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'I have a dream' - Why this major and university (scholarship essay)

3 - @Holt I really appreciate your precious feedbacks. Again, I sincerely thank you for your time. I wish you have...

ScholarshipMochi_Krystal - Jan 24, 2024Mochi_Krystal - Jan 29, 2024
Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.

4 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate on your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing FeedbackLouis Tran - Jan 24, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
Personal Statement about leadership and goals for scholarship

2 - There are 2 things that you need to revise in this essay. The first is the quotation and the...

Scholarshiptriplej - Jan 24, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

2 - Local what? The idea presentation is incomplete. The subject is missing. Please remember that if you think in...

Writing Feedbacktuunhi01 - Jan 24, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Foreign visitors should pay more than local people

2 - Do not exaggerate when stating the original topic. There is no heated controversy, there is only a public...

Writing FeedbackChanminanh - Jan 24, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
GKS-G 2024| Future Study Plan

2 - Your discussion regarding language improvement should not be included in this essay. That belongs to the language study plan...

Graduatesankook - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 : With the rise of the ebooks comes the decline in paper books

2 - Well, you only met the requirements of the writing task halfway. The score for this presentation can only be...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in IT project Management in Sweden

2 - Avoid turning the motivational letter into an academic and professional biography. The motivational factors in your presentation are quite...

LettersTasosCh - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush.

2 - This is your personal opinion. It is not an accurate representation of the original prompt. Being your writer's...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Computer Science at University

2 - Dandy, remove the first and second paragraphs. Those are not relevant to the motivation. Replace those instead with paragraphs...

LettersDaFabian - Jan 22, 2024Holt - Jan 23, 2024
Should parents control their child's free time?

4 - "I understand the points you're trying to convey to the reader. However, your opening sentence could be improved to...

Writing FeedbackSinnubuyaaa - Jan 21, 2024alizarincrimsons - Jan 27, 2024
Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Reasons, positive or negative development?

3 - @hbcrosese I think you should include some positive arguments about the use of smartphones by children, such as how...

Writing Feedbackhbcrose - Jan 21, 2024sankook - Jan 23, 2024
Incident with friends - scholarship essay in NTU

2 - What you wrote here has nothing to do with values and beliefs. These are character traits that you feel...

ScholarshipLeon Oswald - Jan 20, 2024Holt - Jan 22, 2024
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

5 - Not only indicating the start and the end year, you should also mention the measurement in the introduction, which...

Writing Feedbackmylinh3001 - Jan 20, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
Some people think that students who perform better in school should be rewarded.

2 - You cannot say that the statement made in the presentation is true. That is because the first paragraph is...

Writing FeedbackDuckie2 - Jan 20, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Global business - personal statement for GKS scholarship

2 - The essay is a personal statement based on your interest in Korea, what you want to learn, and your...

Scholarshiplunaemily - Jan 20, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Motivation letter for HAN university in the Netherlands

3 - @Holt appreciate your help! :) I'll check all the parts that need to fix later on....

Letterstlinh nguyen - Jan 20, 2024tlinh nguyen - Jan 21, 2024
"Fashion is who I am" - Fashion Institute of Technology Admissions Essay

3 - Hi, you did good but for me, it seems like you are not answering the questions properly the...

Undergraduatenadiacheray - Jan 19, 2024sankook - Jan 23, 2024
COVER LETTER to apply Event Marketing position

2 - Is this supposed to be a practice essay? Or is it an actual application email? My review will vary...

LettersThu Hieu - Jan 19, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
The table below gives information about some of the world's most studied languages.

4 - You are generalizing for the most part. Remember the format: Intro-overview-details. You can only generalise in overview but not...

Writing Feedbacktharo - Jan 19, 2024Mochi_Krystal - Jan 24, 2024
Motivational letter for Erasmus mundus Euroculture program

2 - Try to reduce some aspects of the essay so that you can discuss your professional aspirations in the essay....

LettersY_Saleh - Jan 19, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Common App Personal Essay - Life's Journey and Lessons

2 - There seems to be a disconnection between the death of your grandmother and the silence that you suddenly decided...

Undergraduatesamaahshameer - Jan 18, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A motivation letter for a program at the University of Rome.

2 - There are actually too many screened information in this presentation for me to give you a useful observation but...

LettersLeila321 - Jan 18, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
In some cultures, children are often told that thay can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

2 - There is no need to include this in the summary paragraph. You are not being asked to give...

Writing FeedbackTOM PARKER - Jan 18, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities

2 - The opening statement will recieve a failing score. You have not properly restated the public opinions and there is...

Writing FeedbackTNhi2003 - Jan 17, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed

2 - You will lose TA points for simply repeating the writing questions instead of creating a writer's opinion based...

Writing FeedbackANDYBAO123 - Jan 17, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS Task 2- children spend hours every day on their smartphones

2 - While the English language used in the presentation is not perfect, it is acceptable enough to receive good GRA...

Writing Feedbackg1131692 - Jan 17, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
What problems do children face in the age of social media?

5 - Thank you so much. Could you correct my post ?...

Writing Feedbackpth2024 - Jan 17, 2024pth2024 - Jan 25, 2024
Personal Statement for a MSc in Computer Science from the University College London

2 - The essay seems to be open ended. The last paragraph seems to be hanging. There is no clear concluding...

GraduateCS_Masters2024 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Application Supplemental Essay (Why Barnard)- First-Year Transfer to Barnard College

2 - I am not very convinced about the effects of traditional Chinese dance with regards to finding your most powerful...

Undergraduatenafizux - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
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