy people or those who come from different social class?

3 - The writing might be too short for some people, like me. You should demonstrate more aspects of the problems...

Writing Feedbacklogin - Mar 8, 2021Blackrain - Mar 15, 2021
I am a young leader, who is hunting for knowledge - UGRAD exchange program application

2 - The essay does not respond to the most important requirement of the essay which is a discussion of the...

ScholarshipIslambek - Mar 8, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
COVID-19 x-ray medical images. How did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - Kick off the essay with the Indonesia-Australia Cooperation Covid 19 Response plan first. That way you immediately catch the...

Scholarshipoedale - Mar 8, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
"Write Down Your Key Achievements"- GIST undergraduate admission. If possible, kindly help me out.

2 - A reviewer will read this presentation and realize that there is nothing special about you. What you consider achievements...

UndergraduateShakerin Aakash - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
Learning another way to think about things. Language study plan essay

3 - @Holt okay thank you for your advice, I will make it shorter...

Scholarshipdorra - Mar 7, 2021dorra - Mar 8, 2021
Aerospace engineer - concept, theory, or topic you have explored

2 - You failed to respond to the prompt in totality. You need to discuss your intellectual curiosity first, then why...

ScholarshipLavanyaD17 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
It is argued that people should take meat out of food list and become vegetarians. Do you agree?

2 - If you notice, in the original discussion, there is no argument being presented. Only an idea is being represented...

Writing FeedbackThuTinh - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
The idea of hosting an international sports events has brought several controversies. Pros and cons.

2 - You have over written this essay. You do not need more than 300 words in the presentation since you...

Writing Feedbackphung199200 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using intelligent robots

2 - Your first paragraph does not relate to the original topic presentation. It is not a prompt restatement but rather,...

Writing Feedbacklinh123 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
Igcse English as a second language (0511) article writing

2 - Since you already knew beforehand that you are allowed to write only up to 210 words, why did you...

Writing FeedbackBilal786 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
The number of students who are interested in education

NEW - survey responses - charts analysis The task consists of a bar chart and a pie chart. The bar...

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"Many people think there is an increase of antisocial behavior and a lack of respect to others."

2 - In the prompt restatement, you are offering a factual statement rather than a representation of your understanding of the...

Writing Feedbackanhtran98 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
Motivation Letter for Master in Research and Innovation in Higher Education (MaRIHE)

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. You are right, I use too many words....

Lettersesoong - Mar 7, 2021esoong - Mar 8, 2021
Spending money just when earn it or saving them for some future plans?

3 - @yasinb1377 hi there, "... but also learns us how ..." i think in this sentence it better for you...

Writing Feedbackyasinb1377 - Mar 7, 2021baochau123 - Mar 14, 2021
Task 2 pros and cons: ocean creatures relocated in amusement parks

2 - Refrain from making factual statements in your presentations in relation to the restatements. You should not do that because...

Writing FeedbackGlenda2912 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
Learning languages - my study plan. STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR KOREAN SCHOLARSHIP

3 - @lynleo Hi, yeah I think the comittee wanted to see how strong-willed we are in applying for the scholarship,...

Scholarshiplynleo - Mar 6, 2021karinrizky - Mar 7, 2021
It is unreasonable to say that a wild animal has no place in the 21st century. IELTS 2

4 - Hi! I would like to have some feedbacks on your writing. 1/ You should never write about others'...

Writing Feedbackkakangocthien109 - Mar 6, 2021phatblack - Mar 11, 2021
Doctoral Degree for AAS 2021

5 - Well thank you so much for the feedback @umbu richi. Is this Umbu that also followed Mr. Mau's class?...

Scholarshipkartini79 - Mar 6, 2021kartini79 - Mar 15, 2021
IELTS2 Some people believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life

2 - Scoring is a premium service. Contact us privately. Student scoring = Ban ! Your essay misses the minimum...

Writing Feedbackyuanyuan00 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
GKS-G Personal Statement - Creative Economy Diplomacy

3 - Oooh, yes I see your point. Thank you very much for your feedback, I will rewrite it again and...

Scholarshipayo_yuk - Mar 6, 2021ayo_yuk - Mar 7, 2021
TEM AND SEM ANALYSIS IN TITANIUM DIOIXDE NANOTUBE AND GRAPHENE OXIDE COMPOSITE

2 - It is more difficult to analyze this presentation for correct references and illustrative points because you did not include...

Writing Feedbackmiigky990903 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. Indicate the causes and effects.

2 - - The essence of the sentence is correct, but the reference point is wrong. It is not "couples"...

Writing Feedbacknguyenvietanh26 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
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