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IELTS 2: Different views about whether teachers should give their students assignments or not

3 - Further explanation for P2 'Furthermore...view about school' will make this reason more convincible, why asking children to do homework...

Writing Feedbacktrangta0807 - Feb 14, 2023nightrain - Mar 1, 2023
Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment?

3 - Modern way of transaction via social networks may not a strong argument. Because online transaction based on e-banking system...

Writing Feedbackquoctinhdk25 - Feb 14, 2023Dat Nguyen - Feb 19, 2023
Improving Further - GKS - G Korean Language Study Plan

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the help. I'll improve myself....

ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 14, 2023Okjanu10 - Feb 15, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (topic : international aids to poor countries)

3 - @Holt I wrote the essay with 2 reasons in 2 different paragraphs. I don't really understand your comment about...

Writing Feedbackdathao - Feb 14, 2023dathao - Feb 15, 2023
WRITING TASK 1: Police budget sources and their use in 2017 and 2018

2 - This is a failing task 1 essay. The major problems I found here have to do with C+C and...

Writing FeedbackPnnm604092 - Feb 13, 2023Holt - Feb 14, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the UK

2 - Rewrite this essay because you are definitely over the word count for the 20 minute writing time frame. You...

Writing Feedbackhnathu - Feb 13, 2023Holt - Feb 14, 2023
Student Council - a situation that demonstrates your ability to develop new relationships

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. At first, I thought the point of the question was how can I...

Scholarshipusksblm315 - Feb 13, 2023usksblm315 - Feb 14, 2023
The proportion of jobless women in 4 different countries of Britain in 2013 and 2014

2 - Do not forget that the task 1 essay always uses plural word references. None of the information that is...

Writing Feedbacksomeoneishere - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 24, 2023
IELTS 2: Country is already rich, any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier

2 - You have tendency to be highly verbose in your writing. Using over complicated sentence presentations that could be better...

Writing Feedbackd2507 - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 13, 2023
Essay about educational policy which favor certain subjects

2 - The prompt restatement is slightly incorrect. The first presentation, which you are restating does not indicate that the government...

Writing FeedbackNamLeHanoi - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 13, 2023
Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system

2 - Avoid exaggerations in the prompt restatement. This paragraph in particular must be as true to the original presentation...

Writing Feedbackkesky101 - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 13, 2023
IELTS 1: The given diagram demonstrates the figure for shops closing and opening from 2011 to 2018

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your constructive comment!...

Writing Feedbackanhnhat - Feb 12, 2023anhnhat - Feb 16, 2023
Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through online learning - pros and cons

2 - While some people truly type quite fast and could manage to click off a series of sentences within the...

Writing Feedbacksomeoneishere - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 12, 2023
IELTS Students who gave a ''very good'' rating to the resources

4 - @rishabhk4896 thank you so much <3...

Writing Feedbackxuanmai2911 - Feb 12, 2023xuanmai2911 - Feb 13, 2023
The percentages of four recycled materials, namely paper, glass, aluminium and plastic

3 - There are lots of grammar mistakes in your essay I can barely understand your essay at some point because...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 12, 2023Panjasrose - Feb 26, 2023
The bar chart below gives information about four countries' spending habits of shopping on consumer

2 - An examiner would consider this task 1 essay under developed because it contains only the minimum word count number....

Writing Feedbackmoonsun06_56 - Feb 11, 2023Holt - Feb 12, 2023
Reasons to choose Waterloo and Computer engineering, educational goals & interest in chosen program

3 - @Holt Thank you so much Holt!...

Undergraduatesami21 - Feb 11, 2023sami21 - Feb 11, 2023
Writing task 1: Top seven movie genres from 1995 to 2005

2 - 235 is considered an overwritten task 1 report. It is impossible to complete this type of long form analysis...

Writing Feedbackdominhhieupro69 - Feb 11, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
Management position - scholarship to contribute to the organisation's human development needs

2 - This is an incorrect response to the question. A proper response will show how the applicant has assessed his/her...

ScholarshipTutu000 - Feb 11, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
The rise in the production of consumer items leads to the damage of the natural environment

3 - I think the essay is very well written but most of the sentences are in informal language, like cause...

Writing Feedbackwho know - Feb 11, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 11, 2023
Essay about whether technology has made shopping today easier or not.

2 - The opening statement is acceptable but could use improvements in relation to the effectiveness of the restatement and opinion....

Writing FeedbackThanhvinhtran - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The role of constructing free libraries in town.

2 - You should "render" your position at the start of the essay to meet the task accuracy requirement for a...

Writing Feedbackjeangrrr - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
IELTS Writing task 1 - Museum Maps

4 - You did a great job keeping the word count around 200. The numbers included in the bulk, are outstanding...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 10, 2023someoneishere - Feb 12, 2023
Technology inventions making people socially less interactive

3 - I think this essay is overdone and you need to understand the essay type prior to plan your essay....

Writing Feedbackthanhtammm - Feb 10, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 11, 2023
Free time on my smartphone - Writing task 2: Direct question

2 - Okay, you just needed to write up a simple opinion paper in this case. Something that quickly, but clearly...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
An underprivileged community - Australian award Scholarship preferred choices

3 - @holt Thanks for the review, I need a wake-up call and you just gave me. Appreciated....

ScholarshipAhmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023Ahmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023
A poem about being a dreamer (01/23/23)

2 - Being given the opportunity to use a freestyle poem writing method did not help this essay. The subjects per...

Poetryetherealil - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
Ielts Writing Task 1: The supplied line graph indicates the consumption of beef, lamb and fish

2 - Make it a practice to use at least 2 sentences for your summary overview. This will help create a...

Writing FeedbackTommy Jasper - Feb 9, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
The annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services of Americans

2 - The presentation tends to be confusing in terms of sentence idea presentation. This is caused by the incorrect sentence...

Writing Feedbackhuukim - Feb 9, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
Rich countries often give financial aid to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty

2 - 323 words would not be easily achieved in an actual test. Not if you are aiming for properly developing...

Writing Feedbackmariachiarafico - Feb 9, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
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