Unanswered [4]
     DrAfT!

All Threads [72319] - page 2253 of 2411

New Personal Statement [transfer], University of Washington Seattle

4 - Thank you so much! I will go back and look through it....

Undergraduateanella - Apr 21, 2009anella - Apr 22, 2009
narrative essay- giving birth, its not graphic

2 - Hyphens: It was two-thirty in the afternoon on a gorgeous sunny, fall, Tuesday. My favorite day of the week....

Writing Feedbackpurfec8gel - Apr 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2009
Transfering from UTD to UT Austin - Statement of Purpose

11 - thanks so much everyone!!!...

Undergraduateanni - Apr 21, 2009anni - Apr 30, 2009
Thesis Statement about the most influential people in your life

3 - Great idea... and it helps to come up with a single overarching theme if possible -- so that the...

Essayscraig - Apr 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Outline-- Responses in relation to the attacks of September 11

5 - Man that must be a big essay, for the general idea, try to include things about how the planes...

Writing Feedbackttc1234 - Apr 21, 2009saichicka39 - Oct 5, 2012
Statement of purpose / design (student exchange program)

3 - Also, I experienced the foreign cultures and met diverse people during the travel. Oh, I see that Anna corrected...

Undergraduatejjinvvang - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Comparison Essay: Killers in The Green Mile vs. the Killers In Cold Blood

4 - I've read the Green Mile, but not Cold Blood. I don't know any killers, either, so I can't really...

Book ReportsSammy - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
The Good Earth, Pearl S. Buck

4 - The concept of women and women's rights has not only been a struggle for the American culture but also...

EssaysMelanie Rose - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
The Concept of Courage as Illustrated by Different Characters

3 - According to Atticus Finch, an honest lawyer in Harper Lee's novel "To Kill a Mockingbird", teaching the children that...

Writing Feedbacktak7171 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Essay for FSU (From Belgium to New Jersey)

6 - You're on the right track. I would point out, however, that you probably don't mean this: "The Vires and...

UndergraduateCalinecat7 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 24, 2009
'in love with the stage' - Common App--Elaborate an Activity

13 - Really really thank you very much!!! That really helps me out. I don't know how to thank for your...

UndergraduateStefanie Chan - Apr 20, 2009Stefanie Chan - Apr 30, 2009
The Death Penalty is more costly than imprisoning someone for life

4 - Also, if you are going to make the case that the death penalty does not deter crime, you are...

Writing Feedbacktapsghost - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
Transferring from Wright College to Rockford College

3 - Yes, you want to revise this essay to make sure you give a better impression of yourself. At the...

Undergraduatekmichelle831 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
" Rising divorce rate"- Cause and effect essay

9 - Hi Kevin and Sean, I appreciate ur valuable help! ^^ I learn a lot from you. Thanks again for...

Writing FeedbackThuong - Apr 20, 2009Thuong - Apr 24, 2009
We can know something about a person by the way he dresses.

18 - Thanks all for your great advice....

Writing Feedbackbinu - Apr 20, 2009binu - Apr 26, 2009
Description Essay: The Rider

7 - You deserve it! Congratulations....

Writing Feedbackalexxis - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 30, 2009
Poetry project, 8 different types of poetry

9 - I really like your poems. I am currently doing a poetry unit in school. Youve done an amazing job...

Poetryjnel - Apr 20, 2009Nosh - May 12, 2009
TOEFL essay - PR: from-books knowledge and experiential knowledge

6 - This is quite correct, as far as it goes. "In conclusion" is a lazy way of introducing the...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
In general, how to write a term paper?

15 - I good trick that I do is just write everything that comes to mind and outline it in chronological...

EssaysJohnpeter - Apr 20, 2009naval49 - Jul 13, 2015
Descriptive Essay: Joffrey's is My First Distance

5 - You might want to elaborate a bit on the descriptions, given that this is supposed to be a descriptive...

Writing Feedback3looy - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 2, 2009
Problem Solving Essay:Contradicting Characteristics-Correct my essay

5 - Well, it should be something that resonates with ou. Think of what you feel strongly about; what problems are...

Writing Feedbackmilkee_0923 - Apr 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
Macbeth is about the struggle for power Essay

3 - thank you for the advice! i have already submitted the essay. now i just have to hope that i...

Book Reportsvampyrvini - Apr 19, 2009vampyrvini - May 1, 2009
GED Practice essay: Do you think stronger laws should be enacted to...

4 - Thanks both of you for your input. I'm leaving for my exam as I type this. Wish me...

Writing Feedbackspczmb - Apr 19, 2009spczmb - Apr 20, 2009
Essay about war and religoion during 1990s in Europe-Balkan

4 - ...especially when war is going on toward you all around me . In Serbia, people who were living...

Writing Feedbackgacesaa - Apr 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
Arts and Festival DVD recording. Common app - elaborate one activity (150 words).

2 - "After the school Arts Festival closing, I suggested engaging in a research study" Who did you suggest this to?...

Undergraduatejoanna2007114 - Apr 19, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 19, 2009
Essay for MSc in Finance

4 - During my Master, I had to provide a Thesis in order to be graduated, and I chose to examine...

Graduateokinawa - Apr 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2009
What is the right stuff essay

5 - Instead of "arrogance," you could just say that they needed a robust ego, and let the reader decide for...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Apr 18, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
10-15 page research paper on History of Capital Punishment

7 - Okay, then. There are plenty of online sites that will give you the correct formatting for parenthetical references and...

Research PapersMelanie Rose - Apr 18, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 20, 2009
Does Success Come from Luck or Work?

7 - You still need a clear thesis. You can side with hard work, or with luck, or you can argue...

Writing Feedbackadalumi - Apr 16, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 20, 2009
The Effects of Violent Movies

9 - i have to do a similar essay...i think you should write out an outline intro-thesis main body- write...

Writing Feedbacksilentheart - Apr 17, 2009ttc1234 - Apr 28, 2009
ⓘ Need academic writing help? 100% custom and human!
✖
Fill out one of these forms for professional help:

Best Writing Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳