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PERSONAL STATEMENT TO UNIVERSITY - BUSINESS AND MANAGEMENT

3 - @Holt The length of the required PS is from 1-3 pages and ahould include ( seft introduction, what motives...

Undergraduatenganhacindy - Feb 28, 2021nganhacindy - Mar 1, 2021
2022 Australia Awards Scholarship Essay - Applied economics

4 - Try to use simple words to save the limited characters and you can use them for another idea. Btw,...

Scholarshipjivrymuh - Feb 28, 2021DA786 - Mar 17, 2021
Spreading myself too thin on Cover letter/Personal Statement for Aerospace Engg, ISAE-SUPAERO?

3 - @Holt The paragraph 4 is the "how the program will help your future career" paragraph. Do you suggest another...

GraduateVarunVP - Feb 28, 2021VarunVP - Mar 1, 2021
Conversations in person are gradually being replaced by internet communications through social apps

2 - You need to refer to the keyword from the original essay which is "outweigh". The missing synonym for this...

Writing FeedbackNorabui - Feb 28, 2021Holt - Mar 1, 2021
Informing about the latest criminal news and its impact on young members of society - IELTS 2

3 - thank you very much, I just write those sms-styled because I want to shorten it, quite lazy obliviously, therefore...

Writing Feedbackcpt_b33m0 - Feb 28, 2021cpt_b33m0 - Mar 3, 2021
Nowadays, shopping online has been spread widely over the world

2 - For band scoring, you will need to refer to our premium services where I will privately review and score...

Writing Feedbackbngauscld - Feb 28, 2021Holt - Mar 1, 2021
[Writing Task 2]Topic summarize: Some countries have many aged people. What are the effects of this?

3 - @namphong020: In my opinion, your writing is good with a lot of vocabulary. However, there are some issues that...

Writing Feedbacknamphong020 - Feb 28, 2021blueskysg - Mar 1, 2021
'...feel the sweetness of life after struggling'; GKS Undergraduate application - personal statement

2 - The motivation factor being referred to in this case is not your motivation to study in Korea. Rather, it...

Undergraduatecarlaputri - Feb 28, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
Essay about the advantages and disadvantages of Internet for Ielts Task 2

3 - Thank you @holt. I got your idea...

Writing Feedbackblueskysg - Feb 28, 2021blueskysg - Mar 1, 2021
2021 GKS SCHOLARSHIP - PERSONAL STATEMENT - INTERNATIONAL TRADE

2 - Hi Sharon. Listen, I can really see the sincerity in your application. You are doing your best to prove...

ScholarshipSharonSahian - Feb 28, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
Personal Statement about Public Administration - Graduate program GKS

2 - The first paragraph, though imaginative in presentation, does not offer itself as a part of any appropriate response. It...

ScholarshipFiorella02 - Feb 27, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
Average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services, 2001-2010

2 - Avoid run-on sentences in your summary overview. You will lose C&C points for presenting all the information in one...

Writing FeedbackPhuongtam - Feb 27, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 1 - the production of instant noodles

2 - Basic format for this presentation is 3 paragraphs. That means there needs to be: - A summary overview +...

Writing Feedbackvallo - Feb 27, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
Sustainable & Innovative Natural Resource Management (SINREM) Motivation Letter

2 - - What is no longer an option and why? What is the relation of Covid to the SINREM...

LettersFmehyar - Feb 27, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
How can we protect biological diversity?

2 - There is a definite sense of importance to this writing. Your opening statement was imaginative, but seemingly suddenly lost...

Writing FeedbackSeanCX101 - Feb 27, 2021Holt - Feb 28, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010

2 - The presentation shows percentage of change, not percentage of growth. Your reference is incorrect. It should have been restated...

Writing Feedbackkarlanguyen - Feb 26, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
2021 GKS Graduate; Personal Statement; I'm the youngest member of a four...

2 - Your presentation is a mix of the new and old prompt requirements. You may want to review the new...

Graduateslyny - Feb 26, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
'intellectual growth should commence at birth and cease only at death'. Letter for MAIA scholarship

3 - "Not a bad motivational letter. You have shown a personal, academic, and professional interest in the course that you...

Scholarshipreraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021reraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021
Leadership, community service. The Global UGRAD. Why would I be a great participant in this program?

2 - Remove the reference point about how you are familiarizing yourself with American culture. That is not part of the...

Scholarshipbigdreamy - Feb 26, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
Research Essay: Politics: The Destructor of Relationships

2 - The opening paragraph takes too long to get to the thesis statement. You are over introducing the topic. Try...

Research Papersjdemara - Feb 26, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
Maths and business success - IELTS Writing Task 2 Opinion Essay

2 - There is a missing sentence in your thesis statement in the first paragraph. You forgot to indicate the measured...

Writing Feedbackphatblack - Feb 26, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
The high salary should be more concerned than the degree of satisfaction in job. What's your opinion

2 - When you partially advocate for the given statement, you are writing an extent essay. You are not writing an...

Writing Feedbackieltsstudent1711 - Feb 26, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
GLOBAL KOREA SCHOLARSHIP_ PERSONAL STATEMENT_COMPUTER SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING

4 - @Holt @grant_Oliver I am very grateful for your help. I will rewrite based on your comments. Thank you so...

Scholarshipsunny1909 - Feb 25, 2021sunny1909 - Feb 27, 2021
Writing task 1 table with a trend - visitor statistics in Australia

2 - All of your paragraphs should have a minimum of 3 sentences. This includes the summary overview. The lack of...

Writing Feedbackdinhminhhai - Feb 25, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free education irrespective of personal wealth

2 - This is not an extent essay. Therefore, your discussion approach, which is, "to an extent' response is incorrect. There...

Writing Feedbacklingling40hrs - Feb 25, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
Children must be a good members of society. What the parents and school can teach it?

2 - This is actually an IELTS Task 2 practice prompt. Were you writing in preparation for that test? Or is...

Writing FeedbackIndriani - Feb 25, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2- The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction

3 - @MJaylee: your essay is good with rich vocabulary. In my opinion, you should write stronger and clearer sentences instead...

Writing FeedbackMJaylee - Feb 25, 2021blueskysg - Mar 1, 2021
GKS Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan

2 - - Trying to memorize what in a month? Hangul characters and alphabet? English spelling of Hangul words? There...

ScholarshipAlsgray - Feb 25, 2021Holt - Feb 26, 2021
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular

3 - @Holt thank you very much for your detailed and comprehensive feedback! You showed a really interesting point of view,...

Writing FeedbackGia_geeya - Feb 25, 2021Gia_geeya - Feb 25, 2021
The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.

3 - Thank you so much. I will try to improve in the next essay....

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