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UBC - Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. (MAX 1500 Characters)

2 - This is an excellent reference point for the prompt you have chosen. It is light, heartwarming, but indicative of...

Undergraduateapplepie132 - Nov 17, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Risk and resource management - Scholarship Essay - Study Plan

2 - Kindly indicate which journal it was published in, the publication date, volume, and series number for the reference...

Scholarshipkokor0 - Nov 17, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Essay about global warming

2 - The writing is so bad that it is obvious you have not taken any English classes whatsoever. You are...

Writing Feedbackfartlol1 - Nov 16, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia in 2018.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback....

Writing Feedbackngngheo0cot1en - Nov 16, 2023ngngheo0cot1en - Nov 27, 2023
The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

2 - You have tried to go a good job on presenting the information in an analytical way. However, the way...

Writing FeedbackTran Hans - Nov 15, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
using network in classroom or traditonal class

2 - I was confused by the grammar used in this presentation. I can somehow fill in the blanks and do...

Writing FeedbackLogie Thanh - Nov 15, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The impact AI has on our day to day lives essay, peer edit my essay <3

2 - Who is the author? Prior to using the citation, kindly inform the reader of the name of the...

Writing Feedbacknathanmak24 - Nov 15, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Motivation letter for the University of Padua - Management for Sustainable Firms

NEW - Hi, I'm writing a motivation letter for the University of Padua. Can someone give me directions? This is really...

LettersTakodundua - Nov 14, 2023 -
The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other count

2 - The summary overview is incomplete. It should represent a more summative presentation of the image over at least 3...

Writing FeedbackAnnaAlysia - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
How studying in your chosen specialization will help you achieve your goals? MM - Mahidol University

2 - The main problem with this essay is that you do not speak in complete sentences. It is almost as...

Graduatemjsty - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
SOP for Parsons School of Design, M.P.S in Communication Design

2 - The reviewer is not interested in your immigrant background. He could care less about that as the focus of...

Graduatejonamon - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Dec 10, 2023
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

2 - May Ii ask where you got the reference for the underground network? There is no such indicator in the...

Writing FeedbackKhoiNguyen - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Motivation Letter for the Master in Computer Science (Machine Intelligence) at ETH Zurich

NEW - I am applying for the Master's program in Computer Science, specialized in Machine Intelligence, offered by ETH Zürich because...

LettersFrancesco Bondi - Nov 13, 2023 -
What are the causes of criminals committing more crimes upon being released from prison and solution

2 - The thesis statement and writer's opinion is well developed in this essay. The topic is clearly restated, along with...

Writing Feedbackductam06 - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
short and long term academica and professional in SOP

2 - Since you are being asked for your long and short term academic goals, you should feel free to mention...

Graduateshaimkibria - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Masters in Neuroscience - Motivational letter for Neurasmus

2 - The motivational letter is going around in circles. You have missed the point of the motivational letter. It is...

GraduateHaileLeo - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
What is your motivation to apply for UWC?

2 - I do not believe that you are responding to the question. You have delivered your community participation background. However,...

UndergraduateAfag Mamedova - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
talking about cyberbullying the effects and what kids go through

2 - Cyberbullying is the act of bullying someone in cyberspace. It is not the place where the bullying takes...

Writing Feedbackmyra95 - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
How Technology affects us

2 - The thesis paragraph has a solid base, but lacks the actual presentation of the discussion topic. That is what...

Writing FeedbackIsabellaaaa - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
Motivational letter for CERN Summer Student Programme: revision ideas

2 - You do not need to mix your academic history into the motivational letter. The one thing that a motivational...

Lettersniyar - Nov 11, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
Write a definition paragraph of about 150 words to address the following questions: What is freedom?

2 - The essay is more focused on why people want freedom as opposed to defining what freedom is. The question...

Writing Feedbackkimyun_05 - Nov 11, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
china's one child policy has been carried out successfully

2 - 129 words is an unacceptable number of words for a task 1 presentation. It does not meet the minimum...

Writing Feedbacktuanh24 - Nov 10, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
TASK 1 - percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, town, rural areas

2 - Incorrect sentence structure. You are indicating that only 2 years are to be compared in the image. However,...

Writing Feedbackjackhoang - Nov 10, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
FIT Admissions Essay - Undergraduate - Fashion Design

2 - You cannot focus on your qualifications that will make you an excellent candidate for FIT alone. You also need...

Undergraduatechloieroupe - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
The Benefits of curb as a Waste Diversion Program in the City of Peoria

2 - This reference should come later in the opinion paper. Possibly in the 2nd or 3rd paragraph. You have...

Research PapersRborquez6500 - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
Definition paragraph . Define the word ' solidarity ' and give your own perspective

2 - I think you meant to refer to "community" as in the place where the solidarity is taking place?...

Writing FeedbackLOIDAT - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
UBC Personal Profile - What is important to you? And why? "Photography"

3 - @Holt Hi, is there a way to private message you on here? Not here, but you may email: essayforum.com+holt@gmail.com...

Undergraduateyooogiis - Nov 6, 2023Mav47 - Dec 3, 2023
Motivation letter for International Master's program in Neuroscience (NeuroBIM)

3 - Thank you for your feedback, I will revise the essay accordingly, but about my scientific publication, since I will...

Lettersminhsym1341 - Nov 5, 2023minhsym1341 - Nov 9, 2023
Happiness levels increased in developing nations compared to declining levels in developed one

2 - Your prompt restatement did not include the basis for the happiness of both sectors, which is economic growth (financual...

Writing Feedbackhuyenmy2612 - Nov 5, 2023Holt - Nov 21, 2023
IELTS task 2 - the most important environmental problems

2 - Do not focus on a particular country or form of governance. This is a generalized discussion topic so...

Writing Feedbackjjwon - Nov 5, 2023Holt - Nov 21, 2023
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