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'I live in Bangladesh' - Macalester Supplement...I think its a bit off-topic.

6 - "I watched stood by my grandmother's grave silently." watching a grave sounds awkward.. "You can achieve anything, if...

UndergraduateZuhayr90 - Jan 3, 2009priscileung - Jan 15, 2009
Fear is a path to the darkside

5 - Hidden in the shadows of one's mind exists a path to self-destruction. Great Yoda reference!! I wish I had...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
CMC essay; "First in war, first in peace, and first in our countrymen's hearts"

16 - Thanks Constance! Its just I reeeallllly want to go to CMC...but there is no use worrying now. At least...

Undergraduatelattent - Jan 2, 2009lattent - Jan 5, 2009
FSU essay ("traditions and customs that have become a part of my life")

11 - True, if you start playing around with formatting, you can make an essay seem slightly longer or shorter than...

Undergraduatevk123 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
UVA - Favorite word, first draft, debate

4 - When you refer to a word, put it in quotes: My favorite word is "debate." So, can you...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Commonapp Essay (Brother who has cerebral palsy and influence).

6 - However , I have never played on a sports team in my entire life. Okay, so for the...

Undergraduatedarkat22 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Interesting idea? - Argonne National Laboratory and Fermila

6 - I would b more conservative, usually, but I do agree that a wacky question deserves a wacky response. you...

Undergraduateparadox - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Check your submissions dates common app posting incorrect dates!?

19 - november 30th but do it earlier because system might crash...

Undergraduatesk8rgal666 - Jan 2, 2009OhsoSoulful - Nov 29, 2010
UVa- grammar errors- "Being a moderate Muslim is no easy"

13 - Consistently maintaining all of these requirements is difficult at times; however, it has become a perpetual habituated routine of...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
ideas or items in a particle accelerator - direction with Common App Essay

7 - This is great! Now, after you introduce the concept of society, let the reader know that the next concept...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Submitting in 2 hours: Cornell Architecture Supplement

4 - Born in a family of architects, I have been absorbing the spirit of architecture since a very young age....

Undergraduatevivalacanada - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Is it common app worthy ("My job is in the Pacoima Branch Library")

5 - Some have been deafened by Pacoima with sirens shrieking, bullets flying, helicopters hovering, robberies and for lack of better...

UndergraduateFlower Child - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Univ of Illinois Essay! ("girl from India")

3 - I think it is even better if you write "inferior to" You can omit this sentence if you...

UndergraduateSravya312 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
Very confused on my Thesis statement. AP Euro History class

7 - Trojan's revision is strong, but highlights the fact that you really only have two points, instead of three as...

Essaysnikbij - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
Why Duke arts and sciences short essay? (any feedback will be welcome)

5 - collegeseeker, thanks for helping!! you can use bold to highlight the changes toy make, if you help other people...

Undergraduateshah_parth92 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 4, 2009
CORNELL CALS ESSAY ("we must take care of the world we live in")

4 - Thanks falconchick for the good work you did! Check out the EF Contributor page!! Unicorn, that is great...

Undergraduatecbm2891 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Rice Supplement (something unique about my view upon communism?)

4 - Yes!! If you post it, I'll give my ideas about whether or not it seems right... Communism is...

Essaysxelloslast - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
UIUC essay 2 (Illuminati- the Physics Club)

6 - Illuminati- the Physics Club of our school is one of the facadesaspects of school life that I will remember...

Undergraduatesumantneo - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
BU- What expiriences have led you to choose your field of major

6 - This is a great essay. I enjoyed the opening paragraph and great organization. There are very minimal mistakes. Good...

UndergraduateAndrewquartey - Jan 2, 2009ichid99 - Jan 3, 2009
'Dancing is close to my heart' - MIT essay... how the world shaped your dreams essay

5 - This second one is better, I think, but I really like the second half of the dance essay. ...

Undergraduatepmadhini - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
CMC essay ("Leadership is a constant theme and emphasis")

14 - one slight problem. this essay does not sound interesting. you need more showing than telling. try to describe the...

UndergraduateZuhayr90 - Jan 2, 2009zowzow - Jan 14, 2009
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR CHINAMANO ELWIN TINASHE-

4 - Just more of the same sort of thing I mentioned before. So, "My plan is to engage in full...

Graduateetchinamano - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
Cornell CALS essay - "the significance of ingredients and nutrition"

3 - One of the activities of the trip was to differentiate between freshly squeezed fruit juice an d artificially flavored...

UndergraduateA346 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
writing technique advices for the essay " regular and election days"

8 - It is better than it was, certainly. You now sound more thoughtful, and have gone into more depth on...

Writing Feedbackcraver - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
for IELST...." sports or physical course is importmant "essay

5 - Is that true? Wow, schools should not drop phys. ed... it is so important! I is even important for...

Writing Feedbackpamfan0810 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Uva favorite word - Uncertainty

3 - "Uncertainty" is a word that acts as a gargantuan, dark cloud whose only purpose is to obscure the sun,...

Undergraduatemad3na90 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
response paragraph for the essay "why we crave horror movies"

4 - Hi Thanks a lot for your corrections. This is my essay i really want to know whether i have...

Writing Feedbackcraver - Jan 2, 2009craver - Jan 6, 2009
Columbia Essay ("I am an artist.")

2 - This essay is written very well and I really can't find anything wrong with it. However, I would like...

Undergraduatejane6272 - Jan 2, 2009r991183878 - Jan 2, 2009
Common App Essay- ("I was an extremely snoopy child")

5 - I'm so sorry I could not comment in time!! It does look great, though, as the others said. I...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
"Yes, master." - Stanford Short Essay (intellectual vitality)

4 - I like watching people; don't run away from me now. I simply find people's expressions fascinating; (use a :)...

Undergraduateheartmilktea - Jan 2, 2009hopefull - Jan 2, 2009
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