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PERSONAL STATEMENT/ Masters in Human Nutrition in South Korea / [SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION]

2 - Since the personal statement requires you to present a strong connection to South Korea, it would be in the...

Scholarshipmanabae - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
It is true that salary is a crucial factor for numerous people opting for a job

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In some nations, home ownership, not renting, is gaining more and more popularity

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Statement for Purpose for Masters in Game Design/Development

2 - What you have here is a great personal statement that shows the development of your interest in Game Design...

Graduatewhaj47 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods

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Subject: Letter of Intent to apply for a National Visa Type D to study in Germany

2 - Ali, you are not applying for admission to a university through the visa officer. You are trying to justify...

Writing FeedbackAli_0 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Egypt student - what does make you candidate for this program?

3 - it is for summer program in Tulane university and how can I edit on it please could you help...

ScholarshipA7zanany - Jan 5, 2021A7zanany - Jan 6, 2021
The graph shows the percentage of four different types of fuels in use between the years 1800 / 2000

2 - You have a neatly presented summary, but, it is more of a run-on than a complex sentence presentation. The...

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The Blue Crew & Counterpoint - Additional Essay to Wellesley College

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Undergraduatetoodii2102 - Jan 5, 2021toodii2102 - Jan 6, 2021
Parent or teacher who should be more responsible for the child in his attitude?

2 - Since the TA section profiles your English comprehension skills based upon how well you can explain the original prompt...

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Children as a good member of a society. What are the best ways to learn about it?

2 - If I were to base the score of this essay on it restatement of the original prompt, then this...

Writing FeedbackRGAP - Jan 5, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship for MSc inn Electrical Engineering

2 - You have covered almost all of the required information in the given discussion list. However, the first part, is...

ScholarshipMurtaza Ali - Jan 5, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Studying International Relations in Hungary - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter

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ScholarshipIgorFR - Jan 4, 2021IgorFR - Jan 5, 2021
Writing Task 2 - Mountain or Beach for Holiday time

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TASK 2 : A parent's insistence on children. Reasons? Negative or positive effects?

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To the beach or to the mountains on vacation time? Writing Task 2

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Writing FeedbackIsna Fauziah - Jan 4, 2021Holt - Jan 4, 2021
Struggling to write UBC Personal Profile Answer: how the pandemic has changed your involvement

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Writing Task about going to mountain and beach

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It is undeniable that Math is a fundamental subject and considerably relates to some occupations

2 - - Anybody can deny this claim. There are successful business people who are not exactly the best and...

Writing Feedbackmeovang999 - Jan 4, 2021Holt - Jan 4, 2021
The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information

2 - The format for the essay presentation is incorrect. You always need to present a minimum of 3 paragraphs for...

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Personal Statement, Erasmus Scholarship: GLOCAL Master program, study track Sustainable Business

4 - This essay has good structure and flow. My suggestion is you have proof-read and grammar check for your essay...

ScholarshipACx - Jan 4, 2021felicity96 - Jan 6, 2021
Giving "Hack" A New Name | Common Application Personal Essay [Prompt #4]

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UndergraduateBearByte - Jan 3, 2021BearByte - Jan 4, 2021
Stipendium Hungaricum Motivational Letter For Architecture

7 - @mairanoor I think this is a very expanded explanation of one simple question. you should answer this question more...

Scholarshipmairanoor - Jan 3, 2021Murtaza Ali - Jan 5, 2021
Are sports stars paid too much money? - My first essay - FCE Exam

2 - You must avoid using informal English, specifically contractions in your presentation. Those will still count at two words in...

Writing FeedbackWrednaPaulina - Jan 3, 2021Holt - Jan 4, 2021
An impact (college application); Cite any cases in which you thought and/or made attempts in ways...

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Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter for Geography Major

4 - @haneejah You also have to answer the following points: How will you apply your new skills and qualifications when...

Scholarshiphaneejah - Jan 3, 2021Muneeb10 - Jan 4, 2021
CPE PART 1 QUESTION - ESSAY ABOUT INDIVIDUALITY VERSUS MUTUAL UNDERSTANDING

2 - You are too focused on showcasing the complex English words that you know. While that is something that is...

Writing Feedbackkhoadowrite - Jan 3, 2021Holt - Jan 4, 2021
My dream goal is to be a lecturer. Personal Statement for GKS-G 2021

5 - Hello! *First of all, from your essay it is almost impossible to understand which major you want to...

Scholarshiptaniiia - Jan 3, 2021mikka - Jan 8, 2021
Review of Motivation Letter for MS Mechanical Engineering in Hungary

3 - @Holt Thanks a lot, Respected, Sir for correcting me. It will be very beneficial to me....

LettersMuneeb10 - Jan 3, 2021Muneeb10 - Jan 4, 2021
Write your Personal Profile for UBC application - how others describe me & something I'm proud of

2 - Delete the first paragraph. That is not a requirement in this statement. Use at least 2 different points of...

UndergraduateAx9730 - Jan 3, 2021Holt - Jan 3, 2021
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